A (unnamed) human arrives in the fields of Equestria, luckily enough a brony. He comes into their world with the eventual realization that he's a little different than back home. He's stronger, faster, more agile, and he has some -ahem- more interesting abilities. As he goes through the days debating with himself on whether or not he even wants to go home, an uneasy feeling sweeps through him as though there were more to his story. He goes through his days trying to figure out what exactly is going on and why he was here.
Chapters (11)
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Too lazy to read comic.
Sounds good, so I'll just put up this comment and like it
. Oh yeah... I am now the first like, comment and view. Maybe I'll be the first favorite
This looks good so far. I'll be keeping an eye on this
DAMN YOU! DAMN YOU TO HELL! i'm sorry, it's just; everyywhere i look, i see stories and fanfics that are god only knows how much better than mine.....i'm such a terrible writer. don't pity me, i fucking hate being pited. anyways, great start. i will now like your story and i will be watching you. P.S. : thank you, you have inspired me to revise and change my chapters so that they look more realistic
The Maste of Madness, signing off
Interesting I like this please continue.
881311 Will do, and thank you.
881264 I don't know what you're talking about man, I read your story, I thought it was fantastic. Well I read the first chapter, but I'll read the rest soon. 880866 Why thank you, I will return the favor by keeping my eye on you as well. 880694 XD Fantastic!
I like this, although there seems to be a less than adequate amount of freaking the hell out. There are also a lot of capitalization errors. I can live with that though.
886402 The capitalization errors I didn't notice, I'll try to fix it
As you read through, he mellows down slowly. 
As for the freaking out, he does, just not the way most people would expect. If you notice, the closer to the beginning you get in the story, the more smiley and excited he gets.
Hmm... My clopfic senses are tingling...
HumanXRainbow Dash?
Who knows...
888167 Maybe. Maybe.
888190
More likely HumanXPonyville. That is, until his pelvic bone disintegrates.
888629 I don't know what you mean.
I'm sure they're all perfectly capable of controlling themselves... or at least able to long enough for him to heal.
I suspect that he might be being followed by slenderman...
895582 You mean Slendermane.
895614 How bout slenderman AND slendermane, they are brothers.
895616
Holy crap that's a scary thought.
895650 Yes, I have many scary thoughts.
895654 Me too!
Hmm....very interesting...I will see where this goes. Keep up the good work!
895732 Why thank you.
895771
No problem my good sir
i like this story
895982
I'm glad you enjoy it!
Holy wall of text batman!
A story to read!
897695
t'is indeed. 
897712 I'm glad you think so.
Amazing story.... so did dash find out the relationship between sweat and being attracted? Is she abusing that power?
Eiither way I want to now live in ponyville.
EDIT: For some reason RD and -unknown-'s kiss have been all I could think about for all of today. Probably cause I'm a brony and I wish I could go to Equestria. The way it should have played out in my head is to where there's the kiss and then afterwards -unknown- ask's RD to hang out a bit and enjoy the moment. Just a personal opinion.
Wow, most typing I've done on my tablet evar..
910338 I'm glad you like the story, and for your question... She sort of knew about the effect of his scent after the first time, and shrugged it off. After the arm wrestling however it's effects became obvious to her. As for abusing the power, that's a matter of opinion
Oh and he actually did hang out with her during the party; RD never struck me as one to sit still, but definitely is one to party.
To xscar... how often will these be coming out? This is one of the stories I seem to truly enjoy... probably also was in my head because I've had an unrealised crush on dash.
Sorry unsure of how2quote,
913204 No problem man, and I'll try and post every few days. I have a ton of free time to write, I just need the motivation. On the bright side, comments like yours give me said motivation.
895614 no its slendercolt
938162 All's well, and equally frightening.
938170 amen to that
938175 Thanks for the fave by the way.
938195 no problem
o wtf? o god.. O god! O GOD!!! a slender man has me hel-............
938204 Ah, crap Mcnuggets... Couldn't save him in time... Wait what was that noise? ...Dear Celectia! I'm so bucked! No, no please don'-
938204 938241
Ok, the author and some other dude are killed by a slenderman/mane/colt, and I'm felling insane so I'm gonna go maul his ass.
Okay gear check:
My Twin Yin/Yang schimatares, check!
Golden magnum (from Perfect Dark,) check!
My Gravity gun/portal gun hybrid, check!
That cool goggle thingy from the splinter cell series, check!
Okay, see ya when I get back. (leaves).
938679 Holy... That's an arsenal to overthrow governments! All I got is the Ray sphere from InFAMOUS. By the way, I'm not dead, I just woke up in the middle of nowhere. I'm missing a shoe, and holding my passport and an airline ticket to Puerto Rico...
938747 Then what happend to that other dude?
938832 With slender-folk there's no telling.
938853 well might as well look for the poor sap.
*Hear raspy breath coming from nearby*
...Fucken Regenerators.
939180 sorry about text tower up there. I try and divide it at key points, but I like long paragraphs. Mostly because it makes it easier to remember just where I was in reading it. I will try and keep them shorter though.
dash: oh look hes unconscious hummmmm should i help him or rape him
941298
The logic is infallible!
-in head- Hmm... an alert.. should I check it or read another story? I made a bad choice for reading another story. OT: The unnamed human is dating dash? COOL!!!! Now he needs a name. I am pleased with your work yet again and I love your chunk of text style. I'm OCD in he fact that either it's a wall of text or it's a double-spaced entry, though I prefer the former. Write moar.
When he started doing flips and stuff I literally thought, "My spider sense is tingling!" And then you mention Spiderman.
944221
I feel so honored! He has gone this far without one, he'll think of something.
I'm glad you enjoy my story, I try hard to make the story enjoyable.
Also, the original idea for that scene came from the new spideman movie, and spiderman 3, mixed with the construction sight from "The Mysterious Mare-do-well".
966456 It is possible, but I would hate to spoil anything.
GOOD LORD MAKE MOAR
966658 I will! I promise!
967093 I WEEL, I'm glad you like it.
Ahh, finnaly back. The Regenerator was easy to kill, I simply kept shooting him long after killing him screaming "KILL IT! KILL IT WITH FIRE!!!" Anyways enough rambaling, what could Celly be hideing? Is the mystery stallion telling the truth? Will Blueblood stop being a pompeous f(yay)er? Will I stop asking questions? Find out on the next episode of drago-err I meant, next chapter of spice on the wind.