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marielity


Age: 25 Gender: Male Nation: Germany Interests: Biking, Swimming, RPG, Drawing, Crafting, Writing, Magic the Gathering, etc...

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The Highschooler Simon has a tough live and slowly loses his will to live. He is all on his own, until one night he is accidently pulled to equestria...without memorys but now equipped with untapped powers. Will he learn to control it and find a way back?

While trying to find back his memorys he builds up close relationships to his new friends in ponyville, but not everything works out fine and problems arise.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 71 )

Sweet! I've just received my free minecraft giftcode!

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really? really?! minecraft?
i bet you didn't even read the story

Really lovely story!

Please continue. Whatever the dislikes are, i´m sure they´re just jealous about your skills. :rainbowdetermined2:

Greets, Jumper

why can't he just shut up damn:ajsleepy:

i love it and this can turn in to something interesting:twilightsmile::raritywink:

Famous last words: "What will happen when I touch it?"

I'm not making fun. It's just that the phrase stuck out to me. Haha. :raritywink:

STAY OUT OF MY SHED plz no god no dont have that

i feel so sorry for Simon he try's to help but is always push aside like he is in the way....:fluttercry:

stay out of my shed? :unsuresweetie:

Three down, three to go before suicide becomes a option. I like where this fic is going (yes i am serious and yes i am a horrible person)

were'd he go :derpyderp2::rainbowhuh::applejackconfused::pinkiegasp:
good storie so far keep up the good work :twilightsmile:
i can't wait till the next part + i wan't to know where simon went :twilightangry2::flutterrage:

at first i was like 'this is odd' then i was like 'wtf is this shit' and now im like I WANT MOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAR
so in simple terms i diddnt like it but that chapter won me over. anyway SHUT UP AND TAKE MY THUMBS UP

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This weekend. Don't worry^^

wat

You need a prereader

I can see where this is going to end... With many small Centaurs, the mythological beings half human and half horse.
You should include Lyra as well, it'll be fun! :D
One small thing: why do you keep writing "memorys", "ponys" and "centalot"? It's "memories", "ponies" and "Canterlot".

Why would you ever want to leave? :pinkiegasp:

Amazing that is all i can say the plot is believable the characters are easy to relate to and all in all i think you have done a good job with the whole setting you haven't made him like the typical person who is either very scared, very exited or very aggressive or worse a gary sue/ brony sue. He is an average guy who struggles with magic and is socilay akward around girls. Me and my mates are looking forward to seeing you update soon keep up the great work.


:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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Thanks for all the likes! I'm still working on the next chapter, but I got quite a lot to do at work at the moment and I also have to continue writing my Serious Sam Crossover (which should be ready for update this evening). I'll also be on holidays after next week and I won't be able to udate in this time. I'm sure, that I'll get the two Updates for Sthemata finished just before departure.

:ajbemused::ajbemused::ajbemused::ajbemused::ajbemused::ajbemused::ajbemused::ajbemused::ajbemused::ajbemused::ajbemused::ajbemused::ajbemused::ajbemused::ajbemused::ajbemused::ajbemused::ajbemused::ajbemused::ajbemused:

Twenty emoticons exactly cant strip me know fuckers

HEY HEY HEY STAY OUT OF MY SHED

HEY HEY HEY STAY OUT OF MY SHED :flutterrage:

i seriously think you should focus on this fic you have much more freedom and serious Sam was a crap game being honest your character and plot here is excellent :pinkiehappy:. please update soon looking forward to chapter 9 :yay:

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Crap game? You can't be serious :rainbowhuh:

I'm too much of a fan of the series to abandon it and it really makes fun working on that fic. It also helps to focus on an other story from time to time.

T.T i was nearly crying

you need to update this i understand that you are doing a crossover but this story has gained severe popuality and it would be a shame of we only get an update once every 4 months

rd is my favorite and she is really starting to piss me off here, she is being an extreme bitch in this fanfiction...:ajbemused::ajbemused::ajbemused:

Please fix all the capitalization errors...
Also, the grammar is cringe inducing.

More more more moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooore!!!!

Finally I managed to update the story! For those of you who could wait so long a big sorry and thank you from me. For the newcomers: Welcome and have fun reading.

Again my privat life got quite busy again (I won't bother with any details), but that's not the main reason for the delay. Maybe some of you know this situation: You know what you want to write, and you always tell yourself to continue writing, but whenever you try to get down a word you are suddenly distracted by everything else and you just can't focus on writing at all. I have been writing on these 2 chapters ( 8.5[the clop in seperated story] and 9) for months and finally got over it today. As mentioned before the story is far from finished and I will definetly bring it to an end someday. But I fear that I might get stuck again while writing.

That's why I ask for someone, who is crazy enough to become my prereader and help me getting over these gaps. Some people commented my writing style and I'm more then willing to improve the quality of my texts (Please keep in mind that english isn't my main language so have a heart and keep the errors you find :P)

Anyway. Have fun reading and keep posting!

FINALY UPDATE
IT'S BEEN YEARS...

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So not true! It was just about half a year! :twilightblush:

1771868might as well
this was just about to go off my Fav list
I dont like (seemingly) abbandond stories:twilightangry2:

Well, it seems that you're not dead. Welcome back Sir, also,
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If you need help editing then I'll be happy to help. :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by dark hope deleted Dec 12th, 2012

If you want help just ask me and I will gladly help.:pinkiehappy:

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