Currently on a brief hiatus. I'll let you guys still read it but I'm picking up a different story for now, I'll get back to this when I can.
After riding through a portal, Roger is transported to Equestria, with the riding gear on his back, his CRF450X, and a backpack with a few trusty tools inside, Roger stares into a world that he does not know and ventures off to find out where he is and a way to get back home. Along his journey he makes a shocking discovery that he is alone in the fact that he is the only human but isn't in the way that he is surrounded by talking ponies...Will Roger find a way home though the misadventures of MLPFIM? Take a seat and find out!
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I love It love the part when he said it looked like she was shitting out a rainbow.
I like this story, makes me think a bit about the book; zen and the art of motorcycle maintenance.
Mostly because of the motorcycle but also a bit due to your way of writing.
I'm a fellow petrol head with a fully decked out '89 KX250, so this appeals to me... ALOT
You sir, have earned a fav
Nice joke about the nyan cat thing. That was the funniest thing I've heard in a while. I'm not much of a fan of cliff hangers so please get back to this soon, the last chapter was way too short. But yes very good story.
Thanks for all the positive comments guys!
I usually write every day and I should have a few chapters by the end of the weekend cranked out!
~HondaRider92
weeeeel shit first and this is kinda good ... if not a biiiit rushed ... just i wittle bit
Dude your teasing my notifications with this shit...
I'm sorry about that man, I didn't figure anyone would be online at 2 am lol. I'll keep the publishing and un publishing to a minimum, I'm still trying to figure out the system for writing and saving and editing, I just learned of the save button (durh) so hopefully I won't be blowing up everyone's inbox now. sorry about the notifications lol
Twilight's gonna be mad!
I originally clicked on your profile on a really crappy trollfic comment because you ride motorcycles as well. I've never seen anyone else on here that rides dirtbikes. I was pleasantly surprised to find that you had a story going, and a really good one at that. Well, I guess anyone who clicks this story is going to ride bikes as well, otherwise the picture wouldn't have lured them in.
Can't wait for the next one!
That bit with the endo 180 a few chapters back, if you are actually able to do that, then I'm impressed. I can wheelie, but I can't pull an endo yet. I'm only 13. But that's no excuse. Let me rephrase that. I haven't had enough practice.
It's past the point you said in the previous chapter for the new one to come out.
Lol thanks for the compliment, I CANNOT do any endo's or long wheelies in person, but that doesn't mean I can't fantasize about it through my writing. ;) I just focus on having a good time and only displaying my strengths when needed and when feel that I can control my bike and myself to the best of my abilities. Learn your limit and ride there until you can push further. Only recently I have graduated to a big bike and it's a whole other world when you get on a 450 from an older 250. If you do the right things to a 450 such as head pipe and a new muffler, the right sprockets for gearing, jetting, tires, suspension, and slight cam work, you will suddenly have a rocket underneath you haha. Im running a hot cam's setup in my 450 I'm fairly certain its a stage 1 cam, I'll have an fmf megabomb here soon, I have a Dubach racing or a DRD pipe in life just as It says in the story, 13 tooth front sprocket and a 51 on the back, I have my personal suspension setup such as compression and rebound and as well as a custom shim stack arrangement and top spring set. on the honda forks there caps at the tops of the forks have a small spring that's about 4 inches long and are stiffer than a mother fucker, there is also a small valve assembly at the top end of the fork with the smaller spring set so the shims on those valves were changed as well, if I remember right they were race tech springs, I replaced them with some softer ones and I left the main springs in the forks alone. (I had a little help from my old man with this, because the first time you tear into a newer fork set you'll go..."What in the hell is this??) lol, and If you want to go faster in the woods it takes suspension work, because if your bike doesn't handle worth a damn you won't be able to go faster, it's a simple as that. Anyways glad to see that I have some fellow riders out there, I haven't had a whole lot of time to get on the computer and write a chapter or two out because my work schedule has picked up recently but fret not, chapter 5 will be posted sometime around sunday waaayyy early in the morning or mid to late monday.
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I'm sorry friend, Im doing my best, tomorrow I will have the chance to sit down and write for a few hours, check back tomorrow night or sunday night and I promise I'll have a chapter by then my good sir, until then have a stache as a token of gratitude that you like my story!
HondaRider92
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It's okay, I was just joking. But glad to be informed.
Chapter 5 is now done and Ill be working on chapter 6 tomorrow. Expect it to be there around the same time as tonight guys!! Sorry for the wait!!
HondaRider92
i hate short chapters. i really hope you can get some more out soon.
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this chapter isn't finished yet. it's still under construction. I posted it to save it before my computer died this morning. I got home late and Ill work on it for as long as I can stand tonight. expect it to be around or more of the same length as the other chapters (2000-4000) words. so no worries mate ill have some more material soon!
some advice, go for /'/ when typing a person's thoughts, it distinguishes them from dialogue, either that or you could just put them into italics without quotes
Blimey. People should read this for their own good! You're a brilliant writer! I'mma sit here till' you give me chapter 2.
Flutters is getting bold
Well that was unexpected. Still, ain't complainin'.
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'man titties'
Do you live in China or India?
In case of emergencies, Fluttershy may be used as a confusion device.
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are you talking about because of how early or late my posting usually is? Lol I get home late and I usually post my stuff right around midnight or 1am before I go to bed, hence why it appears like I post my stuff at odd hours haha. Eastern timezone right here in the US of Mother Fucking A baby!! There isn't any other place I'd rather be.
Updated chapter 8 guys, i'll have it finished tomorrow night, mind you it's not proofread or anything so bear with me
NOOOOOO I JUST STARTED READING THIS AND NOW I HAVE TO WAIT!!!! NOOOOOOOO!!!!
You sir are getting a thumbs up
Skillet FTW!
More!
Part of me wants him to kick Rainbow's ass, the other part wants there to just be an awkward confrontation... whatever happens, I'm sure it'll be good.
Well this is going to be fun.
Also, here's something to fill up the comments section. I hope you like it, otherwise tough luck.
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Make up you're mind already, is The next chapter released yet or not?! I'm tired of my favorites telling me about an ulegit update.
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I was trying to help someone edit their story so I took down one of my chapters to replace it and edit his story and that deal went sour so, I am sorry about that, I'll do my best to make sure I do a complete chapter. the problem with me is that I get home at 10 pm most nights and I can only write so much in a few hours before falling asleep with my laptop on my chest. I try to write whenever I can but due to working 2 jobs 6 days a week and going to school full time it puts a lot of stress on me. So I am sorry, just try and bear with me alright. Thanks,
~HondaRider92
Curious question: why would anyone need a gun while riding?
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I'll explain that in the final version of the chapter
1278667Ah... It just seemed odd to me, all I carry with me is a pocket knife, a pair of pliers, a crescent and some old cereal boxes with some gasket goo for repairs (that bike of mine always needs repairs
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1281747 I put a revolver in my pack every time I go for a ride on my dirt bike alone for both Protection purposes and also for fun shooting things practicing my aiming. So I'm not shocked that he had a gun
1290320Ah, here in Australia it's kinda hard to justify having a pistol on you when your doing a recreational activity. We just run over the snakes and wash off the spiders when we're done (me and my bike always come out looking like a spiders lunch)
Good to see the final version is out, i like it, you have a gun for protection or recreative purposes?
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do you mean in real life? I shoot recreationally and competitively
thanks and look for a new chapter to appear sometime next week!!
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I'l wait for it to pop up.
O.o PINKIE SENSE!?
That would be very intresting.
it hurt fluttershy oh man its so going to die
HNNG! Cliffhanger D:
Take the 'h' out of "Ghasp!!" , and turn 'observing' into 'observant'. S'all I spotted, good effort!
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I have that book. It's, IMO, one of the greatest books I've ever read.
sweet.