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We all know how the final battle against Tirek went: the Mane Six unlock the mysterious chest, gain the Rainbow Power, and use it to insta-kill him.
Well, what if the chest had given them something a little more...epic?
Special thanks to jeray2000 for proofreading and editing!
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Fantastic story, I was expecting something completely different to the golum!
A few errors here and there, but over all 9.2/10
~~Flutter-Shy~~
Great story, but it could have been better, I mean why didn't Golem channel Pegasus magic and fly, or maybe use some Mane 6-esque attacks like a 'Party Cannon' attack, or a 'Super Rainbow Punch,' or a magic song, but other than that it's almost perfect.
4623178
Thanks! What, in your opinion, was the best part?
4623207 Ooh, tough one, I guess I'd have to say when the eight piece of rock falls from the sky and hits Tirek, man was the bastard shocked
Nice story. Just one thing I noticed though.
A bit repetitive right there.
What the hell is that golem? What type? And is it of equestrian origin.
4624802
It's kind of implied that the golem was created by the chest.
4624816 I see, well good story and you have had your plead answerd by me
4622761 No.
Well that was...intense. I liked it!
That was fucking awesome.
Even so, you know what would've been even more epic?
....
If that box had unleashed Godzilla. Picture that.
5004348 or Goku with his ssj god tranformasion
Painful.
6153834
Oh quite painful INDEED...
5004348 Well, actually, on fanfiction.net, there is a fanfic about Tirek fighting Godzilla. It's called "Twilight's Kingdom Alternate Ending (Godzilla vs Tirek)."
5160404 That would be cool, but if Goku fought all of Equestria's inhabitants combined, he would still demolish them in his base form (whether you think the god ki theory applies or not).