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Rewritten on February 27th, 2015.
Big Mac wants to go out and do something. More specifically, he'd like to go on a date, but when Applejack finds out some of the details, she drags him to a fair and Big Mac ends up dating Fleetfoot. Will this date end well?
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FINALLY!
You just spun a random character wheel and shipped it, didn't you?
Uh oh, I think I screwed up this story really badly. I don't want to end up on a "worst of" list, so please read my blog post for the other concerns I have. Yeah, I might have thin skin at times, but at least I know when to ask for help.
4544153 It was based off of issues 9 and 10 of the IDW comic, at least that was the intention.
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As Manaphy said, it's from an official comic.
You... you must conyinue this! I have never read a story this simple, yet so sweet in my life!
I have a warm, fuzzy feeling just from reading it, and it got rid of my head ache, you have a favorite from me dear writer.
4544289 continue, my mistake.
This seems like a decent story. I liked how you explained how Mac felt for Fleet at the end. Good luck with future stories.
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Well I certainly don't mind seeing the random ship here and there.
Reading through it I was initially unimpressed at how little buildup there was, and then I though of the last date I went on. It wasn't interesting or memorable but it was enjoyable. This gives me the same feeling. If you pen the second date I'll read it. Sometime a simple story is good. It makes you appreciate the point of it.
This is.... SURPRISINGLY good.
It does feel like you spun a random character wheel and shipped it. The fact that it worked this well speaks to your talent as a writer.
That's it. You've earned a follow.
It's funny, I've always thought of them as a couple...
It was a little heavy on the telling. Too much for me to enjoy it fully, actually.
good story i liked that you referenced the comic
Hmm, pretty cute story.
But like everyone else has said: Show, don't tell.
Yup, saving lives is nothing to brag about
Keep going....
4552885 Ask a seasoned firefighter.
It's cute, that's all I can say. Nothing too special about it.
Salad Paradise?
Salad Paradise?
SALAD PARADISE?!
Oooh. Nice story.
Big Mac, the prettiest mare in ponyville.
4840637 This was one of my first stories, and somehow that typo managed to escape being noticed for so long!
Good job on finding it, because I sure missed it.
Would love if you expanded on this, but as it is it is good.
This was gooood. I used the search function to find FleetMac shipping, and this was the only story that came up. I hope to find more soon, as I've wanted to see it expanded on after seeing Fleetfoot daydreaming in the comic.
5979033 FleetMac definitely could use more stories.
Cripes, I just noticed how old the few comments before this were. Over half a year and no one's commented? Blarg!
Hm not to much happened here :/
... Sequel?
Sweet Celestia that was so sweet. And also, good thing Tealove wasn't around.
Is she talking about what happened back in the Rainbow Falls
I will say this is a pretty interesting story so big Mac feeling that something is missing and it looks like the fair is going on again him and Applejack went to the fair and she wants to help him but before she could Big Mac saw fleetfoot and it looks like they know each other after the last Fair but it looks like she's more professional this time but also shy kind of so both of them kind of decided to have dinner with each other and probably get to know each other and without all the craziness happening and somehow it turned out pretty well for them and they seem to like each other and what's that they said their goodbyes but somehow they will see each other more often again this is a pretty interesting story keep up the good work