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Velvet_Divan


An English major, a furry, a geek with a tempestuous swirling cauldron of hobbies and interests, now here to spin some yarns for you.

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Did you ever wonder what Rarity went through preparing for the Sisterhooves Social race? Wonder no more! Rarity wades through mud, grape juice, egg yolk, and a certain freckled farmer's attempts at encouragement, all in the name of sisterhood.

While we all know how it turned out, you may not know how close Rarity came to calling it quits during the harrowing ordeal. Only love for her sister could help her stay the course.

(Featured on Equestria Daily June 8th, 2014. )

(The Living Library Player Society has done a live reading of this story! You can listen to it here, http://www.tllps.tk/public/readings/Sisterhooves_Social_Deleted_Scenes.mp3 and check out the rest of their site too. http://www.tllps.tk/ )

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Funny, because today I thought about asking you, if you're writing something recently or just focus on For Sale by Owner :pinkiehappy: Anyway, I'm always very happy to see something new from you! And the concept of this oneshot seems to be really promising. Time to read! :rainbowkiss:

Wow, I wish they could've shown this in the actual episode! This would've been great to show Rarity's training and how she overcomes the things she despises doing. Excellent job and very we'll written! :twilightsmile:

Very well written, what a good job! :raritywink: Good to see how Rarity's training went, to do whatever it takes to show how much she loves Sweetie Belle. Together, they are apple pie.

This was cute and very enjoyable.

That was.. Beautiful! Especially the ending.

Together, we are a real rattlesnake! :pinkiecrazy:

y u have no cover art, when you have it on EQD?

4516628 EQD provided that cover art without any intervention from me; it isn't mine.

Awesome story! Thanks for the fun read! Take a gander at this:
Applejack nodded, chuckling. "'Xactly. Now, you've had a little breather, and Ah have some bad news. We've gotta run through the entire course again, with you covered in mud."

I always pictured AJ saying "Eggsactly"!

Rarity's “Oh!” carried so much hurt, Applejack may as well have yanked out half the hairs in her tail at once. “How could you! That's playing right into her abandonment of me for your family!”

Got to there, then had to stop. I just can't.

4518584 Never felt good about that line myself. Tried something new with it just now. Thanks for giving the story a look, at least.

4476369 :rainbowhuh: I thought AJ and Pinkie was ApplePie?

4519412 In this episode Applejack uses Applepie as a phrase for when sisters love each other. Or something like that.

“Y'know Ah never told you, but at the Gala? Fancy Pants told me he thought your dress was the most gorgeous one there.”

And another display of AJ´s troll-jutsu :ajsmug:
On a side note: was she lying about that?

4519412 They are, just taking a quote from the episode. :twilightsmile:

4519727 I know, I was making a joke.

Read this, Loved it. Favorited it.

4599695 Glad to hear you enjoyed it, :)

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You are very welcome :twilightsmile:

I like the story. It's hard to say if Rarity breaks character by being so humble and to Applejack no less but I still like the pace of the story and character interactions. Some dialogue could have been handled by narration but it's okay for there to be more dialogue. 7/10

Now that was just a perfect companion to the episode.

5600849 Glad you think so, :)

Oh my gosh the ending was awesome

Doesn't sound much like an accusation fic...

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