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Sam Cole


Just a veteran writing love stories for fun. If you want help or just to chat, hit me up, I always love to meet new people.

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Just another glorious day in Ponyville, till the nanite infection is activated. Now it's up to Rarity and an infected Twilight to save the world. This will prove easier said than done though as old friends, enemies, and teachers come out of the wood work, and they all want to shut down the intrepid pair. But have n/ ...detgruhfihvdsivbhdsfh
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Insubordinate data terminated. Run Program: Imperium.

Credit for the cover pic goes to Thattagen of here and Deviant art. Be sure to like, fave, and follow.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 242 )

that was wow. The idea is great:pinkiegasp:

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I'll have to read this later.

Excelent, let me just grab my purse,”

*Excellent

Found references so far:
Star Wars
Fuckin' WinRAR... (Seriously, why not 7-Zip?)
Playboy
Redtube
Was there any I missed? Probably.

Interesting, please continue.

4431575 Dr. Horse = Dr. House from House, M.D.

This first chapter made me chuckle more than a few times.

I like this very much so far.

This is really interesting. I must have more!
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4431575 I didn't find a Star Wars references. Also, I prefer WinRAR over 7-Zip ANY DAY! Insult me, I could give less of a crap. Although for Mac I use Zipeg.

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The original design was theorized by Dr Hans Olo, head of molecular genetics engineering at the University of Beaklin, Griffony.

The original design was theorized by Dr Hans Olo,

Dr Hans Olo

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4432111 How did I not see that? :derpytongue2:

Ponies have computers? I suppose I can understand that, AU. But ponies have Latin? It might be better to go back and ponify the name of the language.

 For the love of the Queen, no.

Queen?

Hans Olo

Does he have a pet falcon named Millenium? :pinkiehappy:

Bit confused about Fluttershy's explanation. Why not send Celestia a letter that tells her, but also tells her not to let on anything is wrong? Seems kinda like an idiot ball to do that.

Poor Twilight, she's seeming to become more and more lost by the second. Also like Rarity feeling bad at being her 'master'. I'm really eager to see where this is going to go.

“Buck me…” Rarity groaned.
“Request acknowledged,” Twilight nodded as she turned and kicked Rarity.

BWAAHAHA!

Also... damn WINRAR! I am so liking and so favoriting this. Please update soon.

That... was... interesting.

This story is incredibly disturbing, practically makes me sick to my stomach :twilight oops:

But interesting and well written! I'm going to have to follow this one! There are a couple issues I have with the logic of the plot, but I'll withhold those until there's a bit more of the story here for me to judge.

Nice going on this chapter, really sunk in the plot hook!

4432151 If it makes you feel any better, I didn't see it, either. :rainbowderp:

Saw story description ---> this seems interesting enough
Saw author being Sam Cole ---> this is gonna be good :pinkiecrazy:
Read first chapter ---> yeah, I foresee some awesomeness in this one :pinkiecrazy::heart::pinkiecrazy:

Weird thought coming to head ---> aw man if this has clop special chapters they are gonna be interesting :twilightblush: :raritywink: :rainbowhuh:

Twilight, take a comment for me.

Invalid--

Yeah, yeah. I'll type it myself.

Command Registered.

So yeah... this fic amuses me. This has to be one of the odd ones I've seen, but I've been laughing practically the whole time. Is that wrong? I guess robot ponies are funny to me.

This operating system is classified as a nanite-augmented--

Oh, shut up. I know.

Command Registered.

...Is she always this annoying in conversation, though? And how do I get her to stop? Rarity, could you take her.. somewhere else? I need to concentrate.

Oh, alright. Twilight, let us leave this poor stallion alone and continue with our mission, hmm?

Yes, Miss Rarity.

Oh, thank Celestia.

But seriously though, great job so far. Definitely keeping tabs on this one. Sorry if I made you guys scroll a bit. :derpytongue2:

“I cannot make the decision. There are too many logical choices, all well within-”
“Oh crap, Twilight,” The waiter finally sighed, “Not this again…”

:rainbowlaugh: Oh, Twilight, computer or not you're still the same. :twilightblush:


Great job so far. You've caught my attention, I'll wait eager for more. :pinkiehappy:

Absolutely awesome to read. Good show!

Will Twilight have any of her organic parts convert to metal like in the picture? Also, the lack of free action disturbs me. I hope Twilight regains a semblance at least of her personality back. From the story we can tell it is still there, but how to set it free, if only in part, is the question. also, updates are bad. UPDATE NOTHING!!!!11!!11

I mean, dude. the last windows update slowed down my compy something fierce! Dem updates just make the operatin' system clunky!:derpytongue2:

4431575 because winrar is the one with a subscription fee, and therefore annoying popups "reminding" you to renew your subscription.

I demand that when and or if Celestia gets taken over you should have her say "Assuming Direct Control'

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Whoa.

That is one REALLY young Harrison Ford.

Being a programmer myself I am considerably interested in this story.
I am wondering though what Fluttershy's role in this is. She is very adept with computers it seems and the moment they want to send a letter to the princess she does her best to stop them. Seeing the show Celestia always receives the letters to her face so no other unicorn should be able to read it. Either Fluttershy is in on the plot of Imperium (why am I getting a hellsing millenium feeling here) or she knows about it.

I wonder what Bon Bon would say to Lyra getting infected...

The program details plans to convert several unicorns into drones for use in a coup de ta to overthrow the Princesses

It's spelled "Coup d'état." It's French, literally meaning "Blow against the state."

A very interesting idea. I'm loving it so far. Can't wait to see where it goes. :twilightsmile:

TBH, though... I'm actually a touch disappointed that we don't get to see Roboticized Twilight as per the cover image. That would be super neat, but oh well...

Still a great story. Keep it up!

Ah, this is pretty cool! It's not perfect, but it's a great idea and has potential to be a good story! I'll be following this one.

OMFG, the story had 54 likes, I pressed the like button and it bumped up to 104. Scared the :pinkiegasp: out of me

Going in my read later list until it gets ~25k words or more, or its marked as complete. Whichever comes first.

4435253 Ditto, that an I'm writing so until I'm free it's going in read later.

It hasn't been specified whether or not the nanites affect Alicorns, so I assume it doesn't,

4434971 Or maybe The real reason that they can't send a letter is because of the plot.

This is definitely an interesting idea, and after reading the first chapter I think you could actually make it work. Also, being someone who works with computers and programming a lot this fan-fic is hilarious. Also, poor Twi being infected with nanites, after seeing what nanites did in Doctor Who I am scared of what these little buggers are potentially capable of. :twilightoops:

That dark tag is very much deserved for this story. It's a pretty scary concept. Imagine this happening to a good friend of yours, and you don't know how to stop it.

Ally with windogoes.

Nanites can't exactly take over immaterial spirits.

*Alondro wins at everything* :trollestia:

Hmm this is gonna lean towards more comedy or adventure? I've been a'waiting an adventure ^^
Good job so far, got my attention and drew out a few laughs. Waiting for more.

“Search for playmare!” Pinkie cried jumping onto Fluttershy’s back and leaning in over the mare.

:facehoof::facehoof:

Really Pinkie, you said that out loud? For everypony to hear? (:pinkiehappy:) Nice reference though, and good story so far, cliche or not, can't wait for the rest of it! :yay:

Brilliant. I await more.

Interesting, strange, I'll see where this goes.

“Dr Olo merely theorized the stain used.”

"strain"

Well you have my attention, let us see what you do with it.

Definetly a favorite. :pinkiehappy:

Just another glorious day in Ponyville, till the nanite infection is activated. Now it's up to Rarity and an infected Twilight to save the world. This will prove easier said than done though as old friends, enemies, and teachers come out of the wood work, and they all want to shut down the intrepid pair. But have n/ ...detgruhfihvdsivbhdsfh
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Insubordinate data terminated. Run Program Imperium.

... What just happened?

Is this a crossover fic? Or just ropony?

-Stares at the computer screen blankly-

"... Oh damn it. They went mavrick. FFFF-"

-Stands up dramatically, swivel chair swirling away, pointing at nothing-

"Fire up projects M and Z! We got some bustin' ta do."

This is AWESOME!!!

Little scares me more than the words "nanites" and "infection" in the same sentence. Good job.

Only quibble is that I don't see why they don't send a message to celestia. She has thousands of years of political experience, I think she'd have things she'd be able to do without tipping them off. Even if she didn't, she should still be informed. Dragon mail is pretty much the most secure form of communication possible, after all.

-Old school computer screen-

>System online. Log-in required to access files
-********
>Welcome, Prime Admin 4
-Request for Prime Admin 4 to be registered as 'Vladimir'.
>Request acknowledged. Welcome, Vladimir.
-Request to access the IMPERIUM.file test subjects within PONYVILLE.location
>Request acknowledged, Vladimir. There are currently 76 units within Ponyville. Which ones would you like to observe?
>Correction; there are 75 units within Ponyville.
-Request knowledge of lost unit.
>Request acknowledged, Vladimir. Unit #01, TWILIGHTSPARKLE.unit, has boarded train #00478 to CANTERLOT.location
-Request direct access to TWILIGHTSPARKLE.unit
>Request denied. TWILIGHTSPARKLE.unit is overriding all external commands.
-Request reasoning.
>TWILGITHSPARKLE.unit is under orders from personal admin.
-Request identity of personal admin.
>Request acknowledged, Vladimir. Personal admin is MISSRARITY.entity.
-Request all possible information on MISSRARITY.entity.
>Request acknowledged. MISSRARITY.entity was entered as personal admin of TWILIGHTSPARKLE.unit at 0847 hours. At 0937 hours, MISSRARITY.entity requested upgrade to complete control of TWILIGHTSPARKLE.unit.
-Initiate alarm to all members of IMPERIUM.project. TWILIGHTSPARKLE.unit is a rogue entity. Capture at all costs, and MISSRARITY.entity is also to be captured.
>Command confirmed, Vladimir.

This is an epic idea. Why did it take this long for someone to create this idea?

This is downright brilliant!

Like, beyond brilliant.

You, sir, are clever indeed! Let's see where this goes, huh?

~Skeeter The Lurker

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