Hmm I think Belisama has finally discovered love...

Good chapter, Gotta love a little ..um.. luvin... but....bitch ditch? really? Of all the euphemisms you've used ... I think I finally found one that I don't like, That's just ... trashy. lol

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I know...

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Shaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaame, be BERRY ashamed

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I kinda like it when a girl smacks me hard enough that it knocks the kinky right out of my knappy head.

I just laughed so hard I got Dr. Pepper out my nose ...

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Good, keep it up. Pranciful prose past the foreplay is always turn-off. When it starts getting instinctual and sweaty, when the real /sex/ happens it's time to get primal and dirty and enjoy the fuck out of being the animal you are before having to put back on that mask of civility and pretense.

That was distinctly hot, but... bitch ditch? Masticating minge was odd enough, but bitch ditch? Really? That just sounds so... whore-ish.

Fantastic chapter otherwise. Just so happens that my wife is reading an erotica book while I was reading this. She got turned on, I got turned on and we... had to take a short personal break before we finished our chapters. So... THANKS bro! You helped me get laid!

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she couldn’t breath at all for a moment.

breathe

laying up against body’s body,

Bucky's

I’m really pent up up,

-1 up

Sir, reporting for duty, sir! *salutes*

Yowling with real volume now, Beliama’s tail thumped up against Bucky’s side

Typo found, sir! Letter 's' missing in 'Belisama', sir!

I am both impressed and angered by your alliteration.

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Why be angry? Alliteration always applies anti-anxiety!

5492950 Always avoid alliteration, amigo

With a lewd sounding raspberry sound,

I didn't realize that sounds could make sounds.

I think I see what you did there Kudz!
The pain in her side was ovulation. Female cats don't ovulate without sexual stimulation. The act causes it, thankfully she didn't need the barbs. Ovulation is painful enough as is!

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SWEET SHIT HOW DID YOU FIGURE THAT OUT?

**Slams head into desk repeatedly**

It was just one minor detail that was supposed be a completely throwaway detail that went unnoticed.

**Grabs Luna plushie hoping for comfort**

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I'm actually impressed.

I didn't think anybody would notice that.

Feeling aggressive, Berry Punch shoved Derpy over and then crawled up between Derpy’s legs to have herself a good look of the spread eagled pegasus. “You dirty little mare… you’ve been preening your wings to get yourself off,” Berry Punch said as she looked down at Derpy, who was already a little damp. Pulling a hind leg up, Berry Punch delivered a playful swat to the rounded curve of Derpy’s perfectly pleasant perky plush protruding plump plentiful posteriour, paddling perversely, provocatively provoking, poking, plus, playfully pucker prodding the passive pregnant prone panting perpetually perverted pegasus.

Really?

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Mittelschmerz supposedly affects 1 in 5 women... I'm the only one that I personally know of. It sucks! The instant I saw that in this chapter, I knew were you were heading. I love looking for all your obscure background details.

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Wow nice catch. I had a feeling Kudzu was going to use the feline ovulation bit, but I completely missed that.
Nicely done Kudzu your wordsmthing is as masterful as ever.

As for Lugus and Yew, maybe lack of penetration is a problem. Perhaps Lugus should spend some time as a Pegasus. The Transmutation shouldn't effects his sperm so it should work fine. Also maybe Zecora has some voodoo half breed potion they could try, Tradewind did have all those crossbreed zebras after all.

I... I've been waiting for this chapter for sooo long...... and it was beautiful~ I finally have an appropriate opportunity to say this: He gone done fucked her right in the pussy!

Rejoice! Rejoice! Reeeejoice!

Now I'm hungry for a spanner and lugnut session. I'll be waiting.... patiently. :P

5493871 XD Is that too much P for ya? Are you hungry for more D then?

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Naughty!

5495876 Hey, a craving is a craving. I think it's just Ruthpern's way of saying you aren't satisfying a certain need. XP

Running his nose along Belisama’s throat and working his way slowly downwards, Bucky sniffed, snuffled, and occasionally planted little kisses along the tender and exposed vulnerable areas on Belisama’s body

Stupid pesky tenses. Either this or moving the second and in between sniffed and snuffled.

5492460 pfft, I can't help myself.
Horse...

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It was cut content that was restored. It happens shortly after Bucky's return from the Shetlands. Not quite certain when I would have inserted it.

Woohoo, mutant-griffon-pony babies on the way!

5515557 hippogriff

I have a feeling that our dear Derpy will squeal in pleasure and pinch Luna's cheeks. She will be most a most EBIL (so evil it's spelled wrong) Mare.

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Wut?

5962254 Sorry. Meant it for the main story. My bad. :P

5962254 Your profile pic goes perfectly with your response.

5962244 NO! BAD ZORBAK!

Okay, just going to put this here...