I think this should be renamed 'The Farmyard Fucks'. We've got Berry who bleats like a sheep, and now Loch who whinnies (granted she is a pony). So, who grunts like a pig, clucks like a chicken, and moos like a cow?
On a more serious note, glad to see that Loch now knows the act is not something she has to be afraid of, but can rather enjoy.
I feel it needed more emotions behind it. It might be just me, but there should have been more exposition on their thoughts and deelings as to how much they wanted each other.
That was the hottest virgin sex... I was totally expecting something different and more silly. This style is good too, I can see the differences and it suits this chapter.... just, wow...
I'd like to point out first that a hymen is only present in humans(though that is forgivable) and alse that the hymen breaking during intercourse usually happens because of going in too quickly, when the female is not aroused enough, or without proper lubrication, or having sex that is too rough otherwise it is capable of stretching around the penis(this is an extremely common fallacy so I do not blame you, but the more you know).
And I'd like to point out that it depends on the hymen. Some actually only have a few tiny holes to allow for drainage. Due to similar reproductive system development, many mammals, including chimpanzees, elephants, manatees, whales, and horses retain hymens. It is a fallacy to believe that only humans have hymens.
4838822 I was not aware of that, but then I am not a biologist nor am I in the habit of checking up on the mating habits of nonhuman species. I thank you for the information exchange
This is the second sex chapter I have read on this site where the love is so think that you can cut it with a knife and pass it as meatloaf.
Also, I actually am happy that you made this. It helps give loch more personality and shows a part of all three of them that we wouldn't have known otherwise.
It would be awesome if you could make a complete version of The Chase, so I don't have to splice in the lost chapters when this story is done! Keep up the great work,
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his seed inside off her
when the second wave hit.
caused her to have another
I think this should be renamed 'The Farmyard Fucks'. We've got Berry who bleats like a sheep, and now Loch who whinnies (granted she is a pony). So, who grunts like a pig, clucks like a chicken, and moos like a cow?
On a more serious note, glad to see that Loch now knows the act is not something she has to be afraid of, but can rather enjoy.
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Of not off. Inside of. Will fix later, ontablet now.
4838292 Nothing to fix, just read it again and it's fine. My mistake.
I feel it needed more emotions behind it. It might be just me, but there should have been more exposition on their thoughts and deelings as to how much they wanted each other.
FYI, featured sometime earlier today my time and still there on the front page right now.
Something rather iffy about this sentence. And thanks for writing the chapter.
I just found this on front page and now I'm off to read to actual story as it seems intriguing.
That was the hottest virgin sex... I was totally expecting something different and more silly. This style is good too, I can see the differences and it suits this chapter.... just, wow...
I'd like to point out first that a hymen is only present in humans(though that is forgivable) and alse that the hymen breaking during intercourse usually happens because of going in too quickly, when the female is not aroused enough, or without proper lubrication, or having sex that is too rough otherwise it is capable of stretching around the penis(this is an extremely common fallacy so I do not blame you, but the more you know).
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And I'd like to point out that it depends on the hymen. Some actually only have a few tiny holes to allow for drainage. Due to similar reproductive system development, many mammals, including chimpanzees, elephants, manatees, whales, and horses retain hymens. It is a fallacy to believe that only humans have hymens.
The more you know!
4838822 I was not aware of that, but then I am not a biologist nor am I in the habit of checking up on the mating habits of nonhuman species. I thank you for the information exchange
This is the second sex chapter I have read on this site where the love is so think that you can cut it with a knife and pass it as meatloaf.
Also, I actually am happy that you made this. It helps give loch more personality and shows a part of all three of them that we wouldn't have known otherwise.
4838840 if you, or anyone else want to know then this is how the hymen can look. pls no ban
upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/8/8b/Hymen_en.svg
I really enjoyed this! In all honesty. Please keep writing cause you are a fantastic author
I've read this so many times now.
Great lost chapter here, and some what special too.
I don't ever want the chase to end.
Wow. For erotica, there is quite a few feels here.
One typo noticed:
a violet needy kiss
Don't you mean "violent"?
He's doesn't have girth, but the length is there.
Lol, old chapters... How did I miss this for so long? Now I know how Loch became so blunt... Ima bad foal..
It would be awesome if you could make a complete version of The Chase, so I don't have to splice in the lost chapters when this story is done!
Keep up the great work,
-frozen
He felt Sparklers tongue move
1. Sparkler's.
Yep, lost chapter has been found.
Awesome chapter well done, haha!
Quite enjoyable :raibowkiss:
hehehe eue