There were no longer any words, only fierce grunting, both of them slipping into dirty animal rutting, Bucky slipping it to her as hard and as violently as he dared, and Berry reciprocated by bleating like the filthy little hard screwed ewe that she was.
Possibly one of the best bits of descriptive dialogue I have ever written.
“I am going to do terrible things to you someday. Things with riding crops. And maybe a bit of rope. I have all kinds of kinky fantasies that I’ve never trusted anypony enough to try before.”
...sorry, Bucky, but now I need to steal Berry from you.
I need to inside of me,
Derpy arousal speak, or is that 'to' meant to be 'you'?
Her legs gave way, and for one terrifying moment, she thought he was going to crash face first Derpy promised in an aroused announcement . It glistened at him invitingly With a suddenness that made Derpy's Wings flap
1. She. 2. Just an extra spacing before your fullstop. 3. Just noting that you forgot to put a fullstop at the end here. 4. Extra capitalisation.
Possibly one of the best bits of descriptive dialogue I have ever written.
...sorry, Bucky, but now I need to steal Berry from you.
Derpy arousal speak, or is that 'to' meant to be 'you'?
I honestly wish I could write like this, the merriment that would ensue, I could only imagine.
"well taught"... Is it supposed to be "well-taught"?
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Yikes!
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Berry Punch is soused and slightly aroused by your comment.
You accidentally'd her request.
Other than that, fine chapter.
4457130 Well, she's not the only one. She did just list my fetish right there. Just need to add a gag.
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I can see the future foal running around and looking for daa-aa-aady.
Or am I kidding?
4457281 Oh, that's baa-aa-aa-d.
Why do I read this s**t? Anyways, it's great as usual!
4457155 Hmm, not sure if those were directed at me, and I can't post my response pictures to them here, so I'll send a PM.
I'm Berry surprised at Berry's bondage kink.
Bucky, you lucky devil.
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Berry Punch should have a fisting kink... Hmmm
i will read it just for this
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Did it live up to its promise?
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didn't have time yet... still at work (yes... fimfic from work ) when there are no people i read (at this moment i feel twi proud at me )
These berry bad puns are getting berry ridiculous.
Im getting berry fed up with this berry bad use of berry bad puns
I don't know why but every time you mention Berry bleating it makes me lose my shit. Especially in situations like this.
4488337 *grabs face*
*slaps repeatedly*
That'll teach you to use the same pun five times in two sentences.
What rhymes with Silver?
Her legs gave way, and for one terrifying moment, she thought he was going to crash face first
Derpy promised in an aroused announcement .
It glistened at him invitingly
With a suddenness that made Derpy's Wings flap
1. She.
2. Just an extra spacing before your fullstop.
3. Just noting that you forgot to put a fullstop at the end here.
4. Extra capitalisation.
You are a glorious bastard and you make me happy, I just want you to know this, you make me smile xD
hehehe, awesome job on this dude!