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kudzuhaiku


She's looking at you. Yes you. And she is judging you with her eyes. There is no escape.

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On her first day of school, a young filly is asked to tell Princess Celestia her name.

Little did she know, class was already in session.

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Comments ( 78 )

Dear Fimfiction Mods,
Please don't reject this story.
Kudzu you got this


~TOOWC

6241409 Hear hear! Kudz has had too many stories rejected for non-existent reasons.

I predict Midnight Darkness will go on to create a cure for deafness. Faust knows she's going to need it...

Dearest sister, she that she becomes comfortable with her name.

See

Also, I don't see any pone here, are you sure this is a Mlp fic :rainbowhuh:
please mods, do not reject

“No matter how silly it might be, your name makes you special. Dearest sister, she that she becomes comfortable with her name.

see not she

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I can't wait for the many who don't read Kudz's blogs to come to this newly published story and be like, "Wtf Kudzuhaiku there's already like 20 comments and 34 likes I am pressing X to doubt so hard"

*deafening intensifies*

HUZZAH!!

:trollestia:

Ya know for a little one shot this sounds like it could turn into something longer. You sure pack a lot of character into a tiny story.

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Pay extra close attention to the name of the school and then think of the peace treaty signed during the winter war games in The Chase.

If this little story get dropped via some mod then its 100% prove it that some higher up have grudge against you. Even if they only read the first sentence, its filled with so much pony reference, that they cannot say its not related at all. Kind of sad that its already completed/finished, since i feel this could been something big.

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Read the comments. This is something big.

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*cue dramatic music*
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I should reread The Chase one of these days and take notes...

I'm still waiting for the Chase to be completed. Then I can finally read it and then read all of the other stories and have it make sense.

Series. Nao.

6242099 hahaha....waiting for it to Finish

The Marvelous Missfortunes of Midnight Darkness in the Realm of Canterlot.

...or How I stopped Caring ´Bout my Name and Started to Becoming Deaf

So who are your subduer's?

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It's a joke about my diabetes. I will gladly eat the cookie that will lay me low.

OK, this was simply adorable. :rainbowkiss:

I do hope we get to see Midnight Darkness' adventures continued in being trained by a mare with even worse social-skills then herself Luna one day. :heart:

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Oh damn, I just realized I commented on a story! :rainbowlaugh::facehoof:

I meant to post that on your profile page. :twilightblush:

Bad Luna! No Canterlot-Voicing the foals! Bad! :rainbowlaugh:

Could use a bit of editing; there are two or three trip-ups.

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Point them out and I shall fix them. :pinkiecrazy:

I think my heart just stopped from the adorableness.

Shhh Luna shhhh you're scaring the foals.

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honestly, im seeing this version of luna as rick, from rick and morty.

and poor, poor midnight...

Luna: YOU HAVE THE PERFECT NAME FOR A NEW PROJECT OF MINE. HOW DO YOU FEEL ABOUT MUSICAL BANDS?

The Royal Pony Sister’s School for Gifted Unicorns

Sisters' (plural possessive)

Both her mane as well as her tail was a darker shade of blue,

were (plurality mismatch)

Short, simple, made me smile.

Midnight Darkness, future mother of Princess Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Ravenway.
Chrono assassins! Go forth!

Poor little Midnight, the victim of theme naming run amok. No one ever thinks of the OCs when they name them. Never thinking of the suffering foisted upon them. Poor things. At least this one has somepony guaranteed to love her.

6242377 Is there a gdoc that I can edit in suggestions mode?

This could be the beginning of a sweet story.

it was sad but then it turned out to be really funny, good job

I shall not move along, too much special to see here !

6243804 Trust me, I know all about shitty names....MY mother wasn't....creative. So she named me after a brand of pants.

Cute story.
I liked it.
:twilightsmile:

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...Dean?

6251198 DING DING DING WE HAVE A WINNER!


They were, in fact, the pants she was wearing before I was born.

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Levi comes from the Bible.

6251465 You wish. My Mom admitted that she named me after her favorite pants.

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I am named after an alcoholic drink.

I come from a long, long, long line of drunks.

6251622 ....is it bad that the first two drinks that came to mind were the Slippery Nipple and the Grasshopper?

If I had a complaint, it was the odd language and awkward writing used in some sections, like "wrinkled her nasal bridge." Some passages just sounded off or weirdly arranged.

However, this fic get top marks in every other category. An interesting OC, good characterization, a clever premise, and a good plot. Aside from the writing, the story is fantastic.

That... is sort of a bad name, though. Aside from falling clumsily off the lips, it doesn't really invoke any of the positive imagery of the night.
Here's hoping she learns to wear it with pride,. though.

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