A Mailmare named Derpy

Derpy and her daughter Dinky are leaving Fillydelphia. What adventures will they have with their new friends in Ponyville?

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Disco Knight

Disco Knight #1 · Mar 6th, 2012 · · ·

Is good, Excellent job.

Have a congratulatory Big Mac

You earned it.

Boolyboo

Boolyboo #2 · Mar 6th, 2012 · · ·

Good for chapter 1. Gives it 4 mustaches of 5

Byte9291

Byte9291 #3 · Mar 7th, 2012 · · ·

i hope to see more such a good read

Rainbow Crash 34

Rainbow Crash 34 #4 · Mar 7th, 2012 · · ·

That was awesome, BETTER GIMME MORE!

HighTreason25

HighTreason25 #5 · Mar 22nd, 2012 · · ·

YAAAY DERPY! This is very sweet! It's nice to get some background on Derpy and Dinky. You write Derpy very well, she seems like a misunderstood pony, instead of just a clumsy goof. Can't wait for more!
On Boolyboo's scale: 5/5

RealityCheck

RealityCheck #6 · Apr 23rd, 2012 · · ·

Lyra is mint green. Not blue.

Also, just once, I wish some writer would have bon-bon and lyra NOT be lesbians. Just for the shock value.

theirishbrony

theirishbrony #7 · May 1st, 2012 · · ·

529920 I have full ideas for it, but until Honesty and Loyalty is done (which is soon) this story will be on hold. Also school ends for me on 25th of May, so i'll have more time and faster uploads. I won't cancel such a good story.

actingcrazy84

actingcrazy84 #8 · Sep 1st, 2012 · · ·

I can't wait for more LOVED THE STORY

xGeniPoni

xGeniPoni #9 · Oct 6th, 2012 · · ·

This may have been cancelled but it was still an amazing read! Though you should have introduced Carrot Top as "Golden Harvest" but only made Carrot Top a nickname, because the mistakes you made then would have made sense. I actually had to look up what you meant by Golden Harvest, due to not knowing her official name.

This was great though!

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