• Member Since 15th Feb, 2012
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Derpy and her daughter Dinky are leaving Fillydelphia. What adventures will they have with their new friends in Ponyville?

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Comments ( 14 )

This was fun to read, hope you continue, lol.

Is good, Excellent job.

Have a congratulatory Big Mac

:eeyup:

You earned it.

Good for chapter 1. Gives it 4 mustaches of 5
:moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache:

i hope to see more such a good read :yay::heart:

:yay: That was awesome, BETTER GIMME MORE! :twilightangry2:

YAAAY DERPY! :yay: This is very sweet! :twilightsmile: It's nice to get some background on Derpy and Dinky. :derpyderp1::derpyderp2: You write Derpy very well, she seems like a misunderstood pony, instead of just a clumsy goof. :derpytongue2: Can't wait for more!
On Boolyboo's scale: 5/5
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Lyra is mint green. Not blue.

Also, just once, I wish some writer would have bon-bon and lyra NOT be lesbians. Just for the shock value.

Very fun to read. any clue when the next part will be up?

529920 I have full ideas for it, but until Honesty and Loyalty is done (which is soon) this story will be on hold. Also school ends for me on 25th of May, so i'll have more time and faster uploads. I won't cancel such a good story.:pinkiehappy:

530052 Glad to hear it I will be keeping an eye out :pinkiecrazy:

I can't wait for more LOVED THE STORY
:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

This may have been cancelled but it was still an amazing read! Though you should have introduced Carrot Top as "Golden Harvest" but only made Carrot Top a nickname, because the mistakes you made then would have made sense. I actually had to look up what you meant by Golden Harvest, due to not knowing her official name.

This was great though!

:derpytongue2:

aww it's cancelled:applecry:! oh well...you could have turned it into some kind of story of how derpy and the doctor get together but yeah..:derpytongue2:.

Dang. I wish you didn't cancel this! :raritydespair: Its the WORST. POSSIBLE. THING!!!! But eh, wadda ya gonna do? A wonderful story! Made me laugh and smile! :twilightsmile:

You get 5 Derpys!

:derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2:

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