Applejack and Rainbow Dash have always been the best of friends, but can they take that friendship even further? How much will they go through to confess their love for each other? and who will be caught in the crossfire?
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Shouldn't it be "honesty" rather than "honestly".
295002 oopes
Awh, poor Pinkie. Hope she doesn't go
A few mistakes in the story such as a misspelling or accidently missing out a word in a sentence. The biggest mistake is the mentioning of bacon, equines are vegetarian remember, unless they are hay bacon strips!
Otherwise i'd say your doing well and i'm enjoying this story so far.
329604 of course it's hay bacon strips, what else did you think?
"She looks so peaceful, like an Angle" said Rainbow to herself.
shoudn't that be angel?
352012The editors said different.
ok then. what, per se, does a sleeping angle look like?
355476 Fluttershy
fair enough
have some staches
Gah, you tease!
362061 Indeed I do.
you used y'all way to often
I'm pretty sure Applejack is capable of saying you once in a while
besides that, decent chapter
Gotta finish this story man! :D I'm waiting...
586606 no worries, I have a plan to finish it
Yay, no more sexual tension!
Why in Buckin' Tarnation Ah still hadn't favd this one? Ah work on it n' talk to you everyday for Saint Applejack's sake!
You dick
Dat implied threesome.
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You can taste air???!!!
I WANNA TRY IT!!
YESYESYESYESYESYES FIRST CHAPTER COMMENT BABY!!!
Err I mean, amazing chapter!
1917859 ha...eager for first comment spot or what? ;)
Also...I don't think you could get more lucky/unlucky in one day more than those two <(•^_^•)>
Whats with the comp code?
"To be continued..."
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OMG SO FAR I READ 3 CHAPTERS STRAIGHT AND ITS AWESOME I AM A HUGE APPLEDASH FAN I LOVE THIS FIC SO MUCH
awesome work I LOVED IT
AUGHH I LOVE PINKIE PIE OMG
Ok now I love SCOOTALOO!!! OH MY GOD THANK YOU FOR MAKING ME LOVE SCOOTS OMIGAWD SHES AWESOME!!!
Soo awesome