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Garnet Naturea


Just your average chef with a small passion for Displaced stories. With a very crazy sleeping schedule to work my crazy schedule.

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Nathan Blake was your average college student. He was smart, rather athletic, and all in all a good guy. But he was also a huge nerd, especially for a certain indie game. Undertale.

One day he gets invited by a friends of his to tag along to a gaming convention after his brother got sick. He was going in hopes of getting some Undertale memorabilia and to meet the creator. If only things went according to plan.

Now he helps a certain group of colorful characters in controlling their SOULs and aids in protecting their world. This is going to be one heck of a ride.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 81 )

I'mma enjoy this!

Slow down, you've got three displaced so far, you don't want to overwork yourself.

Oh now THIS looks like a good book. Unlike my stories which, quite frankly, are terrible.

Really wanna see how this goes, but ya know, you forgot the FEAR soul in the pic.

Hoo boy, another shitty undertale cross- wait woah this is actually really good.

This is a really good start for a wonderful story! I'm looking forward to the chapters to come. Keep up the good work!:raritystarry:

Really filled With DETERMINATION

All the while Twilight is looking at him from the corner of her eye, seeing as his book becomes visible for a second as he stretches to get some items.

Careful Nathan, you have the purple one's curiosity :moustache:

People often fear change, but the way i see it you can either run from it or learn from it.

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Rafiki is best mandrill.

This is a good story, haven't seen good undertale stories fimfic like this.
Hopeing for more chapters.

Right after I read chapter 2 chapter 3 is out lol

Oh... I just noticed this is doing the whole 'follow the main mlp script' bit.. Is this gonna be a thing where you follow the whole mlp timeline and their episodes word per word and that no matter what the extra characters do, say, etc, it won't cause a ripple effect and change the future?

As this is going on Nathan looks to the pegasus mare and quickly Judges her.

Rainbow Danger Dash
Pegasus

You made her middle name actually be Danger. Nice touch.

i could have answered those questions :scootangel:

Nice chapter. The short fight scene was great, kicked luna's ass for a bit.

Pinkamena Diane Pie/ Pinkie Pie Earth Pony? LV: 1 EXP: 0? HP: ?? ATK: I never want to hurt anyone DEF: More than enough Don’t you think it is rude to check someone’s stats when they are not looking? I love parties and seeing ponies smile! Also hi!

It really is rude when you think about it :moustache:

This is the best undertale fanfiction story I've ever read. Keep up the great work! :twilightsmile:

Please for the love of Jesus himself keep this story going!

Pinkamena Diane Pie/ Pinkie Pie Earth Pony? LV: 1 EXP: 0? HP: ?? ATK: I never want to hurt anyone DEF: More than enough Don’t you think it is rude to check someone’s stats when they are not looking? I love parties and seeing ponies smile! Also hi!

PINKIE! STOP BREAKING THE FOURTH WALL! Or at least wait until Sans shows up or something.

If you think Chrysalis is anything other than a green affinity monster you are sadly mistaken.
Sadly all this is doing though is making me more and more want to draw MLP!undertale, where changeling rainbow is powered by fields of flowers, whispering everyones hopes and dreams. They even both snarl. NGAAAHHH!

suggestion for something down the line
Chrysalis
Changeling
Lv 10
HP: 300
EXP: 2400
Atk 350-360+++
Def 170
The Queen of the Changelings, desperate to save her people Determined to do what it takes even becoming a monster [technically she's Asgore]

Needs a bit of editing.
I see that Pinkie isn't the only one fourth-wall aware. That or he saw the show. :D

Hope more of this comes out soon, this is getting exciting. :pinkiehappy:

If you make the OC OP it'll be interesting to see.who beats him upmate.
Reaper sans:"wow kid nice shot, I am death so can't run kid, wait you have multiple souls how is this possible!?"
OC:"Cause I am in God mode."

Needs better grammar but I like it!!!!!

I like this story so far! Hope to see more in the future.

Id say vermilion would be a good way to describe his eye colors at the end, if they arent 2 diffrent colors
:twilightsmile:

i really hope more of these stories chaptures come out soon. this is great :pinkiehappy:

Fuast
Unknown
Exp: Infinity
Level: infinity
HP: infinity
ATK: infinity
DEF: infinity
Fuast goddess/creator of planet Equis.
Will eliminate you if you're aren't supposed to be in this world.

SANS! ARE YOU SENDING RANDOM HUMANS INTO THE MULTIVERSE AGAIN!?

Ssoo, any idea if and when this will get an update?

Hope this gets an update soon.

So will this be updated soon?

DNC

Love this so far:pinkiehappy:, and clever with only giving an idea of nightmares atk and def.:pinkiesmile: He only just started using hes magic so he cant get an exact reading on her between his inexperience and the hate.:pinkiesmile:

Nathan is like alloy from chocotale but all the souls instead of asriel and chara

minor nit pick on the cover art, perseverance is a bit redundant here as its a almost a synonym for determination,

Kumu is like morph from treasure planet

Comment posted by Rexor deleted Jan 27th, 2019

Please I need MOAR!!!!!!!!!!

What's under the dark blue and orange hearts? I can't read it...

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Bravery for orange, Integrity for blue

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any idea when your next chapter will be out? i can't wait to see what happens next!

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Not for a while, working on my other Displaced stories, plus work has been nuts.

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