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I'll add this to my "Read Later" list. It seems intriguing.
Humans, eh? All humans or a little wiggle room?
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All human in this one. I'm sure you could replace every instance of "hands" or "feet" with hooves if that's your thing.
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Homo sapiens all around, far as I can tell.
Until I read the group box, I though Daring Do would be exploring ancient ruins when some kind of old magic transformed her into a human. That's and amazing idea for a story!
Hate to be "That guy" but this particular thing is a peeve of mine.
It would be addition, not edition... And trust me, I hate correcting spelling/grammar and pointing stuff like this out, but this specific one just irritates me.
Wow, this is quite a thrill! I gotta say, I envy your writing style for action, mate!
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I was debating that with myself for so long yesterday. I suck so much. 
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More out of curiosity if a non-human would be getting in on the sexy shenannegans. I'm not opposed to human stories, but if everyone is human it's not quite as sexy. Particularly the men. Curses. And sexy Daring Do is usually clop gold.
Holy Crap that was awesome! :D Cannot wait for the next chapter! Riveting action and fantastic descriptive writing all round :P I give this an 11/10, blown away!
Good so far, can't wait to read more... Unfortunately, since my eyes are getting heavy, it's going to have to wait until tomorrow.
I am sorry for saying this. This may just be my mind being dirty but, when I look at the cover picture, all I see is a grey slong with daring's hat being the tip.
This chapter was awesome. Even if I'm not a clopper... but in too deep to turn back now. The only thing is... I can't see how Daring is going to get out of this one. Her neck has been slit not once, but twice, she's been stabbed in the chest, fairly severly and she's been shot. Add in the fact that she's probably lost about a gallon of blood in the last 48 hours alone, and yeah... I'd say she's going to die. If not by anything else, but blood loss.
4744526 It isn't rape if you yell SURPRISE!!
anybody need an edit. I think this story does. not a huge re-write, but some patches here and there. If anybody need an edi-ta
I'm am free. if you message me and get a message from a person under the name of the amazingfrodo123. that is my other account because this one is acting up in the PM department. 
Glad to see you back, Holy, and LOVE the new story.
Well, this is fascinating thus far. I look forward to more.
I dig this story. I really do. Long time fan of Indiana Jones, so most anything Daring Do related I like. It had some of the campiness of Indiana Jones. Mainly the whole "civilization of sex" thing. That was chuckleworthy. But the action in this was on the complete other end. Not the lighthearted fisticuffs that Dr. Jones engaged in. Rather, this was much closer to Tomb Raider 2013. In a way, it's very similar. Both Daring and Gilda go through a lot of brutal beatings and still keep going. Overall, I like the mix of silly and serious. It pays homage to the stuff that came before it, but is its own thing. The sex was great and the story is good. Can't wait to see what horrors await Daring in the next chapter.
Literally the best story ever, this story is the reason why I registered and start writing my own story, thanks a lot Holy :)
Keep on the great work
P.s. the sexual scenes are so intense :o
And storyline carries you way in a different world nice writing style
I think AK Yearling is going to have to do some creative editing in order to make this story publishable.....
Assuming she lives through it, of course...
Good story so far and I can't wait for the next chapter.
4747948 What exactly do you feel needs edited?
4815646 There are a few words repeated and/or missing.
4819627 Really? Where?
4820341 sorry. it has been awhile. I don't remember. i'll take a look when I can
4822858 Alrighty then.
4824953 no problem
4825874 sweet
Holy shit. This... this is amazing! Like, for real. Gripping action, tense scenes, and the erotic elements don't take away from the story. This is erotic storytelling at its finest! Please tell me this will update.
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Oh damn. I never thought I would manage to impress you. Glad you liked it!
It should be out in a couple of days if I don't get distracted.
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Me? Who the hell am I to have people try an impress me? I'm just some asshole on the internet who yells inarticulately.
Also,
Nice to see this one finally finished.
I was thinking you were taking things in an odd direction with all of Gilda's rather excessive injustices, but you turned it around completely. I found a few sentences that seemed to break the flow slightly such as a few descriptions of how Daring was attacking people, but that might just be me having trouble thinking of things spatially.
The ending was especially nice, I got a very close feeling to an Indiana Jones movie, which I hope is what you were going for. The ending was satisfying and the epilogue wrapped things up very nicely considering the ending action. I did expect something more sexual to happen with Gilda, but this ending is fine as is. I do wonder about why Gilda was chosen by their gods? Do they choose people based on bad-assery?
Anyway, very nice story that pays off for how long it is, and a very exciting final chapter.
yes. just yes. no other words are needed, if I could double thumbs up this story I would
I just wonder how Daring is going to explain not having any clothes on when they land.
Is it odd to be thinking that?
I want to say I enjoyed this but... I didn't and I don't know why.
Lovely. Thank you.
Brilliant
Fantastic end, dude. Gilda started to get a bit too over the top there at points, but then this is based on pulpy serials, so it fits. My only criticism would be the point about Gilda being "chosen by their gods" was a bit too nebulous. Like, does she mean how she grabbed the artifact back in the previous chapter? Or was there some previous encounters between her and Zecora that we didn't know about? A bit more explanation about that point would have been nice, since it appears to be inferred that Zecora had met Gilda before this.
Either way, this was a damn good story. Especially with being about a magic dildo that grants superpowers, this was exceptionally entertaining to read. I hope we can see more advnetures with Daring and Whooves in the future.
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Gilda went through the same thing that Daring did when she had first arrived there, but Zecora found out too late what kind of person she was. Zecora and her warriors had to keep the location of their temple a secret from her, so they've had multiple run-ins before, but none of them can kill her--only knock her out.
In retrospect I probably should've talked about this more in the story instead of just implying it. That plot point does seem a bit vague.
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.... I'll be honest here; I could swear that this was going to be Raiders of the Lost Ark, so I am both
and somewhat 
that Gilda's face didn't melt when she touched the dildo.
This was amazing!
Always love a good adventure clopfic with Daring.
They're so few are far between, too...
~Skeeter The Lurker
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I put a lot of work into this one.
Glad you liked it.
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It shows!
~Skeeter The Lurker
I can't help but want to draw a lot of connections between this story and a good movie I saw once:
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