Her Sweet Melody

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Manes

Manes #1 · Jul 27th, 2014 · 15 · 2 ·

Dat coverart.
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Music the Looping Traceu

Music the Looping Traceu #2 · Jul 27th, 2014 · 2 · ·

I just realized something;

"Only when I mean it."

THIS GUY MUST KNOW ME!!!

The Hood

The Hood #3 · Jul 28th, 2014 · · ·

4761616 whys that bro?

Spectro

Spectro #4 · Jul 28th, 2014 · 6 · ·

4761544
I bet the guy who disliked you comment is a neckbeard from 4chan

OldSchoolCatholic

OldSchoolCatholic #5 · Jul 28th, 2014 · 1 · ·

4761544 No Mr. Manes. This doesn't apply to the situation at hand. Save it for da ass shot damn it!

Snuggly

Snuggly #6 · Jul 28th, 2014 · 1 · ·

4762120 guilty :^3

SirRage

SirRage #7 · Jul 28th, 2014 · 1 · 7 ·

I got a few paragraphs in and stopped. Octavia isn't a girl, she is a women. She doesn't play the violin (although I'm sure she could), she plays the cello. If there was a mention of her cello I didn't read long enough to see it.

I suppose my other gripe with most second person stories is that they don't give a reason why I'm here, winning the affection of this lovely women. It's just happening.

(In lieu of a down vote, I posted this)

Holy

Holy #8 · Jul 28th, 2014 · · ·

4766390

Author's Note:
I know Octavia doesn't play a violin in the show, but I'd like to think she's multi-talented. Anyway, I hoped you enjoyed this little quickie.

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