• Member Since 28th May, 2012
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StormbadgerXIII


Australian writer, drawer, and general FoE nut.

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I Love That You Mention "Wings Of Fire" In The Authors Note.I Read It Before Yours And I Am Glad You Were Inspired By ABronyLife42's Work/Fic.I Also Like Anthropomorphic Ponies Bit More Than Regular Ones But,Hey,That's Just Me.I Feel I Should Ask You If You Clopped To Either This/Your Fic Or "Wings Of Fire" Or Maybe Both?:pinkiesmile:

Loved It By The Way,Here Have 5 Moustaches For Being My First Octavia Clop Fic And Being Well-Written And Thought Out.:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Happy 1 Day After Hearts And Hooves Day :3.:heart::scootangel::pinkiehappy:

Why write a second person story rather than create an actual character? It actually makes it harder to get in the world of the story when it's telling me what I want and what I'm doing and thinking.

I, myself, am a fan of Anthro fics and its great to see a lot of writers making fictions about it. This story was very sensual to say at least and I very much enjoyed it.

2131033 here here. very nice story as well, Octy is my fav BG pony as well

Awesome story. I never did like straight clop stories and I also can relate to you. I also prefer anthro and Octavia is one of my favorites background ponies and believe me. I'm bit of a perv too and matter we all are sense we're reading this. :twilightblush: Nice Story man.

2130075 I leave it up to the reader to fill in the blanks. Hence why I never mentioned race, name, cutie mark, colour... It was an attempt to increase audience involvement. Seems it fell a touch short.

2129981 2131033 2131477 2131834 2133340 Thank you for the kind words :twilightsmile: I really do appreciate it!

This was definitely different from most of the clop I've read, and I'd like to think that there's alot of it "under my belt." I thoroughly enjoyed this, and I think that clop like this is better than just straight clop. I eagerly await your next second-person clopfic.

2134041 Heh, well, it may be a while off. I've got my Fallout: Equestria sidestory to go, and another one of my 'interesting concepts' fanfics, like Not Guilty and What Went Wrong? But one way or another another story is likely to come out.

Though, biggest question - Derpy or Applejack first?

2134070 c: Hoo boy, my you're a very ambitious writer aren't chu'. But, if my opinion means anything, I'd like to say give a Derpy fic your first shot. You did a very good job with your painting of Octavia's character, it really did seem like it could very well be the real her. I think you'd do a great job doing the same with another background character. Also, in my humble opinion, this site needs more well done Derpy clopfics to be blunt about it.:derpytongue2:

The buildup was awesome, nice scenes, fabulous...

Good job, sir. Good job. :moustache:

As I have said before IRL, this is awesome :twilightsmile:

Now :derpytongue2:

2136237 Thanks, it was quite a lot of fun to write it :twilightsmile:

Not that this wasnt good, but what about my violin lessons?

I really love a good story before clop to build up the feeling and not just straight sex like a porn....you've done it really well

good job :twilightsmile:

You halt yourself. You studied music, not poetry.

That happens to me too sometimes I calculate the trajectory of a 45. Instead of a 50. Cal

Also list of 4 things I do on leave

1 game
2 train
3 drink
4 fuck

All I do on leave except on summers

:rainbowlaugh:This IS an :rainbowdetermined2:ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC:rainbowdetermined2: story KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!:rainbowlaugh:

:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

And i like Octavia too :pinkiehappy: this was the story i was looking too read :rainbowdetermined2:. BROHOOF /)

"Octavia appears after a moment, holding a glass of wine in her right hand, and a mug in the other; a plain mug, not some silly mug with a picture or phrase on it."

My mug has Vinyl on it...:twilightsmile:

At first I've read 'Duet D'Armour'. :applejackconfused: Got to stop paying SOO much bloody attention t' the ancien weaponry. :C

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