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Interesting for a first story.
Good work
I'll be watching this
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Thank you kindly.
The stage is set, and I look forward to the first act with great anticipation!
Well, I'm always game for new hypnosis stories.
I'd be happy to give this one a follow, can't wait to see more!
I find myself more pleased that you're trying to pace yourselves as opposed to getting into both the hypnosis and clop right away. It makes those moment seem more important and the payoff that much better.
Also...
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Who the hell actually calls it a G clef? It's pretty universally referred to as treble.
Who skips right to the sex in a hypnosis story?
A hypno story, even a clopfic, is something to be savored, every moment carefully enjoyed and never rushed, gradually building up to the release of all tension and gradually slipping down, down down~
Octavia as a hypnotist? I can buy that and great start
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Well played, friend. XD
This is epic... Moarrrrrrr
I remember the thread we talked about this on, it feels like so long ago but glad to see we have an awesome start. Can't wait for more guys, keep it up
Let me just point one mistake I saw out because I like this story.
"the orchestra had chosen five of its most talented members, four earth ponies and a unicorn, to go onto the stage and do a freelance performance.", "Tonight, he wore a handsome navy pinstripe suit which shimmered in the spotlights, his majestic sky-blue wings poking out from behind him and swaying slightly in the pleasant breeze."
You stated that there were only earth ponies and a unicorn on the stage yet you put wings on one of the members which makes him a pegasus. Either say one of the earth ponies is a pegasus or delete the part about the wings.
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There's a long story behind that error. Essentially, I finished writing and edited that, but on the night of posting I didn't have access to the file. So, I asked Mask to send me a slightly outdated version.
I'll fix this promptly. Thanks for your time.
4218954 I call it a G..
Oh boy. Something tells me Noteworthy is "in treble". Eh? Eh? No? Ok. I love these details, just simple words to imagine things better always gets me. You've caught my attention.
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I see what you did there.
What details are you referring to? It's just one of my writing styles.
4244611 just your choice of adjectives. I really need to work on expanding my vocabulary because it feels like I use the same word multiple times and it sounds boring.
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Yeah. I enjoyed expending that skill via Lux's
overcomplicated manner of speech.
Well, now Noteworthy is under hypnosis. Let's see what happens next.
Prediction: Octavia fornicates with him while he's unconscious..
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Well, we'll just have to see....
>Dave wiggles eyebrows
Some call it "Shock", some call it "cutting to the chase"
Either way, a nice chapter. Definitely worth the little wait.
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Cutting to the chase.
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Of course, there is not much chase if the prey is running after you.
The warning notes alone where already brilliant ^^
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It's the little things that count.
MEH! Just when it gets intereting!
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4311838 best answer ever^^
Well, that's certainly interesting.
By rubber alicorns do you mean condoms?
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It's a reference to a certain fic. Figure it out.
ew condoms gross
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Rainbow Dash Discovers Erotic Mind Control?
I like the story's pacing. It's involving very nicely. That said: Now I have to wait for the next chapter!
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Just what I thought.
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give the boy a prize
More of this. Immediately!
Well, this just got to the interesting part^^ cant wait to see what Tavi is going to do with him once they're home^^
Do I detect a subtle refference to a certain TwiDash fic there?^^
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Give this other boy a prize
4416562 yay I was right for once
I think…
I think I see a Rainbow Dash Discovers Erotic Mind Control reference.
That's probably it…
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There's actually one much less obvious reference in the form of a joke, and surprisingly none of you have noticed it. Why don't you busy yourselves with that while I pretend to work on the next chapter?
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I tried looking for it, but I keep getting hung up at the "giggling mint leaf" part...
I have now idea what that would reference, though.
(In other news: Where's the next chapter?
)
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I'll get to it now that Chapter Two of Cloud Nine is done.
From sax to trombone?
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There's a decent joke in here, I'm just OHHHHHHHHH.
Yeah, got it
Is there gonna be more?
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Yes there is! Just working on the story's schedule with Mask. I take it you enjoyed the story thus far?