• Member Since 21st Sep, 2015
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Darth Pon3


Secondary account for Solas Mean Oiche; this is where I post my straight-up clop.

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If you downvote, please do me the courtesy of leaving a message letting me know why, so if it is something about my writing I can change/fix it. Thanks!

Ah, I just love how Octavia and Vinyl are written here. It's... It's my headcannon.

6490627 I'm really glad you like it so much! Thanks, mate!

Huh, not bad. Could use some polish, but definitely worth a read. All the effective cloppy things are there (character chemistry, fetish fuel, etc.) Just needs a touch of refinement; particularly around dialogue, adding a tad more detail, things like that. Things that come with practice.

I'll be keeping an eye on this account. :raritywink:

6490983 Thank you very much for the feedback! I will take your words to heart. I will write another clopfic in the not-to-distant future.

Not even a day and already 32 likes. Good job man! I told you it was good!

6491020 Thank you! I just wish those eight down-voters would have left some feedback :ajbemused:

6491030 They probably just don't like the fetish or something.

6491057 That is pretty likely, sadly :derpytongue2: Maybe I should move the fetishes warning to the top of the description so people who don't like the kinks will just pass it by.

Okay, with only reading the description... I say: "Dear, heavens above... this is so wrongggggg.":rainbowlaugh:

PS: That Vinyl Scratch pic though...

6491195 Sometimes, something so wrong can feel so right. If you read it, please leave your thoughts afterwards, if you would!

6491209 Sorry, mate. Although, I like Vinyl and Octavia as characters, I'm not that into clopfics.:scootangel:

Needs sidequel with ShiningxTwilightxSunset.

6491300 Funny you mention that. Throw in Big Mac and that will be my next clopfic. There's already a couple images that Audrarius did for me that will give you a good idea about how that will go :raritywink:

6491064

Everyone gets drive-by downvoters, though clop gets the most. Frankly, it happens for any reason, from the premise to the fetishes, and there's not a thing you can do to prevent it. Most of them probably barely even looked at the story before voting and moving on.

I wouldn't worry about them. I'd suggest focusing your efforts on those who actually like what you're trying to do. :twilightsmile:

6492813 I do believe you have the truth of it. And that's very good advice! I will focus on the people who actually read and enjoy the story rather than those that don't. Not to say I won't take constructive criticism to heart because I do. Anyway, thank you for your words! Cheers, mate.

This is probably the first time I've ever seen double vaginal in a fanfic that didn't involve tentacles. All in all I'd say this was a pretty good story with some crazy kinks all around.

6492931 Yeah, I hadn't ever seen it in a fic (I'm not really into tentacle porn) so I thought I'd include it. My next clopfic will also have something in it that I've never seen before, in real porn, drawn/digital porn, or fics, until I commissioned Audrarius to make a couple images of it. It's not crazy, but for some reason I'd never seen nor heard of it, and I think it's bloody hot.

Anyway, thank you very much, and I'm very glad you enjoyed it! Here's hoping you like my future works, as well. Cheers, mate!

Oh hey, it's you. I've wanted to read this for quite a while now. Let's see what you got.

6492947 Thanks, and I hope you may take a chance to look at my work as well. It's not much but it's there.

6493401 It's me! Please, after you read it I would love to hear your thoughts!

6493929 You're welcome! And I absolutely will look at what you've written!

Neat story! Gotta love some VinylTavia loving ^.^

I did notice though - "Leftenant". It's spelled lieutenant but pronounced the way you spelled it (in the UK at least. Americans I've noticed tend to say it Lew-tenant).

Love the story though!

6494310 Thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed it :twilightsmile:

Aye, but if I spelled it how it's supposed to be spelled, no one would pronounce it how I mean for it to be pronounced :raritywink:

Again, thank you! Cheers, mate.

Never read anything like this before... I liked it:rainbowderp: nice job!

This was a pleasant read, for sure.
I do wonder, however... do you mind adding links inside the text itselfs whenever a picture happens?

6494882 Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

6495113 I could do that, though due to the NSFW nature of the images the links would only be able to redirect to the Tumblr post the current links go to, unless I make a separate Tumblr post for each image with a link that leads to the image on Derpibooru. That might not be a bad idea, actually. I'll work on that tonight.

6495595 I'd apologise, but I'm Irish with English schooling, so it is what it is and I'm not going to apologise for what I am :raritywink:

I appreciate the feedback no less, though. Thank you for reading it and I hope you enjoyed it anyway! Cheers to you! :twilightsmile:

6494310

Americans I've noticed tend to say it Lew-tenant).

Yes we do though the spelling is the same. What I'm liking about this is the reversal of how Vinyl and Tavi are usually portrayed. It's very interesting don't you think?

6500488 Sometimes you have to make concessions to get a point across.

6495113 I added links in for the images I have. I'll add the rest as the images are completed.

6511589 Heh, that would be something, to overwhelm a contraceptive spell! But not in my fic; pregnancy's not my fetish :derpytongue2:

6491329 I'll be here to edit when you do that. You write some kinky shit amigo. Kiiiiiiinky shit.

6524468 Thanks! I will take you up on that. Kinky in a good way? Not too kinky, I hope. :raritywink:

6524650 Excellent. Did you happen to see those images I mentioned?

6524657 Just checked them and holy shit that was a cool idea to put that in. Wait did you draw that shit yourself? Holy shit balls, thats amazing!

6524679 Are you talking about the images for this story?

6524684 Sorry I did a stupid. I didn't check them clearly enough, just forget that part. Did you just happen to find those pictures, or did you find them before you wrote the story? Either way its freaking awesome and I love you. No homo

6524690 If you're talking about the images I've linked with this story, I commissioned them before and while I was writing the story. I came up with the concrete idea and commissioned the images, and there's more still in the works that I will link when they're done. Now, Audrarius did three images for me that are the basis for the next clopfic I will write; you should check THOSE out to get an idea of how that one will go! They are of Twilight, Sunset, Big Mac, and Shining Armor.

6524690 Oh, and I'm glad you like them so much! I love you too. No homo.

6524729 Hahaha. If you need a link to those pictures, let me know. Tell me what you think of them.

6524785 "Do I need a link" Just PM them to me, don't want to give any hints or spoilers for your readers.

6575652 You've found my secret (or not so secret) second account! This story was actually what got me out of my funk and made me want to write again! So, if you read it I hope you enjoyed it at least a little bit.

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