Insufficient Postage

Derpy is delivering the mail when she encounters a small problem, and she's determined to figure out what it is.

Third place winner in the "One Little Mistake" minific write-off

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alexmagnet

alexmagnet #1 · May 5th, 2014 · · ·

I liked it. Nice and subtle, just the way humor should be.

LoneUnicornWriter

LoneUnicornWriter #2 · May 5th, 2014 · · ·

I have to say this was a very comedy one-shot. Nothing wrong with it. I really like how everything chained together from scene to scene. The dialogue wasn't a problem at all.

Everything about this story was written nicely and made for a nice short comedy read. Simply loved it.

Very nice story once again.

PresentPerfect

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PresentPerfect #3 · May 5th, 2014 · · ·

Nooo, you took out the best line! D: Cake first, sun second! Cake first, sun second!

RazgrizS57

RazgrizS57 #4 · May 5th, 2014 · · ·

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It was an accident I swear! ;_;

PresentPerfect

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PresentPerfect #5 · May 5th, 2014 · · ·

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rizgraz how cud u :(

Silent Strider

Silent Strider #6 · May 5th, 2014 · · ·

Not everything clicked perfectly for me, but what I disliked was just a minor headcanon conflict thing; it was quite enjoyable regardless, and worth an upvote