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Admiral Biscuit


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A random collection of prompt-driven one-shots. Each has been lovingly hand-crafted.
The subjects are as diverse and colorful as the ponies which they describe.

New stories will be added now and then, so be sure to check back frequently.

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Comments ( 15 )

Ooh, religion! Not many stories touch on Celestia's and Luna's backstories. It would be interesting to see a story where a pony openly questions the Princesses about inconsistencies in Equestria's origin story. That filly is going places! The dungeon, most likely...

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I hadn't really thought about religion in Equestria all that much. From the prompt, I had the idea to use the opening verses of Genesis (since most people would recognize what they were). I suppose the ponies would have some kind of origin story, but I'm not sure what it would be. A lot of it depends on whether Celestia and Luna are considered 'gods' in any sense of the word (and that's a subject I'd rather not touch, since a lot of people have really strong feelings about the subject).

I do have a fairly good headcanon for what happened around the time that the Hearth's Warming Eve pageant takes place, but in my theory, Luna and Celestia are already around, despite what the pageant says.

Comment posted by PunIntended Consequences deleted Feb 19th, 2014

The rest of the story:

“Since the earth was formless and void, there needed to be ponies to give it shape. That’s why the Pie family of Earth Pony rock farmers visited it – to gradually grow the earth into the shape it is today.

“One of farmers was a pink filly named Pinkie Pie. One day Pinkie Pie saw a rainbow in the sky and got the idea to throw a party for her family. During the party, she got her cutie mark. And that’s how Equestria was made.”

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That's actually quite brilliant. It sounds like a good pony creation story, with a nice Pinkie-type ending.

Noi: "We Need To Go Deeper Earlier!"

Carrot Top: "Turtles all the way down!"

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So your saying Equestria is just one big party thrown by Pinkie Pie.

Like any party some day the day will come when everypony gets too tired and/or drunk out of their mind to continue. They'll go home and Earth will return to it's normal semi-sane state. That is until the next time, when Pinkie throws a bigger better party, with even more Discords. :moustache:

--Sollace

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Ah... oops. I just got on and read what I wrote... I honestly don't know why I did that. :facehoof:

Apologies to anyone who saw that. It was... 'uncouth', as Rarity would say. :raritydespair:

D'aww. Noi is cute.

This story makes me wonder, where did Noi get her name? I have seen her with that name in other fics as well.

Still, a very nice short read.

Thank you!:pinkiehappy:

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I don't know how she got her name. I've heard rumors of a poll on Reddit, where unnamed background ponies are given names.

Okay, yeah, awesome :rainbowlaugh: More Noir please!

Finally got around to reading this, enjoyed it well enough! Liked the casual world building and sibling interactions, good job :twilightsmile:

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Finally got around to reading this, enjoyed it well enough! Liked the casual world building and sibling interactions, good job 

:heart:

Thank you!

Noi and Carrot Top are a great pair for stories, because Noi's so damn cute, and even Carrot Top can't really resist.
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Really cute! Noi’s really health conscious for a filly of her age, that’s rare to see. And Carrot Top should see it postive, she can spent for time with her sister that way.

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