Golden Harvest takes Noi to the park to burn off some extra energy. After a dip in a puddle, and a rousing game of Settlers and Buffalo, Noi is a filly in serious need of a bath. Only problem is she hates bathing.
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Why, you little. . .
. . . GENIUS!
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You and I both know that's how a filly would think.
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Shrieking fillies shrieking?
Adorable.
Muddy shrieking fillies shrieking in the mud?
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Remember kids, it's not so much dinner that you really want to eat, but the desert that comes afterwards.
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I dunno--as a kid and a young adult, there have been a few dinner dishes that have always been my weakness. My mom's pesto pasta, and my ex's Alfredo lasagna, to name two.
"Stallions are icky!"
then why is this marked incomplete?
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Because there is a second chapter yet to be published.
Did not see that coming, did you Golden?
Aaaaaaaw...
So adorable!
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Thanks!
Heart attacks imminent.
Golden didn't sepcify, on which side of the curtain Noi had to stand, only that it had to be closed...
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I had a huge smile on my face the whole way through, let me tell you.
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A loophole which Noi will likely exploit at some point in the future.
As long as she didn't accidentally use some sort of slow acting manedye shampoo, I think that went pretty well.
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Or Nair . . . you have to be careful what you keep in the bathroom when there's curious fillies about.
Cute story.
I liked it.
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Thanks!
Adorable.
Precious
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Thank you!
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Finally got to it. Good story.
I liked when Derpy/Ditzy Doo/Bubbles/Muffins/Whatever name they pick next, joined the fillies.
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She totally would. Derpy's a filly at heart.
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Liked this chapter less than the first, but hot damn is this story cute. :D
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Re-reading it a year and a half later . . . yeah, probably could have streamlined the second chapter a bit.
Too... Much... Cuteness... Not gonna make it... Heheje this fic, just so adorable!
You are sure you didn't major in cuteness and adorableness?
Also, upvote number 100
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Noi is too damn adorable.
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Read this and find out.
(also, I just noticed this has no downvotes)
This is why I love this site. Everything is just so darn wholesome and innocent in the best possible way!
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(Well, maybe not everything on Fimfic is wholesome and innocent, but by golly, a lot of things are)
Great read! Easy to read story, love these kinds too, good work!
Thanks for the fillydorableness!
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Thank you!
You might also enjoy 36: So It Begins for more cute fluffy Noi goodness.
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You're welcome!
Adorable little nonsense.
Thanks for writing.
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You're quite welcome!
Cute! Man, we really need a tag for Noi and Tootsie.
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I would love it if we had a tag for Noi.
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I agree with that. The PM, I sent, just cirious about it, as I think those filies need more stories. And, if you don’t mind, As I live those fillies too, with Dinky being my favorite, I, like you, made serveral stories for them, three for Dinky and one for Noi, Tootsie, Ruby and Petunia respectivly, thought they could interest you
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Sorry, old habit, I just happen to write semilar stories at you and by instict after reading yours I thought they could be of interest for you.
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I'll check them out when I get a chance (might not be for a while, 'cause I've got a huge story backlog at the moment).
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Okay, looking forward your comments. Due the lack of tags for Noi and Tootsie, would you like a like with the stories?
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I'll let you know. Ought to be able to find them.
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Okay. I just thought a list might be useful
My goodness this was just too wholesome and adorable~
BEST MAMA
Oh my God, I love Noi so much.
DON'T TELL HER THAT YOU FOAL
NOW YOU GONNA STARVE
OVERALL ASSESSMENT:
AAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW+
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She is.
No question.
I can’t recall if my little brother ever did anything like that to me, bout I wouldn’t be surprised if he had.
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She’s so adorable!
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I think she’ll be alright; Noi will starve first.