Ally, a 18 year old teen tries to break the wheelchair speed record, but apparently goes through a mysterious portal while doing it, landing in Equestria as the first ever human there. But she finds it a challenge and accepts it. How will she adjust to her new living space? What will she do in Equestria? And will it be worth it? Read and find out.
Ok I was wondering how she would get there was hoping for twi to mess up Some ones life and must say I like where its going. Will up and fav
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WHERE IS CHAPTER 2!?
I NEED CHAPTER 2!
GIMME CHAPTER 2! GIMME!
A.K.A. I love!
4218989 Daum! I just submitted it! But I shall make another chapter soon.
4218995
Not SOON. NOW! I'm gonna die without MORE!
More please?
4219004 to tell you the truth, I was thinking of the positive side of being crippled while typing this story. And it seemed pretty cool to me (thinking of all the cool tricks you can do. Making Ally a daredevil in this story.)
4219005 OK OK! Sheesh! I'm working on it
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Muhahahahaha! I will see you soon.
~Until we meet again.
4219423 until then...
4219432
4219442 you right now asking about the next chapter:
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And me responding:
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"Yeah, ok I'll get to it"
Damn those uncrippled!
Anyway, I've always been curious about an HIE where the human had some sort of disability. I was hoping for blindness or deafness, but I suppose paraplegic (or whatever it may be,) will do. Assuming I read past this chapter, of course.
Not sure if I want to make a southpark joke or not.
4219567 There is a blind HIE fic, it's called "Lost and Blind" I actually faved it.
4219608 You may...
so did she land on poison joke and will that have any adverse affect on her? only problem I have is twi not fallowing the tracks left by ally's chair I would think there would be some less the under growth of the forest covered it.( stop trying to poke holes in the story stupid just enjoy the ride)
4220122 I might have left it out, but the sun was setting. (And you know how dark it gets in the Everfree right. I mean who would fall asleep in the middle of the day? Really?) anyways, just wait until the next chapter to find out Ally's results with the Poison Joke. :D
Omg finally! I almost died.
4220850 I know you wouldn't die without seeing the next chapter. :3
4220937
True. How did you know?
But I would die if you deleted the story.
HiE fics are a dime a dozen, but few people attempt to tackle Zecora's rhyming, so I'll stick around out of respect for a path rarely trod.
I'll be watching this..
Wow, big respect there. Zecoras ryming came smooth like velvet. Plus its not everday you see a HiE fic with a dissabled human. On that note, I like Ally´s character.
*sets up a tent, pulls out a camping chair and waits for MOAR*
4219848 Timaahhh
I'm sure they will strap a quantum engine to her wheelchair to make it go fast enough to go back in time or go home.
You might have more success if you write with spellcheck and then paste into the chapter page. I noticed a few missing apostrophes and your/your're confusion.
4222402 yeah, I'll work on that. (Just that someone kept on begging me to type the next chapter on the same day)
4221139 you can't die without leaving the fandom :3
4222335 maybe she makes her own Humanboom while doing it! (like a sonic boom! :D)
4222830 A bouncing rainboom perhaps?
4222892 that would be a sight to see :D
4223369 actually, when I first decided to make a crippled HIE fic, the first thing that came up was that she should be a daredevil (since she doesn't like feeling useless on the wheelchair)
4222830
WHERE IS MY 3RD CHAPTER MR.? Do I have to force it out of you?
Bring it or I will be the cause of your death.
See you soon.
4223846 it shall come soon; just having trouble typing Zecora's rhyming. (It's super hard if your not a living poet)
Interesting. Continue *Adds another three days to the count-down on the bomb hidden somewhere in dimensional space around your house*
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4225620 How do you know it's not inside the rubbish bin?
4225950 cause it's not in the house! You shall be patient for my next chapter!
4225960 I have a quantum ioniser on my pocket, unless you want to find out what it does... MOAR!
4225964 well unless you want a short, unrelated chapter... Then WAIT!
4226032 *Grumbles under breath* You're just lucky my time machine got stolen by Archimedes.
4226036 and besides, all you know is that I'm in a bucket right now. YOU DONT KNOW WHERE THY IS!!
4226086 I have advanced technology, I know everything, even when your next bowel movement is. I'm deleting that info section.
4226092 if you know so, then what I doing right now!
4226189 Fucked if I know, I sat on it and now all it tells me is stock market prices. The hell am I going to do with those?
4226211 see if there are any sales :D
How the hell can any living thing (Maybe except Pinkie)play Flappy Bird with hooves?
4226321 How can anything play flappy bird for more than a minute?
4226321 *Shrugs* ponies can lift up tons of things with there hooves, so the Fucked Logic there.
4226330 *Shrugs* the game is addictive :D