Equestria's Crippled Daredevil

by Pixel Berry

Chapter 10: Dressing Montage

When the CMC apologized without the puppy eyes, I could finally accept there apology while my heart still beating. It was really odd dying 20 times in a row and being brought to life. I coulda sworn I saw Jesus rolling his eyes at me every time I came back.

We also figured out that the CMC were the ones that hid my wheelchair, adding another scolding from the two unicorn mares. They retrieved it from the backyard, in which it was hidden behind some bushes.

But on another note, Rarity was using this time to get started on making new clothes for me. When the CMC left to go back to crusading, Rarity came up to me and told me that she already finished three outfits for me. Wow!

With Twilight's help, I got back on my wheelchair, following Rarity to her work station, where the outfit's she made were left.

I wasn't allowed to see the clothes until Rarity or Twilight put the outfit on me. With eyes closed, I cooperated without any questions, knowing that no matter what I say, they won't change there minds on this plan.

I didn't know what was going on, but all I could feel was my clothes being removed and a fresher pair wrapping around me. It felt weird, but enjoyable at the same time. Not knowing what was going on made me a bit giddy, wondering on what it is. I felt my wheelchair being moved, probably moving me in front of a mirror to see what I'm wearing now.

"Okay, Darling! You may open your eyes." I hear Rarity say.

I opened my eyes and the first thing I saw was pink. I looked to see that I was wearing was a strapless shirt that wrapped around my chest area. I looked towards my legs to see that I was wearing a simple grayish-blue shorts. And I also was wearing some light blue sneakers.

I really liked it. It showed a lot of skin, but I didn't care. I looked cute.

"Do you like it?" Twilight asked.

"Yeah. It's really simple, but unique." I complimented it.

"Oh, how wonderful! I knew you'd like it." Rarity was very pleased. "Now! Let's try the other two."

"Okay." I agreed, closing my eyes.

The same routine happened: strip off, put on, and see the results.

The second outfit was a stripped short-sleeved shirt and a pink sweater. The only thing was that it was cut down to show my stomach. And on my legs were black baggy pants. And on my head was a back and red baseball cap, and on my feet were back sneakers.

"Cool." Was all I could as I eyed my reflection.

After I changed again, the third outfit was a black long-sleeved shirt with little tears around the sleeves. It had three skulls on the center area. There was also a red plaid skirt with a belt around the top. I was also wearing back stripped stockings and back shoes.

When I changed back to my original clothes. I told rarity that the new clothes were wonderful and I loved them. She told me in response that she would make me more without a second thought. She even gave me them for free. In which I had to find a way to repay her in some way.

As Rarity showed us the way out, we saw that the CMC were outside waiting for us. Sweetie and Apple Bloom just standing and Scootaloo on her scooter.

"What are you doing here?" Twilight asked a bit curious.

"Again were sorry for hurting you and repeatedly killing you." Apple Bloom apologized.

"It's in the past. So what are you doing here?" I asked this time.

"Scoot's noticed that your machine runs on for-hoof power and she was wondering if maybe she can have a little race with you." Sweetie Belle explained.

"Really?" I eyes the orange filly.

"Yeah! You seem kinda cool and I wanna race from hear to the library." Scootaloo showed a determined look at me.

"Sure." I bluntly accepted.

"Seriously?" Scootaloo asked

"Yeah. I seem like in a racing mood. So let's go." I then slowly set myself up. "Twilight? Do you mind?" I asked her.

"No. Not at all. I'll meet you two at the entrance." Twilight then started running, charging her horn, then teleported away.

"Now! Shall we?" I gave the little pegasus a calm grin.

"Oh yeah."

Author's Note:

If you wanna know what the outfits really look like, here are the photos I choose to use: (Note: Ignore the hair style and eye color. It doesn't matter!)
Outfit #1:

Outfit #2:

Outfit #3:

And finally, the moment you have all been waiting for. A race between Scoot's and Ally. Who will win? What will happen? Comment on who you want to win.

Comments

[Silver Octave]

I was excited until I saw 740 words, but An update to a nice story nonetheless.
I hope to see more soon

[muffinator]

those outfits are pretty cute

cake that is all

[Kenshinryuu]

I think a tie is best... and I can totally see Scoots using some ramps to give her a boost to avoid obstacles. Ally might have a harder time on the corners and doesn't know the terrain as well, but her wheelchair is also more stable, bigger, and she's got experience. But I think a tie would be best, everyone is happy and nobody looses... except for the ponies they traumatize in their race

[nighters]

stunts?

[dargondarkfire]

not really sure who would win. maybe scootaloo since she could potentially get through narrower spots.
as for the clothing. it is well and all but... I don't think rarity would make something with skulls on it.... then again what do i know?

[Fireheart 1945]

Ok, lets see if I got this right. Ally is human again, but with wings, right?"

[Pixel Berry]

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[Fireheart 1945]

5028156 Ok, thanks.

[Flutters Is Shy]

Ally almost wins, but then Rainbow Dash comes rocketing past and wins, upsetting both her and Scoots.

[Texus]

do you have a new chapter soon? I want to read the story, but i want to be sure that it is worth the time if there is something new coming.
Many storys seems to be death if they are two or three month´s old.
PS: Well i saw it was just a month but well

[Texus]

well the story could be more it think. I would like it if the story is more or less a bit more serious or get a comedy tag.
My second point is, that i get the feeling that not much happen in one chapter. I am not sure if it is really rushed, and i would have to read it again to be more precisely, but i think you should at least make it longer and maybe let them talk a bit or something like that.

I mean in this chapter with nearly only the clothes, you could have shown the race too and maybe she could play something with the Cutiemark Crussaiders.

I like the story, but i think i didn´t expected it exactly like this.

[thisistheusernameichose]

So...... is it too early for me to unfave this? Or should I just give up and spare myself the sad?

[Pixel Berry]

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[guardian soul]

is the story dead?

[Texus]

i rember i liked it really much, do you continue this story? I hate to think of it as a story corpse, and one of those i usually manage to come across if i search for a good story, but gladly it happense mostly only in a group.

[proverbs]

As previously stated in chapter eight I cannot support the idea of this awesome character gaining any body parts/traits from the MLP universe.

I think Ally is an awesome character, given by the fact that she has not only been sent to Equestria-in a Displaced fashion type of manner-but also offers up a different perspective because he is handicapped and needs to deal with that on top of being in the world of Equestria.

So my current verdict is... This CHARACTER is worth tracking.

[breese101]

I coulda sworn I saw Jesus rolling his eyes at me every time I came back. Well what would you do if you were in his situation would you just say welcome every time you died and came back to life or would you just roll your eyes

[Jonny Bench]

Please continue this. I must know what happens next! Also nice designs for the clothes. They really stand out

[1MilesPrower]

Love the story, I really need to know what happens next. :)

[Haver]

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