I wake up in a field outside in a field, near a forest. However, I don't remember falling asleep. I can't remember a large part of my memories, and I'm talking entire months, not days or weeks. I remember my entire life from the day I was born to my graduation as a year 11 student a couple weeks ago. But there's still large parts that I'm missing. I must find my way back home and get my memories back, but what's this about a fight that I'm destined to be part of? And why do I look like an olden-day samurai?
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Right, this is my late New Year's gift to you guys. Sorry bout that. Anyway, this is my second fanfic, constructive criticism is appreciated. Also, yes I realise that the whole 'amnesia' thing is overused from what I've seen among this site but bare with me here okay? Finally, story is set before the season 3 finale so EG will be included, and there will be slight, very slight crossovers with a couple of anime (mostly of Bleach). Hope you guys enjoy it.
This story is fan-based and I own nothing. All references and My little pony: Friendship is Magic belong to their respective owners.
Keep going omg I will be WATCHING YOU
3928857 Two chapters and it's that good?
Thanks a lot mate, I'll do my best. 
WOOO SEMI SELF INSERT!!
That was awesome xD
BANZAI!!!!!!!
So any sword move read in a manga? How about Inuyasha's Wind Scar?
3933008 I've never actually finished reading or watching inuyasha, I stopped at like episode 10 or 12. So, sorry but I don't know what that is.
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3933577 OKAY I GET IT!!
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I feel that this could be better if it wasn't Anthro...
3933804 Is there a problem with it being anthro? Seriously is there? Because with what I have in my head for this story can only really be done by doing anthro.
3933970 not a problem...though when Discord appeared, I had trouble not imagining him as Mister Miyagi with a horn and snaggle tooth
3941548 To be honest, I wasn't really planning on having Discord in here. But I just realised that I do now.
3941628 good choice. now get back to brainstorming
3944014 Aye sir!
3944020 good man.Dismissed!
This story is great. I hope that the next chapter comes soon.
4313941 I'll try my best, that's all I can say because unfortunately, exams are coming soon. Chapter 3 will take a little bit but hopefully I can get it out before they start.
Fucking love it! I would watch Bleach if I didn't have 10 other anime's I'm watching as well as it's length :/
Also, forgot to say but I saw that sneaky Guerren Lagann reference xD
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Interesting start. I look forward to seeing where you take this...
4340940 Believe me when I say that I have plenty of ideas for this story. So hopefully you won't be disappointed.
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Ooh. Sounds exciting. 
4341725 you get a fav, a watch and a like my friend, congratulations!
4370821 Thanks Tesla. I'll try not to let you down either mate.
4321415 i missed that reference...
4371274 What, the Gurenn Laggan reference?
4371329 yeah, pretty much
WOOOO THREE AWESOME CHAPTERS PLEASE MOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAARRRRRRR
my first thought when i first read this was Rouroni Kenshin (i hope i spelt that right!)
I've no idea why...
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Same here...
I think it's 'I am quickly shaken.
swiped
forgot to realize.
bodies of the wolves made of wood.
ether, 'My eyes began to widen' or, 'My eyes widened'
not just me
soothing my worried mind, is a better choice of words.
A better choice of words would be, I steadied myself.
became
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These are only some of the many grammatically incorrect/poorly spelled/and poorly worded sentences/words in this story. It was a good story (characterization, plot, settings, etc...) but it still had those flaws holding it back and making it a good story. So I suggest that after you are done with a chapter/story that you go back and read it, just to make sure you did everything as you intended. But only do it after a little while, like 5 or so minutes, not thinking or looking at said story/chapter.
Cause if you do this it will show, and you won't have so many typos.
You don't have to listen to any of my advice, just at the very least try it once.
This is getting good. Don't stop.
Glad to see more of this story. I hope that Rarity keeps that attraction. It'd serve as a good running gag. BTW, will the next chapter come soon?
I cant tell you how awesome your stories are.
When is the next chapter coming out?
Samurai of the Elements, eh? What's he displaced as?^^
Is this how you want it? because It kinda confused me...
Meh, read better stuff... but I'll give it a shot, and see what's the gig.
Alright, it's getting very nice. Kudos to you, buddy!
hey good story so far keep up the good work.