This story is a sequel to A Gamer In Equestria
This story is a soft reboot of A Gamer in Equestria which I have rehashed into a prequel to this story.
After the death of Craig in his last reality and being forced to reset the world back to before he arrived he relives his life once again, but nothing is really as it seems.
Everything seems the same, almost like nothing had changed, even his powers remain even if they are locked away from reach.
Once again setting himself back on the path to find who he should be, his world will be turned back around, but as he tries dark shadows surround him from beyond the Void. Just who is watching him and what are their motives in his life.
One thing is for sure, the story may always repeat the same cycle, but this time, Craig's life will change, but is it for the better or the worst?
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Okay, this ISN'T the story I was thinking of. The source story you have labeled "cancelled" is way too young to be; you had me worried you were remaking a much older, probably equally misguided (likely less, to your credit) story of the exact same name from like three years ago.
6704437 This is the story I had been working on for the last year, I had to rewrite due to the mess it was in and then due to other issues I decided to rewrite it however I wanted to keep the old one as a reminder.
Oh man, we've only just started.
6705011 Ok I'll give you that one... but let's face it he was just fired from a job he loved. So he did feel like hell to begin with.
6705250 I remember when I got fired from my first job and it looked like the pic below.
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Yay! You were right. Good job man!
6705011 Did you just... Did you actually?
6707063
... Yes.
6707935 Welp. You win this round.
6704437 Out of my own misguided curiosity, which story is that?
6711893 Exact same title, written at least three years ago by some guy whose name I forgot. I'm not even completely certain it's on FIMFic; my co-runner at Fan/fic/ Theater 3000 just found the story and ran it for riffing before I ever joined, so it's entirely possible it's a FF.net exclusive.
This isn't related to the rest of the description.
You have my attention!
6744788 Why have I Got your attention?
6744796 I find your story interesting, by the way, if you do any crossovers in the future, my characters from 'For the Emperor and the UNSC!' are ready and
waiting!
Ave Imperiator!
6744803 Umm actually I'm always waiting it's basically a rewrite of my old story if you want to drop me a PM and we'll sort something out
6744813 No problem! And check out my story some time soon!
well this is fun
Woot, new chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
it's "neck" not
next...just fyiThis is now,
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6878719 thank you
6878731
And while I haven't read it yet I plan to soon, see you on the battlefield!
You're welcome.
*stares blankly at the screen* What are you doing?
I'm waiting for another update.......
6946166 writers block along with life and my waiting on editing... it's taking ages once it's sorted I'll try to get a new chapter. but once i get it back to the original version it will just be down to editing to match this version
Well, it may be 'cause I'm not an earth pony, but I don't think manure has emotions.
6992833 thank you for telling me about that I completely missed it
6992833
Woops
Why the fucking hell is this guy so emotionally weak.
7209432 he's got Aspergers Syndrome can't cope with change and social situations.
This chapter was emo as all hell, dude.
7287351 was it that bad?
good chapter cragis bad at holding a secret it seems
Good job keep it up
7375640 Thank you!
Lots of grammar woes, but that's not terrible. It's easily worked on and remembered, once you get used to it and try to stop yourself from posting before going over it. But about three of the dialogue sentences, or rather two, considering what you said afterwards, shouldn't be questions. A question is when you ask something. Try looking it up. Here's a few errors you made. The bold marks grammatical errors.
Question mark should be an elipses, in other words, a dot dot dot. Also, I had to make the period red to amke it easier to see the error. Anyway, that period should be a comma. For more help, try going to the "Edit", option in the story, and right at the top in the rules and regulations box is a link to a writers guide by Ezn, use it. Trust me, it helped me immensely. If you need better explanations, don't be afraid to ask me or, hell, Ezn himself. Although I'm on quite a bit more often then others, so you should get quicker replys from me, but do what you want.
isn't ki physical energy and life force, not spiritual energy?
Damn...
7400327 Yeah, The second time he is almost killed during the story... we really should make him his version of the TFS Krillin owned count
I think there is a problem here... I'm just not sure what.
Aww yeah! this is the moment he stands up for himself, right?
*sigh*
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7400556 Thank you for telling me about that
7400588 Would you want to have Celestia mad at you?
Your pupils dilate in the dark and contract in the light.
7400670 No, but he should at least he should've said
or something like that.
Besides, Celestia is (at least according to canon)completely benevolent, and would
at most
send him to bed earlyprank him.Why is the chapter in mostly italics?
7402380 thank you for mentioning that it was due to an error in the coding on the text.
7209453 huh, I also have Aspergers Syndrome, so I understand how he feels
7405684 As do I he's a self-insert of me