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Doomie has been trying to get out of the hive for a while now. Ever since that 'incident' with the wedding the queen has only one changeling out at a time to collect love. Now it was his turn, and he was going to collect it from the one pony that his queen doesn't want any changeling to go towards, and if that wasn't breaking the rules. He won't even disguise either. He'll just be original and surprise her by shrinking himself. This plan is full proof.
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I'm finding this interesting. It seems like a one-shot, but I am curious on where you are going...
Here is a like and an eyeball watching over ye shoulder.
Edit: Though I have to say, the whole shrinking line in the summary, threw my mind into the gutter before I saw the rating.
i like it so far.
Ha, I'm writing a "shrunken Changeling" story myself. I'll keep an eye on this.
I just wanted to throw this story on the wall and see if it sticks.
When I read that this story was about a shrunken changeling, then read the title, my first thought was "...this is gonna be a vore fic, isn't it?"
Apparently, I spend far too much time on the weird side of fimfiction.
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Little did she know, her new "friends" were actually dragging her off to the Hive
Why he don't change back into normal size xD
aaaaaalright, just to be sure, what road are we talking about
4142582 To tell you the truth. When I was first writing this my first thought was "write a vore fic." But then I thought. "There isn't enough fics (or at least ones I've tried to find) about a big pony just hugging and cuddling a smaller one" so I decided to go the PG route.
BUT. If you guys WANT that kind of fic. Tell me. I might write an alternate ending.
Now if you can excuse me, I must go eat some cake. It is my birthday after all
I really like how this story is going and I have to say I like the idea of an alternate ending.
I rated it teen just in case....
And yes....the pony she was referring to was this guyfc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2014/050/a/3/sucks_by_ponythroat-d776kr5.jpg
*Reads third chapter title*
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i wonder, what did you dream of while creating this story.
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*see's your comment*
well that was odd i cant really say im a fan of vore but i didn't hate it
also
4276250: well....to put it bluntly
Vore is a fetish which involves one big creature eating a smaller one whole.
I would go into detail, but its one of those things that, "If you don't know anything about it, you won't like it"
Plus, I doubt anyone would want to read a paragraph of me talking about some weird fetish i'm into. So....yeah....Vore is things eating things.
4142582 I've been pretty much on all ends of the spectrum in that regard
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hardly, i myself am not a fan of micro/macro vore. same size is ware its at for me. Regardless of my opinions, good luck with your story.
It´s a bit short actually for me, but if this is supposed to be a short story, than it is.
What i read is just fine
Well i think i wait for another end, i think i know what i have from vore, it is not really my thing but i give you still a thumb up
Well i read it and have a question, could he not himself turn easily back into his normal size? I just want to know if i understand this right.
And this Chapter was not bad, i expected worse but it was ok
Well it's not like Pinkie will be able to tell if he releases, right? ;p
Keep going! ;)
I loved this story! Its so cute and when she is petting him aghh its just too much. I also loved your third chapter ending. Gotta say that is one heck of a final line.
Anyway I would love you to continue this with them interacting more, maybe him finally changing his size (Although Pinkie does find him cute this way) but I see you have another changeling story running instead.
Anyway a great read and a like and what not for you!
Did you seriously just reference to Exilo?
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I'm pretty sure some will hate me for saying this, but...
Who?
4366387 the pony that tasted like bacon! I'm pretty sure someone I followed made...
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OOOOHHHHH him
Nah
That would be PS
and/or Pan Sizzle
made by PT
and/or PonyThroat
...
Actually,
now that I think about it
I'm not really sure why I referenced him?
4367516 Exilo is the one with the story, that's what I meant. And, yes, I know about the bacon ass pony, Pan Sizzle.
Omg I'm dying!!!! xDDD
4367516 Haha
4276577 I thought I hated vore, how are you doing this to me?
NO LITTLE JIM! SIT DOWN!
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Good thing they didn't make it. The Changelings would have all had cuteness heart attacks.
4276250 think omnivore, carnivore, herbivore
and apply that to a dirty mind typically and know you have a vague idea, though i imagine youve already read next chapter and have a good idea
SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL PLEASE!!!!!
4553578 No sequel I'm afraid,
there will be another vore fic though. If that makes you happy
4553676 Kinda
I hope it turns out just as great
This seams like it will be cute... I want to read more and see how many D'awws I can drain out of me...
You mean these things?
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This chapter made little to no sense, compared to the previous two. Muscling in your fetish was a poor idea to finish an otherwise cute story
Horses can digest meat, stomach acids will try to digest anything, the difference between herbi and carnivores being the nutrition that they get from the broken down matter, or lack thereof.
That's adorable.
... Wat... i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/116/263/i-have-the-weirdest-boner-right-now.jpg
Thing is, I've seen and read vore before now.... Didn't really like it. This, though...
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I feel like an idiot for both not reading the chapter titles, and for not realizing immediately that this was a vore story XD
I'm not into vore, personally, so this story wasn't overly, uh... hot, to me?
However, it was well written, and in general I liked it! :3
4398464 I thought I did too. Until I discovered the lighter side of it. For stories where the character will be perfectly safe or fine after it's done I like. Whether it's because he/she can't be digested or that he/she becomes like a melted paste like substance that can be reformed later. And while melting into this paste there's no pain. As long as vore doesn't involve graphic digestion and pain I like it. Just steer clear of the dark and gore tags when you're looking for gore stories.
4167861 just so you know this is non fatal soft vore. The changeling will be perfectly alright.
4917489 this story is based on a show with magical multicoloured miniature horses. Your argument is invalid.
5955645 dido
Not much into vore anymore, used to draw and RP soft vore due to a friend that turned out to be an ass. I hate hard vore of any kind, makes me feel sick, but soft is fine. Was worried a bit, but, honestly, should've just pay attention to the tags to know he'd be okay. :B
Nice story overall, I like it. Also, Doomie is best changelling.
The last line, lol... Also, wait, "in situations like this"? ... Did it happen before? XD
cya
Raziel-chan
Well I really liked the first two chapters and then this chapter came. Well I'll just go with what the A/N said at the beginning and leave it at that.
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6112186 On top of everything else, it's Pinkie Pie, who is physics-defying even by pony standards.