A changeling, thrown from Canterlot and seperated from the swarm, finds the safety of the single most important thing in her life at the mercy of some of those most harmed by the invasion.
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Ah che bell'inizio!
Un mutaforma che viene separato dlla madre ma viene trovato da dei pony che iniziano a cercare di aiutarlo a ricongiungersi con la sua famiglia.
2586340 Grazie. Sono contento che ti sia piaciuto. Io amo la madre-bambino dinamica e ho sempre apprezzato changeling. Se vi state chiedendo circa la grammatica, ho usato google translate, perché ho pensato che sarebbe stato elegante a rispondere in italiano.
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Grazie mille!!!!!
I just like this because we have Diamond as the mastermind here. mind you, the Foal Free Press...
also Bugs.
Oh madre e figlio si sono trovati!
Le puledre hanno fatto un ottimo lavoro e ora madre e figlio hanno almeno un posto dove stare in attesa che le acque si calmino! Comunque sia a meno di un miracolo temo che prima o poi Twilight noterà qualcosa di strano, come l'amicizia tra Tiara e le Cutie Mark, e scoprirà la presenza dei nostri amici mutaforma oppure sarà Zecora a presentarglieli finendo nei guai.
2656101 Even I'm not to sure what's going to happen with those two. Trouble is on the horizon, one way or the other. Time will tell if they get hit badly with it.
Diamond Tiara and Silverspoon is way too much OOC, maybe if it was few years later that will be good but right now its just totally other characters
2684331 That is entirely possible. I am not really up to date with the show. I am mostly working off the five minutes of them I have seen on the show and whatever fan fiction I have read. I like where this is going, though, so they will probably stay that way for the most part. I will see if I can sort of reign them in a bit, but no promises.
This is awesome! Faved!
Aaand I just realized that I didn't publish this eight hours ago. I feel, just, so observant.
Dude, where you been!? You disappeared for half a year! One of the more original ideas involving changelings I'd seen and then you were just...gone
Also, quick thing: if you have somepony thinking something, you should italicize it, or at least put it in single quotation marks.
Like this, he thought.
'Or maybe even like this,' some other dude thought.
3753676 Don't I? That's what I try to do. I must have missed it. I type these up off the site and have to put in italics specially. I will take a look. I've been busy. Life came first and I only just recently got back into writing. I don't know if you saw the oneshot I posted, but I think I will be doing a couple things like that every once in a while.
3753676 I found two instances of thought. Thanks for the heads up. I wrote half of this three months ago, so I had forgotten that I even had thought.
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3753789 Here, to make it easier to keep track of, you can just insert the hypertext language directly into the text and the fimfiction HTML will track it. So just put [ i]this[ /i] in there, but you know, without the spaces in the brackets, and it'll totally work like so.
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