The Elusive Badgerpony
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WOOHOO!
Oh no!
Zero editing killed off my boner...
I'm just going to walk away slowly and pretend that I didn't like this.
...Wow.
Alright. Description wise, this was brilliant. I was completely in tune with everything going on, every little feeling was brilliantly displayed.
Morally, I fucking hate you.
So yeah, there's a bit of discord on how I should feel about this. Description and technicality? Brilliant, no complaints. Good description. Can't say much about character, since, well... we only got Time's character on this.
Morality? This is... wow, this just sounds too much like what you'd see in a news story about a parent mentally breaking their child and making them needy for sex. It's a major put-off since I didn't see any genuine... well, care from Dinky to Time. Just a carnal lust. The vibrator really put the nail in the coffin since that would make the mental breaking a lot easier.
It was a masterfully put together piece about a possibly deranged stallion and his foalcon fetish... and I could not have a more confused boner. So thumbs up for the story technicalities and mechanics, but a big thumbs down for the moral premise and concept. I'm not even that put off by foalcon - I've seen it be done properly -, but there's an extreme lack of genuine love here. It just sounds like they're both needy, and Dinky's turning to Time because she sees him as the only one who can actually satisfy her.
...So yeah. What exactly were you aiming for here, author?
Oh God...you did it.
And that's a boring Tuesday? Damn, I want to see what an exciting one looks like...
False advertising! Downvote, unfave, unfollow, reported.
(Not really.)
All I could hear in my head while reading this was "Clocks" by Coldplay.
That said, I want a momma Whooves-inclusive sequel!
I feel so ashamed for reading this...
Time Turner would never do that...
4106496 Yes, we can say for sure that a non-canon character with a blank slate of a personality and a completely open interpretation of his relationships with other characters would NEVER have sex with his stepdaughter who consents the entire time.
Hat are those black lines in the info intro?
This is amazing, I have read more morally ambiguous things before but...... wow this got to me. I just gotta say: Kudos.... kinda..... arrrgghhh confused on whether I should punish boner or not
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Did you call me? Uh...well. ....Yes, those are black bars.
(Those are spoiler tags. I'm not sure why he used them but yeah, just mouse over them.)
4108075
Soo.... Those are pointless then?
4108082 I guess he didn't want to possible offend people with his warnings so....
Kinda?
4106526 Methinks the guy is unable to see time turner as anything but the doctor,And to be fair,'The Doctor' Wouldn't,But Time turner...As you said,He's a blank slate.....Doesn't help that clockmaking tends to lead to insanity,same as being a hatter
Am I the only one who pictures the clock from don't hug me I'm scared 2 clopping to this
what am I even
I can't
4106526
The consent bit is questionable if you ask me. Voiced all my complaints in this comment 4105484 , but to add to it.
I don't think I can relate this consent to much more than, well, mind-breaking. It's strange, as the two are perpetually horny throughout the story, and I can't help but imagine Time as an abusive sort taking advantage of his daughter's almost forced lust.
The vibrator pretty much screwed the whole thing up for me, since I keep thinking he's been training her for this kind of thing. Not sure how else it could've been done... but it's lacking that convincing consent between the two.
It's kinda like how ecstasy can force someone to give consent, or training someone to say a certain thing at a certain time, no matter how embarrassing or morally damaging it is, would result in them saying said thing just because they've been trained to, likely convinced that it's not at all what it really means.
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You're thinking too hard about this. Keep up the good work.
The end is the classic twist that all clop and porn takes; instead of the saying like father like son, it's like daughter like mother. If the daughter's a deviant and the mother finds out it turns out the mother is one too and instantly joins in; while I always enjoy that ending I will say that I find the stories that choose not to do it much more interesting and of course leaves room for more imagination on what follows, possibly another story that isn't 'just' clop between the three.
But considering it was a one shot and written in a very fun flashback style this result does make more sense given his calm collected candor of the tale. Still it would have been fun to have had a storyline where derpy was more drawn into it later or if Time Turner had to face a choice between the two. Still overall I loved it, A- with the only lost points on what I dicussed and that is only from personal preference :P well done and keep up the awesome caffine induced work!
You know I was skeptical about this fic, seeing as how it has all the fetishes I don't like plus it's Time Turner clop, but I have to admit you pulled it off really well. Good job
4109051
Hard not to when it comes to a story like this. Then again, I do like stories that make you think really hard about what's going on, so well done on that part.
I don't think I can offer an upvote or favorite on a story like this, but I'll leave it on my Read Later. Despite what I say, it definitely is an example of technical brilliance.
Congrats, Elusive. You've actually made me go bi-polar on a story.
4108315
NO AUGH STAHP
I swear I herd "One, confident, capable, and obsessed with time and rhythm in an almost unhealthy way. " before! I think i herd it from a song or a show cause it sounds like it rhymes! But i can put my hoof on it
hmmm
4106526 Now I hate myself for liking it...
Not a favorite, but a like. WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO ME!
y u diss anthro, brah.
This isn't weird at all! :3 I luv it! (What is wrong with my life?)
That was absolutely fantastic! I came twice into my little Twilight! Definitely takes my mind off of all the crap!
I...um...err.....what?
This was very well written. And LOL at all the people looking for moral correctness in this story.
4109335
It's a clopfic with 4k words. What kind of issue would the characters be able to resolve and still fuck within this wordframe?
And...? I don't mean to be an ass, but your read later list counts for shit. Just found this very amusing.
Hahahahaha... no. The writing is horrid.
That's not how manic-depressive psychosis work.
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4132408
...None, I suppose? What does this have to do with a story making you think?
Because I'd like to keep it around... in case I wanna read it later? Hence... you know, Read Later? Because you wanna read it later?
Writing was good enough for me.
...Huh? Okay? It was more the thing about the story splitting my opinion between liking it for its description, and hating it for its supposed moral standing. But okay, sure, let's... relate it to a mental deficiency.
That's fun.
Honestly, dunno where the fuck this came from, bud.
Dayum!
MOAR!
4132828 Came from alcohol.
And you were the one who mentioned bipolar over there.
4133123
Bi-polar, as in split between decisions, like two emotional extremes being experienced at the same time. It may not be the literal definition, but it's also a phrase used as such.
Should probably wait until you're sober before commenting. Comes off with a very heavy seriousness to it.
4133310 Meh...
4132408
Do tell me more.
4133857 No.
4133978
No, tell me more. Let me hear some of that wonderful constructive criticism.
4134052 No.
That was actually a rather nice oneshot. I wouldn't have thought of this pairing as working, but it does.
The way you use words is rather phenomenal. Hell I'd pay you to read this.
This is the type of writing I look for in fanfiction: pure, unmodified, novel-quality writing. I look forward to reading your other stories.
4105484
Hey, hey, hey! Some of like those disturbing implications in our dirtywords.
4277090
Bit of a turn-off for me, but hey, whatever gets your rocks off, bud. Fantasy helps keep things outta reality after all.
4278126
Hey, I'm not judging, trust me. I know I'm screwed up.
4278324
Me neither. I know I can be pretty fucked up as well.
This story made me feel things I'm confused about... I don't have a clever image for it... so... Have a Taco...
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YES!
i hope theres more to this a familer 3some is what i want to see more >:3
4108315
Well, now you're not.