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Elusive Phoenix


If a tire was on fire during a blizzard, would you stay close to it and keep warm, or run from the awful smell?

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The Doctor has had a good, long run through time and space with Ditzy Doo. But it is that time again for him to regenerate bodies. But this time, it seems... different...
What would happen if The Doctor regenerated... as a mare?

Chapters (4)
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Comments ( 438 )

Too much talking back and forth.
But Dinky must ask what must be asked!:pinkiehappy:

I love the idea :twilightsmile:

One way you can break up all the talking back and forth a bit is to explain a little more in detail what they are doing while talking.

Other than that, this seems a story worth keeping an eye on. Poor Doctor; finally a girl but still not ginger. :fluttercry:

This is brilliant. Please, do continue. :raritywink:

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Still not ginger! And now Ditzy has been left behind, and so suddenly. D:

Well, this is going to be something I'll be keeping up with. It's very entertaining and well written, I love it so far.

How fast do you update your stories?

QUESTION! *hoof up*

The Doctor only regenerates when he is deathly injured. What happened to him to cause the sudden regeneration? :rainbowderp:

Hoho, I like it.

Just needs a little fleshing out - add idle actions so everyone seems like they're moving about while they talk, and perhaps give a reason why the doctor has to regenerate. (IIRC, he doesn't just regenerate for shits and giggles, he does it because he's taken a mortal wound of some sort. Perhaps a stray cyberpony shot, the wound for which he's hidden under his coat and only reveals when he kicks Ditzy out?)

This is getting interesting. I don't know why i just feel drawn to stories where a characters gender is changed. :twilightblush:

Might want to change the chapter title to Am I a Mare?
Not girl.

ALSO, :yay: It's finally here!
This is awesome :pinkiehappy:

Edit: HOLY SHIT IT'S IN THE FEATURE BOX!

Needs some proof reding and revision. Great idea though. Liked and favorited

LOL, I'm a read this later,
but it makes me think of this, fast forward to 17:00 for relevant part, I mean yeah the whole things good believe me but min. 17 is the most relevant.

Oh hey I just post this and when the page is refreshed guess whats in the featured box! :yay:

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zacktronic energy discharge?

Interests have been peaked. Continue:rainbowlaugh:

Mother of Celestia, this is interesting.

aaaakwaard! still awsome story! great to see dinky/pip shipping can't wait to see more

U need to make this a story with many chapters

I expect great things from this fic. GREAT THINGS!

Awesome! :pinkiehappy: This is great and I can't wait to read more!:twilightsmile:

I have been watching waaaaay too much of this show over the summer. But that means I can follow along.

THIS IS THE MOST AMAZING FIC I'VE READ THIS SUMMER!!!! :flutterrage: I'ME RAGING WITH HAPPINESS!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you for bringing this into my life. :twilightsmile:

So I guess that when she meets Ditzy, it'll be like when 10 met Sarah Jane in School Reunion. And still not ginger.

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I try to update one per day, but usually end up two per week.:derpytongue2:

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I try to update one per day, but usually end up two per week.:derpytongue2:1144392 Well then, you'll just have to wait for the story to continue!:pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy:

1145579 No no really, they were just talking and then he was all "oh crap I'm dying, OUT YOU GO Derpy baiiii!"

Regens are supposed to be the most dramatic stage of a Who's cycle... D:

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I try to update one per day, but usually end up two per week.:derpytongue2:1144392 Well then, you'll just have to wait for the story to continue!:pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy:1144759 It probably won't be longer than five or six chapters, but MIGHT have multiple sequels if requested enough!

I think I just broke the comment thing because I didn't delete previous ones:derpytongue2:

Wow, I was third comment in and now you're all the way up on the feature box a few hours later. Good for you, this has some potential. Just work on breaking up some of those long streaks of dialogue with some action and reminders of who is talking and you should be fine :twilightsmile:

Out of control A.I's... :rainbowlaugh:

Sounds interesting, and I'll be watching...

What I have just read, is one of the most interesting first chapters i have ever seen.

Everyone who has read this now has a giant smile on their faces.

May celestia rest their tired mouth muscles.

Pipsqueak, age seven: Strange pony breaks into house; instantly starts interrogating her.

Pipsqueak=Boss

And then, It's time for the next generation to save Equestria, ALLONS-Y- I mean ANDIAMO!

1144448 The name is 'Am I a girl?' because it is a reference to when David Tennant regenerated into Matt Smith and yells, "Am I a girl?"

1145607 Seriously I think everypony who writes doctor whooves stories hate me cause they takee FOREVER to update! Just want to make sure :twilightsmile:

1145945 Sorry! Working on three fics at once, one not being updated due to lack of information anywhere ever, and another just being plain terrible, yet recieving requests to continue, and this one because I need to update the other two.:flutterrage::fluttershbad::applejackconfused::pinkiecrazy::rainbowhuh::rainbowwild::raritycry::unsuresweetie::facehoof:

I have never seen Dr. Hooves, but this is an enjoyable fic none the less. Please make more.:fluttershysad:

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That's bad.
Wait... did you mean "Who" or "Whooves"?
Because it is set in the "DW&A" universe, and will have MANY references to the show (Mainly Christopher Eccleston to Matt Smith).

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GODDAMMIT SPOILERS! I'm watching that episode as we speak!:fluttershbad:

1146059 OOPS-Y!

And in case anyone is still oblivious, the Doctor doesn't know why he/she regenerated, and why he/she regenerated as a girl.

1146044 What did I mean? What did I mean indeed....:pinkiecrazy:

That cover image immediately reminded me of a picture of Blackjack I saw on Deviantart.

This seems pretty interesting. I wonder how it will turn out?

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That... doesn't...
*System Error*

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I do want a new cover picture...
Just one picture of Colgate isn't enough!

If anyone wants to make some new cover art, be my guest.

1146111 hehehe, I look forward to preforming mischief on you.:pinkiehappy:

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*ACTIVATE EQUESTRIA PORTAL IN FIVE...*

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