Brony form Northern Ireland. Think that kinda says it all really. For now at least
After living most of his life in Trottingham, Time turner makes the decision to move away from his hometown to the quiet little town of Ponyville, hoping that the sleepy town will mean a better life for him and his son, away from all those pitying looks.
Managing to get their lives back to schedule until a upset comes in the shape of one grey pegasus.
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I go no further than asking of whom speaks?
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Albeit mentioning who's talking, pardon my LOL DIDN'T READ!
, in the description, it wouldn't hurt to have a "Hey, Time Turner!" in there, or a self-reference. Other than that, feels comfy. You should introduce Monday morning too. It may seem difficult at first, I hate it too, but at least come up with something.
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More plz?
I sense much potential in this story. The characterization is good, and the "bowties are cool" line was much appreciated. It made me wonder what Pipsqueak's mother looked like, as Pip doesn't look much like Time Turner.
I recommend you write more quickly, before your readers don eyepatches and mutiny!
Interesting. The change in tone is a bit crass, but I'm intrigued. Looking forward to more. ^^
I'm about to read this, so I'll update this comment when I have, but first I just want to say that I happily support a story with Time Turner where he's not mistakenly referred to as "Dr. Whooves."
2378831 I'm glad I managed to capture your interest.
Yes, the tonal shift is rather irksome but I think the context is important. Chap one has him running to and fro worrying about his son, first day at school etc whereas this -for the majority- is just TT. Him and his thoughts. Obviously it was a very hamfisted and It did go off my original intentions but I still think it fits. Albeit haphazardly. Perhaps I could have made it fit better but for now those skills lie outside my sphere of influence.
Plus I am a crass writer.
2378847 Dr. Whooves is canon now. :P
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I'm sorry, but you're mistaken. Canon is established by the show, not soulless iPad game tie-ins developed by a company that's completely unrelated to the show's creators. "Dr. Whooves" has never appeared as such in the show.
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Actually on some of the merchandice his name is Dr. Whooves. And one can not mistakenly call him Dr. Whooves. It all depends on how they perceive the character. I call him both Doctor Whooves and Time Tuner just like I call Ditzy Do both Ditzy Do and Derpy Hooves.
cute, you have my attention
can't wait to see how this plays out :)
I am in approvence of this story
Oh this is getting instresting!! Can't wait for more
This is so.. New! And Fresh! It's so interesting! Please write some more! I really love this story!
nice