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steel soul


Gonna work on that Kingdom Hearts fic at some point

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LALALA LALALA~YAH!!!!

i have the werdested bonner right now

Woah... I never knew that I could cum that hard...

Fucking fantastic work. Would love a sequel!!

Comment posted by Professor Donger deleted Dec 10th, 2015

6717602 Mayhaps there shall be. :raritywink:


6717744 You were warned in the description. If you're here to bitch at a story just because you don't like the subject matter, kindly fuck off. If you have any legitimate criticism, leave that in a comment.

And her friend's reaction be like :

"Hey Ruby, what would like ya do at the Father's day?"

"Well, we'll have fun together."

"What kind of fun if ah could ask?"

"It involves a huge stallion cock, an assload of sticky stuffs and ice cream of course."

The expression on her friend's face was priceless.

6717938 Foalcon is still underage porn and it is a disgusting fetish that shouldn't be allowed on the site that is my legit criticism so sorry for fucking offending you with my comment cunt.

6717744 as the author stated...(Mostly born of an RP me and my marefriend did to pass the night away) , an RP a roleplaying scenario between two full grown peole who enjoy this. just because you don't doesn't mean you should shame someone for what they like to do in a roleplay scenario. no actual children were being touched or hurt so it doesn't matter. so just stop sans or else...you're gonna have a bad time.

6718596 You're the one badmouthing them. Also sorry that people like what they like.

6718646 It's a beautiful day outside, birds are singing, flowers are dancing, on days like this kids like you...should be burning in hell

6718663 XD nice. but in all seriousness I understand you may not enjoy this kind of work, but if the characters are fictional and it was all just some made up story between two people who are into roleplay sex then I don't think it should be put on full blast. yes foalcon is a very strange subject and while I myself may not be a fan of it to an extreme I gave this one a pass on my rule because the author makes it clear that it was all just some story created between two people who are into roleplay sex and if for them that happened to be foalcon I have no right to judge them and neither do you. I think you and I should go to grillby's and just leave behind our judgment of this story, the author, and of each other.

6718751 I didn't read it so i didn't know that part so I deleted my earlier comments

6718780 alright I see you. so we good? we good. just remember to at least read the description so you don't go making an assumption because you were looking bad out there, but it's all good now. I think in time this will all die down and people who still see your comments if they somehow still see them may not understand, but you'll know you did a smart thing and it makes you a better person knowing that you retracted your previous statements and with that I must settle more disputes across the web as the wise old sage I am. up up and awaaay! *flies off into the distance of a sunset* XD

Mmm mmm mmm, tasty delicious work well done :ajsmug:
Well done!

Haha!
Keep it up.

6718596 Actually, no, it's not legitimate criticism. It's a gripe you have with a fetish someone else has that you are arbitrarily deciding is the worst thing to humanity since the Holocaust. If you didn't like the writing style or saw multiple errors in grammar/spelling/sentence structure and pointed it out in a comment, that is criticism. If you point out a logical fallacy or an error in the lore of the story and point it out in a comment, that is criticism.

What you're doing is shouting "Your story sucks because it has a fetish I don't like". And calling me a cunt just goes to show how immature you're acting over a fictional story. People have kinks. They like to write about said kinks sometimes. I absolutely despise scat, watersports and diaper play, but do I go out of my way to read things and bash them just simply because I don't like the subject matter? No, I don't. I just don't read them.

this is scary, not saying its bad but, im scared of RP

As much as I like the premise of this clopfic (i.e foalcon, incest, etc), during the clop scenes felt a little...um....'rape-y' in context. Mainly do to the daughter's reluctance and the father not giving a crap about it. It felt a little bit creepy. Which is quite surprising since the clop is pretty good.

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Yeah, I can see that actually

6721520 Trust me. I know. I assure you, the thought already occurred to us while we were writing the story, and there is a reason for why all the actions in this story occured. Unfortunately, our means of writing together has currently left us, and we are unable to flesh out cause and effect at this moment.

Believe me when I say that I wish we could have gone into more detail about why things are the way they are. And if you are truly curious about it, I could PM you with some of the details. But at current point in time, this has to stand alone as a one-shot until we can continue working together on the how and why.

"FUN FOR THE WHOLE FAMILY" :pinkiehappy:
Dammit Pinkie......

Wonder when we will have a secod.

6718663
I agree with you 100%, any one under the age of 15/16 are underage and should not have any form of sex, especially when incest is involved.:ajbemused:

6718751

but if the characters are fictional and it was all just some made up story between two people who are into roleplay sex then I don't think it should be put on full blast.

Fictional?:rainbowhuh: my good sir, have you not learned of the multiverse theory, for if you have you would know that what is fictional in are world is in fact real in another, so yeah, what happened in this story is true, and that steel guy is on my poncing bag list for if I'm ever in his world.:twilightangry2:
S.W.B.

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:rainbowderp:

Well by what you say there's someone that looks like you running around mass murdering people without a care in the world. And not getting caught at all so...Yeah...Is he on your list too?

Just to clarify this is really not canon in any of my stories. While it is a bit...Out of the norm for one of my characters, epically Steel, this is, and will always be, a work of fiction and one that me and my girlfriend did one for fun and nothing else.


But yeah, taking the multiverse throy to heart, theres bad stuff going on that one can not stop, no matter how much they want to. I read a Story where Twilight Sparkle both mind rapes and normal rapes all of her friends before moving onto to the moon and sun princess. and There is, was, and always will be little I can do to fictial characters in that universe and all one is able to do is make a story where someone rights that wrong. In doing so however, there will always be a world where the badguy wins and the goodguy dies. There will always be a world where the helpless are helpless and the strong are evil.

In the end, rather I made since or not all I can say is, make what you want of Steel and Ruby in this universe but don't judge Steel in all others.

6928011

Well by what you say there's someone that looks like you running around mass murdering people without a care in the world. And not getting caught at all so...Yeah...Is he on your list too?

Yes there is, not in this world but another, (creaks knuckles) who says I don't want to kick my own ass some day.:rainbowdetermined2:

make what you want of Steel and Ruby in this universe but don't judge Steel in all others.

Don't worry, I won't judge ever steel that's out there, but if I run in to the steel of this story (takes giant mallet out from behind back) he's going down big time. (grins evilly):rainbowdetermined2:

S.W.B.

6930753
:rainbowderp:
Well. To each their own I guess.

6935056
:ajsmug:
And to all there own ways.
Talk to ya on the flip side S.S.
S.W.B.

6937568
Your posts are hilarious.

Hilariously autistic. Go outside.

6951055
O.k three things,:ajbemused:

#1. Have you recently gone on a hike for more then two hours?:twilightoops:

#2. Have you recently cut down a tree for a plank to make a drum?:applejackunsure:

#3. Did you try to ride a bike last month with a 50,lb pack on your back?
With no training! :rainbowhuh:

Because I have, and why do you think I joined these guys,:rainbowdetermined2: Mentally Deficient Authors .
any ways, live long and prosper.
Sir Well Borne.:ajsmug:

6954121
When I said 'go outside', I didn't mean you actually had to go outside.

What I'm saying is that you should look at the things you're posting, and realize how they make you sound, and stop doing them.

6955183
What, you think I have someone else do the posting, or wear a blindfold as I type.
Hell no!!

I type what I know and I know what I type!

And I don't care what others may think of me, no mater how weird my postings may be!

And so I'm gonna follow you, is that o'k. :trollestia:

S.W.B.

This made me cum three times..... good job :twilightsmile:

Best! Story! Please don't stop!
This right here is grade A clop!

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Laddie, that was 12 weeks ago,:ajbemused: and I believe your line was..."or become more understanding of the veiws of others".

S.W.B.:moustache:

7216833
What's going on? I'm confused

7220613
Nothing much laddie, it's just T'W,of D brought up some old news. So how have ya been lately Steel? doing good I hopes.

S.W.B.

7226027
I have been. GF been asking for a lot of drawings from me

7226281
*Points towards NightmareKnights comment*

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Well of coarse she's a she, I can tell by by her profile pic. :twilightsmile: I like it when others do that, makes thing a lot less awkward. :moustache:

S.W.B.

Someone wrote this... somone actually wrote this...

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