• Member Since 31st Dec, 2011
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Violise


crazy effin' artist; who dabbles in procrastination from time to time

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Dr.Whooves is a recently married stepfather, and I am not revealing anything else or it will ruin the surprise.

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 127 )

I put this in read later

... Wow, not bad! Tracked, simply because I want this to continue!

Let me start off by saying that I HATE SHIPPING. SO. SO. SO. SO MUCH.
and now I will say that this story punched me right in the HNNNNNNNNNNNNNG
This needs a sequel of some sort.

Feels. So many feels. And that song. I may just have to use it... I approve of this fic wholeheartedly. Keep up the good work.

BR

Wonderwall outta nowhere. This has. Been deemed vurry, vurry good.:rainbowkiss:

Oh how i hate that song... :twilightangry2:

But seriously a really good story. :twilightsmile:

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I picked the song on a shuffle list to be honest:twilightblush:

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Well it fits the story so i cant complain too much haha.

well that was sweet!:ajsmug:

Is that it? I'm feeling that this story has potential to go on... Otherwise, this is brillliant

It has potential... and I shall write more on this story, I swear it

I like that your covering a facet that we never explore in the Doctor Whooves and Derpy shipping pair and that is how he would react to being a dad. You usually only see Derpy interacting with Dinky. This story has potential for some really wonderful father/child bonding moments plus it deals with the whole step-dad thing and how some guys really do try hard to be great parents even if they aren't the biological ones. Kudos, I'm tracking this fic.

Bam! Stayed up all night for the new chapter and I have no idea if it's any good... please don't hate me :fluttercry: I'll re edit it if the is too much fluff and boring

HNNNNG and DAWWWWW, that is the only thing one can feel for this story. Thank you for this. It's not too much fluff and boring, that's the kind of story this is it needs fluff otherwise it doesn't carry the same emotional impact.

one more chapter this afternoon then off to EQ for submission:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Thanks a lot for another chapter. I think you handle the little moments very well. Dr. Whooves comes as extremely endearing, the whole new dad trying very hard thing is very d'awww and the way Dinky reacts to him is also wonderful. Like I said there are few fics that deal with good dads, and even fewer fics that handle the subject of step-dads because there are guys that care about raising children. :pinkiehappy:

Peace out

Another great chapter.

I have a very bad feeling about what's coming though but I'm not gonna speculate, I'll wait and see.

I feel like you're gonna make me cry though :fluttercry:

Shouldn't this also have a romance tag, too?

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I didn't initially because I knew that I wanted the story to be about Whooves and his emotional journey; but if it really needs the tag, I'll add them:twilightsmile:

:fluttershbad:: I am not going to write another chapter until at least Tuesday because I just found out that my best friend just died in a car accident. I'm sorry if that is a little bit longer off than people want... i just need a little time to grieve...

420753
As usual, a well written story that would deserve applause.
:fluttercry:BTW, best regards to your friend. And just remember that everyone in this community cares greatly:pinkiehappy:.

This next one is gonna be gooooood :pinkiehappy:

My regards as well :pinkiesad2:

Even the best friends die sometimes
Even the wrong ones can feel right
Out of despair that fills your mind
There's something there
To Help you where
You go

I have complete empathy for you, dude. Hang in there.

420753 take as long as you need dear. i will be sending Fluttershy to you shortly to help you out. she's real upset too.:fluttercry: but you have to try smiling.:pinkiesad2:

Looking forward to the next one, but take what time you need, my condolences.

Question: Tennant or Smith?.

I only vaguely know what Doctor Who is, yet I completely adore this fic, so kudos to you sir or madam. I love the character development in this story and the main character is great regardless of whether or not you watch the BBC or BBC America. It's just a story about a good person trying to do good things it's not anymore complex than that when you think about it. There absolutely nothing bad I can really say about this fic, maybe I don't like the song choices but that's only personal preference.
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Peace Out.

@TheNumber1shadowfan

The story back in the first chapter it said 25th, so neither

Thank you all for your kind words...

sorry to hear the news :pinkiesad2: but remember that everyone here in the brony community will deeply care for you:fluttercry:
...don't worry bout rushing anything take your time I know how you feel...I too lost my childhood friend by a intoxicated bus driver...but things will just have to go on:pinkiesad2:...anyways sorry to get all sappy bout this whole thing but yeah...everyone here will understand what your going through...your not alone:pinkiesmile:

not bad Anthony :ajsmug: I have to say much improved over your previous work.

Heh, cute. I keep telling ponies, foals are smarter than we give them credit for.

"...a bubbly sneezed mare sneezed..."

I spy an extra sneeze!

Nice update. I like how Whooves and Rich learned a lesson from their daughters :twilightsmile:

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Ah fixed it thanks partner:ajsmug::facehoof:

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Haha no problem. It just made me laugh for some reason so I thought I'd point it out :rainbowwild:

I really enjoy this fic, but you should work on keeping your format moe consistent. You only really need extra spacing between paragraphs if you're switching scenes or if there's a drastic switch in perspective. You also need to stick to one indentation at the beginning of each paragraph.

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Yeah my quirks when writing seem to be keeping my stories back a little, as I have already realized early on (EqD pre-readers are kinda harsh sometimes). I'm sure I'll get it right someday:derpytongue2:

Time to quote the wiki!

"Neisseria only infect humans and have never been isolated from animals because the bacterium cannot get iron other than from human sources"

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I quoted that one cause i had it once but Ill go back and edit the disease. For some worse equestrian disease ....just for you...:pinkiecrazy: Just kidding:derpytongue2: but I will fix it later.

yeah, definitley a birthday they'll never forget. anyway, you sprang back up to us really quickly and I just want to tell you that it's alright to take as long as you want, but soon, because i want to hear the good news/bad news

454957 symptoms: nosebleed, possibly a symptom coupled with the seizing, turning pale.

Commonly found in Myoglobinuria. Caused by A protien found in the muscles of a horse escaping thu the urine. It causes the horse to have a defficency, and the defficiency is what is reffered to myoglobinuria.

Also, Heat Exaustion, makes the most since because of the dress and the party. =)

:fluttercry:

Also, might I ask how old the Doctor is at this point? Since he's in his 25th incarnation and all.

Uhh...455830 i don't have a solid answer to that one :applejackconfused: buuut I am going to venture a guess that he is at least 17000 years old, if i'm not mistaken.

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