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lunabrony


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After a year and a half of being on this site... FIRST STORY FEATURED! 4/29/14
I love you all.

Parents gone, check.
Castle to themselves, check.
Totally gonna be the responsible older sister... debatable.

Celestia finally has a chance to prove that she's old enough to stay home alone with Luna, if she doesn't completely mess everything up first.

Very short story, very cute story. Personal writing practice.
HERE IS A LINK to the artist of the cover image, of which I take no credit. Awesome gallery, check it out!

Chapters (26)
Comments ( 381 )

Very cute. You'd need sleeping pills to make Luna sleep at night, I think.

She exclaimed in fear. No, surprise. Surprise and fear. Fear and surprise. No, amongst her emotions was worry as well. Amongst her emotions were such feelings as surprise, fear, worry-

[From the sidelines, Pinkie coughs loudly in irritation.

"Oi! Get on with it!"]

You have got to love the Monty Python references.

...salad and salad accessories.

And the King of the Hill references.

Cute. This reminds me of the Ask Woona and Tia tumblr. I am interested to see how this ends. Therefore, I shall favorite and upvote. As Winston Churchill said, "KBO.":twilightsmile:

The Monty Python references were not lost on me. Please make Celestia read "Goodnight Woon" as a bedtime story for Luna, because from the title I was expecting a ponyfied version of the popular children's book.

3792319 I actually initially thought about doing that but aside from humorous references I try to stray from making straight up parodies of other people's work, it just seems like laziness and a failure of originality. I loved Goodnight Moon as a child but when it came to actually making a ponified version of it, I just felt more comfortable going with something more original.

"What, just because I'm older means I don't get to participate in a completely harmless activity meant for a younger demographic? That's ignorant, Luna."

Subtle brony reference?

So...if there's a part 2 coming, why's the story marked complete?

3793671 Part 2 is almost done being written it's just still being edited, it will be up tomorrow!

That and my brain is derpy and I know I'll forget to change it.

This is pretty adorable... you could make some more to this story... Like more of the life of the younger siblings! :pinkiehappy: That would sound like fun...

Please tell me you'll continue with this and Celestia trying to care for Woona and Dissy!

3799235 Wasn't planning on it, but reception has been overwhelming. I only planned this as a short story, but everyone seems to like it...

I can't say I won't. :trixieshiftright:

"S'early!" Luna said.

"It's not early for big ponies, only for fillies," the elder responded.

I think you may have mistook something here.

If Luna wasn't much trouble, how much trouble could Discord be?

Well, he has fangs and you are treating him like a puppy.

This was adorable.
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I would not mind a part three to this... :pinkiehappy:

That bit with the Newspony was priceless!

3821039
And go ahead with the shorts. They're good.

3821044 I will if I feel I have something worth publishing.

Luna pushed closer to Celestia, whispering in a quiet voice. "Come on, let me be in front. You're always in front."
"I'm older, that's why. Stay on your side."
"But I want to be first for once!"
"Yeah, well too bad. You're younger, and you're always going to be second. Get used to it.

God damnit Tia. :ajbemused: It's like she WANTED Luna to become Nightmare Moon!

3821334 They didn't know anything about Nightmare Moon at the time. Celestia apologized for it.

"Yeah, well too bad. You're younger, and you're always going to be second. Get used to it."

And so begins the creation of Nightmare Moon.

3822285 yes i know. :twilightsmile: but it's still like Celestia was planting the seed of the Nightmare to grow early on. :rainbowwild:

you should keep this going

When Celestia had finished, she Luna to bed, and cracked the door open.

There is a word missing here.

That last line, I see what you did there.:rainbowlaugh:

This is so adorable.:yay::scootangel: I think I am getting diabetes. That last part has nothing to do with the story, I just thought someone should know.:pinkiecrazy:

KBO.:twilightsmile:

3930014
well, sometimes it happens to accidentally a word...

Discord just smiled. "Could you get me a glass of water?" :rainbowlaugh:

When he said " could you get me a glass of water" I was like oh god here we go :rainbowwild::rainbowlaugh:

This is so adorable. I really like how you wrote Discord here!

"I''s gonna use my magic!"

Unless you are expressing your love for a certain Masakazu Katsura manga, you only need one apostrophe for I's.

I am a horrible, terrible, person. I realized right away that it was all in Luna's imagination. However, as soon a I saw the word "tentacle," I am ashamed to say that I immediately thought "hentai.":twilightblush::facehoof: I am so ashamed of myself, I think I will be in the corner for a while.

4082292 Just got back from work. Fixed. Thank you, as always!

That was terrible. And hilarious. It was...hilarrible!

Did you happen to see a movie recently?

Ah the teenage years, I remember them well. I hated them so much. Luna, Celestia, and Discord's however, seem to have quite a bit more magic and a whole lot less suicidal thoughts wet dreams depression jerks.

Adorable as hell. You should be arrested for weaponizing cuteness.

KBO.:twilightsmile:

Lol! This story is so awesome, funny and sweet! :rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy:

Attention! Breaking developments! Princess calls the news nothing but lies! Trust and credibility of news outlets falls into question!"
An official looking stallion who had been standing nearby whispered something into the ear of the announcer.
"Attention! Breaking developments! Newspony fired for being an idiot!...Wait, what?!"
:rainbowlaugh:

[/Do you want to build a snowmare?"] Frozen reference?:trixieshiftright:

Oh gods, this was too cute and perfect!

And an unknown amount of time later, while Nightmare Moon is on the moon, she finds a Canterlot Cady ice cream cone floating on the moon's surface, perfectly preserved by a lingering magical aura and the vacuum of space.

...wow. That was meant to be funny, but it just made me cry...

"You have ice cream on your-"
"Shut up," Celestia said.

No need to be rude, Celly.

4270156 That's teenagers for you

4270285 true, but... she's a princess. Not exactly " wise and kind," eh?:trixieshiftright:

A large cart was sitting at the bottom of the hill, which Luna squealed with delight at the sight of.

There is one extra space between these words.

Adorable. I was expecting Luna to call it "ouscream" like Michelle Tanner. Especially with that "I want alla them!" line. Good thing she did not, there is only so much adorable a person can take.

KBO.:twilightsmile:

4275811 one does not simply outcute Michelle Tanner, dude

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