Goodnight Woon

by lunabrony

Micro: The End

Author's Note:

I really have no more ideas for this will be the last update. Thank you all for reading.

Celestia and Luna stood on the highest turret of Canterlot Castle, not a word spoken between them. They were gazing out at the horizon, and Celestia's horn lit up the darkening twilight skies. It was a calm and gentle moment between them, and all seemed well, until Luna suddenly began to pitch forward without any explanation, her wings folded and legs stiff. The Princess of the Night hurtled towards the unforgiving ground, while Celestia remained upright and uncaring.

Clack

The small plastic purple horse hit the floor and came to rest near the wide double doors, her white unicorn twin still precariously perched on top of the childs plastic castle. Nearby, a large stuffed plush alligator towered over a wall made of building blocks, and a demonic chimera of a monster with mismatched parts lay forgotten near a plate containing a cheese sandwich.

"Dinner's ready NOW!" A female voice called from downstairs, sounding annoyed and impatient. "Don't make me call you again!"

A little girl in a pink hoodie sat crosslegged by the castle, her small and fragile hands carefully picking up the purple horse and setting it back on its hooves.

"Five more minutes, mom! Celestia is making the sun go down!"

"Now, Lauren!"

The girl sighed, and stood up, bumping against the castle. The white unicorn wobbled, not meant for this particular display,and clattered over the side, knocking over its purple counterpart and leaving them both laying on the floor. The girl pulled back the hood of her sweatshirt, and dark red hair tumbled down to her shoulders.

"I'm coming!" She called back, and turned out the light, leaving the adventures behind.

For now.

Comments

[Tatsurou]

Sad to see this end.

[FlufferNutters]

A nice way to end it and I like what you did there to end it.

[Neko Majin C]

The white unicorn wobbled, not meant for this particular display,and clattered over the side, knocking over its purple counterpart and leaving them both laying on the floor.

Missing space.

Funny ending. At least this did not end with an autistic boy looking at a snow globe. Ha, I mean, who would be stupid enough to end a long running series in that way?

I am sad to see this end, but I enjoyed it while it lasted.

KBO.

[Prince Harmony]

A beautiful and heart felt way to end a great series.

[PinkiePieFox]

Oh I see what you did there; rather creative!

[Mayhew Cullen]

That was cute. A wonderful ending to a lovely set of short stories.

I'll see you at the next chapter.

[NobleValor]

In the middle of reading the 'Let Him Go' arc and I can't help but wonder have they tried talking to him about the usage of his power. Flattering myself as something of an author (), I can't help but see the possible tragedies or heartbreaking angles of this. (For the record, I'm aware that this is, in fact, a 'comedy' and 'random' story, but still)

[NobleValor]

What I'm curious about is, on the 'Drained' chapter, ponies don't normally wear clothes, so how can you tell if a pony is 'naked?'

[NobleValor]

Very nice ending (and it explains literally everything!)

[Midnight Musashy]

Faust, stop pretending your parents are diplomats.

[PaulAsaran]

Well, this was an interesting bit of childish nonsense. The whole 'Defeating Discord' segment doesn't belong at all, but other than that this was a fun little bit of reading.

[BlueYoshi]

Lovely story. The micros were cute and adorable, especially the parts where Luna and Celestia used their imaginations while playing with each other.