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Each week a different story will be written INSPIRED by the new episode. Tags will be used where applicable, but every story will be different. Not every story will necessarily reflect the episode which inspired it, but will be cut from the same fabric, if you will.
A personal writing challenge to myself to spawn more creativity, and more fun stories to share with you guys.
THIS WEEK: Fears are faced, and Lyra has a birthday party.
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THE FUN HAS BEEN DOUBLED!
I will tune in every week~
this will be interesting.
Dis 'gun be good
Could have expanded on how Skygazer was changed, but otherwise interesting and suitably creepy.
5823901 1. I don't know myself 2. I didn't want to ruin it with exposition 3. Some of the creepiest elements are more creepy when left unexplained...
Well...that was horrifying.
...more please.
Extra space.
Extra space.
At least the Pegasi should have an easier time escaping. They will not have to ride the roller coaster for a thrill. If you can haul ass through the sky under your own power, what is the point of rolling around on a rail in a cart?
I got a rather familiar vibe from the creepy smiling ponies.
Once again, you have caught my interest. A possible twenty-four different stories in one? I am there! Count me in.
~KBO.
5823901
One of the best literary devices is "Show Don't Tell."
Isn't it just a little bit creepier, not knowing what they did to him?
5837116 Thaaaaaaaaaaaaaank you!
That ending!
Shenanigans? Tomfoolery? Did I step backwards in time to the 1950's? Why do we not go ape and play backseat bingo? We will be on cloud nine, hepcat. And if some square tries to get fresh with my chick, I will tell him to get bent or he will get a knuckle sandwich.
~KBO.
5853364 Keep that up and I WILL bring in Megan for the Courage story and then blame it on you :p
5853369 I will be good.
5853374
This was hilarious.
And now no matter what Luna does, things will just get worse. If she does visit them to tell them to stop, she confirms that this sort of behavior gets Luna to visit them.
If she doesn't visit them, they'll assume they aren't misbehaving enough and get worse.
Maybe the CMC should try to get their Cutie Marks apprentice themselves to Discord. They seem to be naturally gifted at causing chaos.
5878825 I just added a huge new section because I forgot about Twist, make sure you check that out!
5878831
And Neat Freak is the one who will get the visit from Princess Luna to help him with his OCD.
Are vegetables not like ninety-five percent of a pony's diet?
Sounds like a dirty scary movie.
A really dirty scary movie!
There seems to be a possessive apostrophe missing here.
It seems you hit the enter key instead of the space bar.
Poor Luna is going to become the next Superman.
We got Mooned! We got Mooned! We got Mooned! We got Mooned!
Do you think it is weird or cool that Snails' voice over artist is Inuyasha's? And Allelujah Haptism's. And Ranma's. And several dozen others that I will not really go into for reasons of space and time.
~KBO.
5878851
...that seems fitting, really.
So...what did Gummy pay the geese with?
5905117 HIS SOUUUUUUUL
5905117
One day... Tony is going to call in Gummy's favour. And on that far distant future day, Gummy will supply Tony with a distraction by setting off some of Pinkie's partillary next to Sweet Apple Acres, distracting the farmponies while Tony's geese undertake a daring raid of the grain silo...
For the love of Celestia, please tell me that this is not a Perry the Platypus parody.
Minka?
Perhaps you mean "none"?
I remember doing the time warp. I think you mean "a.m."
Thank you, thank you, thank you, for not doing a Perry the Platypus parody. I cannot thank you enough. I would kiss your feet, but I do not have lips. I lost them to Limp Lip. Keep your meat ice cold.
Gummy Pie: International Man of Mystery.
~KBO.
That is quite ridiculous. On more than one level.
Sickening idiolect aside, "coppers" does not need to be capitalized, unless it is an actual name. Truthfully, I have not gotten that far yet. If it has not become painfully obvious by now, I type these out as I read.
A wild quotation mark appears!
You cannot just put random words together and call it a colloquialism.
Whoa, déjà vu.
Damn, that was harsh.
Funny and cute.
~KBO.
5932458 Literally the only reason I put that colloquialism in there at all was because of you and that video last time, I'm playing Portal 2 in my spare time and wanted to use you as a test subject to see if I could prompt you to link the video again.
You have succeeded spectacularly.
For science.
5932499 That would explain all the wires attached to my head and the machine that goes DING! every few seconds... Although every time it dings I salivate and get hungry. I wonder why?
Hilarious.
Did not hear who? No one spoke in the previous line.
ARF! ARF!
Empty author's note is empty.
Even when there is nothing to write about you find something to write about and make it awesome.
The only story in the also liked sidebar is another one of your stories, Avalon.
~KBO.
What, no Diamond Tiara? She is more evil than Gilda. Well, I guess this proves that Diamond Tiara is the Eric Cartman of Friendship is Magic.
Do you think that that is what happened to Scootaloo's parents? Diamond Tiara tricked a crazy redneck into killing them. Then Diamond Tiara chopped them up into chili and fed them to Scootaloo. Then, after the big reveal, while Scootaloo is sobbing over her parents being dead and having just eaten them, Rainbow Dash comes along to see Scootaloo crying like a little baby and calls her lame. Then after Dash flies away disgusted, Scoots breaks down and cries even more hysterically. Seeing this, Diamond Tiara, with a smug look on her face, saunters over to Scootloo and starts drinking her tears. Taunting Scootaloo all the while. Diamond Tiara is an evil little piece of sh
.
It is "senpai".
That was pretty funny, but Diamond Tiara should have been there too. Though I suppose that it is supposed to be a repentance group, and Diamond is an unrepentant and irredeemable little
twattwit, it would make sense she was not there.~KBO.
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Quite simply? I don't see DT as a villain.
I see her as suffering from 'Pre-teen Princess' Syndrome, and I like to think in a few years she'll grow out of it, and look back saying to herself "Aw, man, I was a douchewaffle to those guys."
5985035 For her sake, I hope you are right. She cannot be as evil as the writers make her.
5985051
"I'll just come back later."
"Why? You can't come in then, either."
Case in point. Being in DTs position, surrounded by other ponies who have their marks already, leads to a sort of... corruption, I think. It's too easy to feel superior.
5985067 I hope that that is all it is. Unfortunately, she most likely not get a redemption episode until after the Cutie Mark Crusaders get their cutie marks. She is their foil, and must stay so until the show runners say otherwise. Though, she may just be taking after her maybe mama, Suri Polomare. If that is the case, hopefully Filthy Rich is a better role model. And a better disciplinarian.
Huh. Wow.
...the Galloping Griffon was an asshole.
Does the Galloping Griffon not know that he can move in three dimensions?
Extra space.
Is the Galloping Griffon supposed to be the Lone Ranger?
The Galloping Griffon had some good advice, but the "dweeb" thing was a little harsh. Though that could just be how all Griffons speak.
It was just a hypothetical based on what was written. If you think it was racist, blame the author.
I have no idea why Twilight is calling everyone racist. This bit sort of got away from me and I forgot the point I was trying to make, so I am just going to end it now.
~KBO.
6037926
What, and leave his faithful steed to be torn apart by timberwolves? Horses that can gallop on a tightrope are absurdly expensive, you know...
6038687 He's right you know
6038687 Griffons have the combined strength of an eagle and a lion. "A powerfully-built griffon" like the Galloping Griffon could carry Silver. (I named his horse Silver.)
6040151
...maybe he had an injured wing? Like Daring Do?
6040237 Or maybe I was a little bit too into my Long Island Iced Tea when I wrote this and forgot griffons could fly... nah, I like the loyalty to his horse thing better. Let's go with that.
Spike just can't catch a break, can he?
Knowing when you are beat is a good thing.
~KBO.
Yeah, because why inform the actual Princesses of Canterlot? They are probably too busy not protecting their city. Useless figureheads. They. Did. NOTHING! during the Bug-Bear attack.
Really? It looks like I am going to have to do this myself. But I must say, I am disappointed the joke was not there.
One of these should be deleted, though I am not sure which one.
Extra space. Also:
"Up from the depths,
Thirty stories high,
Breathing fire,
His head in the sky,
Godzilla! Godzilla! Godzilla!
And Godzuki!"
Save for the lack of a specific joke, this was pretty funny. Poor Spike. He always tries to please everypony, but ends up pleasing nopony.
~KBO.
6115647 You laugh but I literally did put that joke in the first draft, that was the whole reason I had that line in there. But when I reviewed it before publication it wasn't funny at all, it felt... forced and out of place. So I took it out.
Too cute.
Chapter eleven: 5.11 - Face Your Fear - Adventure; No Spoilers:
I have seen enough hentai to know where this is going. Mmmm, giggity.
Hyphen should be an em dash (—).
If you insist.
Kind of a tiny little spoiler, but nothing to revealing. Except Twilight's deepest, darkest fear. The horror. The horror.
~KBO.
Chapter twelve: 5.12 - Party For One - Slice of Life; No Spoilers:
Extra space.
Extra space.
"Hooves".
You should have wore your diarrheaphragm.
These two lines of dialogue are both spoken by Bon Bon, so they should be in the same paragraph.
"She" should not be capitalized.
A wild quotation mark appears!
"Birthday" does not need to be capitalized.
Lyra was so close to a meaningful relationship. "You raised my hopes and dashed them quite expertly, Bon Bon. Bravo!"
~KBO.