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lunabrony


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Fluttershy has always had trouble finding her voice, confident only when surrounded by her animal friends. So of course she's eager to take in a small blue creature she thinks needs her help. But when her newest guest begins destroying everything, Fluttershy may have to find her a voice a little sooner than she expected.

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Two words: Pure genious!

You fucking genius! I haven't even read it, and I'll still favorite it!

626? surely he's not reffering to-.....
oh no....
fave'd

:pinkiegasp: this is brilliant!

Stitch?

...

Similar themes, interested to see where this goes.

So much F***ing yes!

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hey! everyone makes mistakes

SIx two SIx....
no, he cant mean "him".....
:pinkiegasp:
instant faved.

2852453 Dammit that was my reaction!

Comment posted by Reaper 67 deleted Jul 10th, 2013

... A Stitch crossover..?

There aren't enough :rainbowhuh:s in the world.

You need to put a picture of Stitch for the cover pic so more people can read this.
Can't wait for more :pinkiehappy:

2854931 Good idea, but 1. I want the cover images to remain pony centric, and 2... any true Disney fan will know what 626 means the moment they see it. :pinkiehappy:

Looking good. I was looking for this crossover. Fluttershy is the one for the role. I wonder how it will go next and if the other mares will meet Stitch.

2854994 OK then, someone with picture skills should make that immediately.
Still can't wait for next chapter :pinkiehappy:

2855533 You wish, I deliver. Behold!

2855875 Sounds fun. I can't give a full definitive critique right now, but you seem to be doing quite well. I look forward to seeing more.

Okay, so this apparently takes place post "Keep Calm and Flutter On" (In which case Discord shouldn't be being deliberately antagonistic towards Fluttershy, his only friend) and post the end of the Stitch sequence of movies and show (in which case, Stitch shouldn't be anywhere near as destructive. He was only like that at the start of the first movie and during the series.) While a very enjoyable story, the characterization given the scenario feels way off.

2857893 You may be right. I've thought up a way to remedy the Discord situation, and that will be fixed in the next chapter.

Stitch comes from at some point during the first two movies. His presence will be explained, though there might be a bit of a wait for that.

Thank you for your concerns, I hope my solution will satisfy you.

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Between the first two movies? So after being adopted by Lilo but before his molecules are recharged?

2859791 Not sure yet, but that seems most likely. Lilo will not be mentioned. I have a skeletal draft written but we shall see where it goes.

If you have any future concerns please feel free to voice them, and I will do my best to fix them.

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I'll be keeping an eye on this story, so I'll let you know.

I had my own idea for a story like this, except it involved Stitch landing in Equestria instead of Hawaii. Bit busy to get started on it now, though.

Comment posted by lunabrony deleted Jul 13th, 2013

i guess this is after the ending of lilo and stich or after the second movie

2870477 its after the first movie but before the second one

Is Applebloom gonna get her cutie mark?

Wait...Twilight wants APPLE BLOOM to fix the space ship?
Good lord, this keeps getting better and better.

2870831 Unfortunately not, I try to keep things fairly canon, if I messed with the show TOO much everyone would get mad, so I play it safe

I usually never read incomplete stories thats shorter than 10k words, but this was just too good to pass up. its amazing btw.:pinkiehappy:

ensure that the youngster did not run away like she did the LAST time the two of them were out here. really? you made a sunnyside reference -.-... I LOVE IT HAHAHAHAHAHA keep up the good story are we going to have some sad stich moments?

Okay, Pinkie's breaking of the fourth wall was a bit excessive...but it was certainly funny. Also, good explanation for Stitch's destructive behavior.

2875414 I like making Pinkie excessive, she's awesome. And thank you!

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Of course, there's always the possibility that the Galactic Alliance has undercover agents giving them information on planets they haven't officially made contact with, and Pinkie is their agent for her planet. In which case it's not so much breaking the fourth wall (except for the 'Fluttershy's the star' comment) as it is breaking cover...and not so much a hunch as a debriefing from her superiors...

2876171 well I love referencing other material, so Pinkies 'speech' was a reference to something else entirely, but if you don't get it I won't explain it. One day in the future you'll just suddenly be like 'oh THATS what that was!'

Probably should've asked this in the earlier chapter but i didnt think about it till now.
The ship that stich was in, was it the red police spaceship from the first movie or is it jumba's ship?

2876508 Honestly its just a generic red shuttlecraft because red looks awesome on spaceships :p Didn't intend for it to be any specific one

2877903 My knowledge of the origins of the spaceships has faded, I'll go back and watch the first two movies again if I need to. I didn't figure the spaceship would play a particularly centric role here, but if it's that important to you, I'll try to provide a sensible answer!

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It's not really that important, I just wanted to quote one of the best lines in the movie.

"Just a hunch."

I lost my shit, thank you for making my night.

So this is how Stitch wound up in Equestria, huh? Sounds like he somehow triggered a Sonic Rainboom or got caught in the shockwave of one.

And Stitch does it again! Am I the only one to notice every time he gets into space, things go horribly wrong?:facehoof:

MAKE HIM STICK HIS TONGUE UP HIS NOSE........um if you want to that is. :fluttercry:

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