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Martin Fairbridges was trying to get by with a regular life, a job as a night manager at a corner store, trying to find BETTER work, and looking for his destiny. It's true, Martin had always had the sense that he was meant for something greater than where he was currently in his life, but he never could figure out what it was. One day he gets his chance via a strange occurrence after his shift which then lands him in the world of equestria. On a completely different world far from home, he must adapt to the change in the environment, and the changes happening to himself turning him into something far better than a human. Not only must he do this, but he must earn the trust of Equestria and all who reside within this mystical land but he must do so before it falls under the shadow of Phobos, an ancient evil that feeds upon and uses fear itself.

FRIENDS WILL BE MADE, ATTACHMENTS WILL BE FORGED, DARKNESS WILL RISE, A HERO IS BORN!

Chapters (18)
Comments ( 188 )

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Good job. I had fun with it. try breaking up you story into smaller paragraphs thought.

LOL, sorry im trying to find a good formula for spacing

Yes, Martin is truly an insparation to us all. Very nice novel, even though a bit of punctuation is missing and you need to make a new paragraph every time someone speaks. But other than that, this is pretty good. Consider this tracked.

WHO ARE THESE NEW CLOAKED FIGURES, WHY DO THEY KNOW SO MUCH, AND WHAT REFERENCES DID I USE??????

FIND OUT THE ANSWER TO THE FIRST ONE AT THE END!!!!!

The references are up to you :)

... But this will soon come crashing down.

Great story! I can't wait to see how badly the meeting with Celestia goes!

Fairly good story so far, but it's kinda annoying to read a continuous paragraph without any signs of an end. This chapter is just one, big wall of text. Use your enter button!

Otherwise, I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your parts.

He killed that basalisk WITH HIS BARE DAMN HANDS!!!
DAMN TIS IS GETTING GOOD!
But what did Twilight, or any other mysterious source (Discord) do to give him that strength?
I have to say, it didn't go that badly, but it could have been better. Well done Martin, for freaking the F:flutterrage:k out so much that you gained superhuman strength.:rainbowlaugh:

Oh dear. The only human to ever venture into Equestria has turned invisible. Nice going genius!:trollestia: Should have stuck with your hand first to see if you knew how to turn it off.

Also, I must state the obligitory First for the chapter comments in the Royal Cantelot Voice. FIRST!

WTF IS WITH ALL THE NEW PONIES?!
Please explain. Does it have something to do with a new episode or something?

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It's an April Fools joke by Knighty, where he changed all the standard mane 6 names into one that were originally from G1 ponies. Click the 'Toggle G1 mode' at the bottom of the page to deactivate it.

Another reason i dislike april fools day, MY STUFF HAS BEEN MESSED WITH:raritycry:

Um. I don't know if you care, I'm a bit late finding this story but in the paragraph after Pinkie just told him about the party, the one where he finds a Twix. You said he pooped in both earbuds. I'm fairly certain you meant popped. Yeah...

Ahaha lol. Cool story bro !

so his new power is being 20% hotter?:rainbowdetermined2:

Know thy enemy, know yourself!!

Not bad, only one complain.Its almost impossible for them to play trough the fire and the flames without dying from exhaustion. I don't think you've seen the original video and the solo's. If you do you will understand why !

439043 oh trust me, i have, plus they were playing the shorter one not the long ass one thats seven minutes

i really like your story,its pretty good, but the thing i like the most about it is actually just the name of the hero

aaaaaand shit hit the fan

lookin forward to the next installment!:pinkiehappy:

by the way i see what you did there with your name, metal gear awesome win:moustache:

To bad one of her 'looser' friends has enough power to lift several tons with one hand.

Did he just do a Hulk jump.

Being 20% hotter, most useless power ever

Make him turn into the God of Balance
Or maybe the God of War
Or God of Joy?

you had an old spice comercial refrence, a big mac refrence and a matrix refrence all in one chapter... now THAT is cool... dare i say 20% more so? (by Luna's graces that felt corny to type)

Can't wait to see what happens next

dark knight refrence and i belive soul eater? great one this time. still has the amazing feeling and the conclusion is so close it hurts!

KICK HIS ASS!!!:flutterrage:

shits gonna be good :pinkiehappy:

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But I'm used to sappyness, and the story is somewhat solid, so... not bad !

Loving this story. Looking forward to more :heart:

oh I love being his RLB (real life brony) i know whats comeing up next.. and I LOVE IT Brohoof all around! /)

FUS RO DAH!:rainbowlaugh:
lol nice, ill be looking forward to the next story:pinkiehappy:


"Martin responded with the straightest answer he could give, “AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”"

The sheer impact of this disaster....

I've seen chaos today........

It's glorious. :pinkiegasp:




...Whoa, where did that come from? :applejackconfused:

The matrix speech was perfect here

492535 God of War? If thats going to happen then... lets just say it would be awsome:rainbowkiss:

'Back in Black' Applebloom really, Really, REALLY. Seriously man... Talk about unlikely. Well its just a song, mostly harmless. But still I think the most realistic first reaction to that song would be affront. That is unless your putting Trance/Techno/Rock/Metal/Heavy Metal so and so forth into Equestria which I have a really hard time seeing. Most ponies don't need those types of songs to relieve negative emotions with. I mean come on it is a kids cartoon in the end. Of course its one I love and adore.
Welp apart from the song stuff I like the story so far. Just pls, pls, pls, NO HEAVY/DEATH/METAL of any kind.

Also work on your pony vocab. Any Brony knows the ins and outs of it.
no one else is allowed
nopony else is allowed

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