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Kapuchu


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pretty nice story:twilightsmile:
I liked it a lot

O. O I'll buy a cat and become a crazy cat lady.... xD

Oh, I love happy ends :rainbowkiss:

Damn, that was good. A bit short, but I'm used to long reads so there's that.

I like the shipping and backstory, remove the clop and Replace it with romance and I'm sold.

I'm rather impressed.

The plot was well thought of with the clop a nice addition.

I enjoyed this a lot.

~Skeeter The Lurker

You know, with the introduction of Roseluck, I thought that she would be the one to suggest a call girl to Octavia. In any case, this was still a nice story to read. :twilightsmile:

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Doesn't take a lot to impress you, does it? :derpytongue2:

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Should I take that as a yes? :p

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I dunno.

I'm bored without Skype on.

~Skeeter The Lurker

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I dont have Anyas internet save my phone... its annoying.

I like it.

ANOTHER! :flutterrage:

Before her sad(sat?) one of the strongest women she had ever known,...

I liked your story. Short, simple and to the point also there's no regret after finishing reading.:coolphoto: I am interested to know why you decided to write this and reading your author's notes when you say 'my first attempt at a clopfic in the history of ever!' are you implying that there is a never again so this will be your last. Shame if it is. :fluttercry:

A nice balance of plot and clop. Good Job!

Can't wait for your next one.

Had she not been straight, Octavia knew she would have gone for her.

Woah woah woah... I thought she was with Vinyl a year ago in this story? Plus, sex with mares AND stallions, 'straight'? Uh, no, Octavia, you're probably Bi. :duck:

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I wrote this because 3731251 told me about an idea her had where they had a fake break-up but still got together and had hot sex xP It gave me the idea for this one where they had broken up and they only got back together by accident.

And I only said that it was my First. Not my last.

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Octavia is definition bisexual. That "Shell

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That "she" is Roseluck. Not Octavia.

Now I don't comment on a lot of stories but Fucking Hell, that was amazing. Truly one of the best I have read, the storyline and twists (although a little predictable at times) made it extraordinary to read, 10/10 would Clop again.

Damn, dude...

That was awesome. Well done indeed.

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I'm glad you guys liked it :pinkiesmile:
I'm especially happy so receive such positive response seeing as this is my first attempt at a clopfic :twilightsmile:

I love it...SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL:flutterrage::flutterrage:...or another awesome clop:twilightblush:

I agree. Make a sequel! Show us where it goes next!! :flutterrage:

I think you did a good job of mixing a story with senseless sex.

BRAVO! Very well done; liked and faved.

good

THIS HAS BEEN IBP'S MOST CONSTRUCTIVE COMMENT EVER

I love this story. Very good plot:derpyderp1:, of both kinds
OctaviaxVinyl is good
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

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There should be more in the near future.

Check out Skeeter the Lurker's blogs and you'll find out why.

You know, I saw your comment on the newest OctaScratch story, "Octavia's Secret." And I just want to say that when you made that comparison to your own story, "Magical Callgirl", I enjoyed your story a lot more than the other one because it had more depth in its two main characters compared to a simple "confession" story.

I was going to reply your comment in "Octavia's Secret", but I was afraid that I might hurt the author's feelings if I did that. So, I figure that I would share my opinion with you through here.

Anyway, looking back on this makes me want to read "Magical Callgirl" again. Bye!

P.S.
That cover art for "Octavia's Secret" may be pretty sexy, but I think you made a great choice for the cover art you used for this story. Adds an element wonder to the whole story.

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I gotta say I appreciate that you wrote the comment here, rather than replying to the other one. I don't think it would've been fair to the author of that one :unsuresweetie:

But I'm glad that you enjoy my story that much. To think that it was a random idea that just popped up one day and I build upon for a few days before writing it over the course of a week, or so. :twilightsmile:

But, yeah, I try to give my characters a bit of depth. It's more interesting that way. I seem to have a little bit of talent for giving characters with little personality a real personality in my stories. You, in this comment, and one I got on my Clover story where I was complimented on making Celestia seem like a pony, and not just a two-dimensional character... Can't remember the details of the comment (too lazy to look) but I do remember getting some praise for that.

...Turns out I'm not a useless, talentless slug afterall :duck:

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And yes, I do like the cover art :twilightsmile: I just think it fit perfectly when I found it.

Clop is way, way better when it actually has some meaning to it.

Bravo! I quite like this :3

I read this weeks ago and forgot to like, fav, subscribe. :pinkiecrazy:

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Hehe, well thanks :twilightsheepish:

I don't see that subscribe, thouh :duck:

I read it for the plot, and I have to say I liked it quite a bit.

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I'm glad you did :twilightsmile: And the plot was also the main focus here, with the steamy stuff being more of a bonus and way to get the whole conflict over with.

... take no offence now... but the clop scenes were better then most of the other parts. It's not that the other parts were bad, by no means... but that the erotica was SO DAMN GOOD! Excellent pacing, good but limited explanation of scene and action, and full of emotion! This is how erotica should be like people! LEARN!

I say this: I never get turned on by erotica. These kinds of stories (and movies ftm) lost that kind of... charm a long time ago. To me it is art. Erotica to me is the best way to show pure emotions in a mix. Someone who has lost their loved one and try to comfort herself, a man who lost everything he owns and want to lash out his anger, a young man trying to get over his past, a young maiden, nervous and scared during her first time with a man; all these scenarious mixed in with a sensation of lust... this to me is gold. Give me emotions... DROWN ME IN THEM!!!

... I wouldn't mind if you wrote more clop-fic. At least think about it. PLZZZZZZZ?!:pinkiehappy:

great story i hope you decided to continue it

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I'm glad you like it :twilightsmile:

And I am currently writing in a foursome clopfic, but I dunno when it will be out.

4142036 I'll be waiting eagerly! BTW I forgive you for your totally wrong opinions on Homecoming :pinkiecrazy: . Different opinion aside, I can't stay mad at someone with talent for something I love. :derpytongue2:

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Oh! You were that guy.

Hah. Honestly, I didn't even read your comments, only the first lines.

I had gotten a bit tired of discussing it by then, so I didn't really pay attention to you. Sorry 'bout that, but I don't typically like to debate.

4142853 Haha, totally understandable. To be honest I wasn't even mad, I'm just love discussing theories about character behavior and such thing. If you don't like to discuss those sort of things (especially when it's just a fan fic) I can understand that.

Opposite of you I LOOOOVE discussing things to a childish level (especially for things I love... and I do love Homecoming), and I apologize for giving you the wrong impression of me. I just have a lot of free time on my hand right now, so I just try to keep myself entertained... sorry.:pinkiecrazy:

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Heh, no worries.

You, dear author, deserve a cookie!
*Offers cookie*

DUDE, NORDAN YOU ARE SO MUCH LIKE MY AUNT..... YOU TALK TOO MUCH:flutterrage:

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