RarityCatchMe
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Sounds interesting :o I'll wait for it to have a few more chapters and than I'll get into it :) Sorry but I just hate waiting for updates D:
Sounds great so far! Really looking forward to the rest :)
Really enjoying this story. You're a great writer!
How long do you expect for this to go on?
This looks promising. Welcome to the OctaScratch club!
So, Unicorn Magic & Pegasus Wings are still a thing, what about Earth Pony strength? It's often used.
Quite good so far. I like how you tied together the initial scene where Octavia threw back the ring at Vinyl with this. I think what I'm trying to say with that is that I'm glad that you made it a ring she got as a friend, and not an engagement ring or something.
I'm not really sure that those two "last people" that Vinyl invited are friends if one brings drug dealer and the other brings a mob of people with her...
Regardless. It's quite solid so far and shows quite a bit of promise. I wouldn't be surprised if this hits featured in a few hours.
Hmmmm. Not bad so far. Think I'll track and see what happens.
Also, 2780042 lelelelele (The only time I'll ever do that)
~Skeeter The Lurker
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Hmmmm. The bit about respecting the dead (Especially parents) struck a chord with me...
Also, Bowtie.. I like that nickname.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Mmmm..... Coffee... I'm a coffee addict and ever so shocked at Vinyls first impression. Octavia made a good choice with getting her a white mocha.
2780409 Mwa hahaha.
~Skeeter The Lurker
I honestly have no idea where this is going, but the energy and grit of the story is what keeps it interesting. Will favorite and like!
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Called it!
Great story so far. Quirky and entertaining. It's particularly nice to see a Vinyl who has some idea of modesty for once.
Well this story sounds very interesting and I hope it's gonna be continued..
and some new chapters come.. sooner xD I want to read MOAR
Grats on the feature!
Saw all these notifications, was confused for a second, then realized this got featured...
It won't be long before this is finished, I intend to update it quickly. Thanks everyone for the nice comments
EDIT: We're having a huge storm where I am, and a tree fell on some cables that apparently have to do with my Internet connection... so updates will be when my computer has a connection again /on my phone
Woah....how did I even get here man? Still congrats on the feature. Not really too interested in reading mature stories but you got featured for a reason. Might as well give it a chance....famous last words...jk
Liking this so far.
Simply, beautiful.
Very nice and gentle.
*Reads*
2790526 List of things that make a good fan fic:
1. Sex.
2.
This has all my yes
Oh god, the fight they're going to have seems even more terrible by every chapter!
Stupid of me to ask, but there will be chapters after their fight right? :3, Fantastic writing, +1
...Well...
That's one way to get laid I suppose?
Aaand I'm waiting for Tavi's parents to find out that their daughter is gay. That's going to be hilarious.
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Finally I've gotten round to starting this story. Looks really promising, will keep reading.
I play a cello, and now I want an electric one. How much do these things cost? Screw it I have internet.
2791537 Your avatar is the one I use on youtube
Great minds think alike
I guess you've googled it by now, they're pretty reasonable, I thought.
2793423 I looked through a lot of ads for them actually, when I was doing some research on how they're built
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2791962 Yay! You've been around since last year, I'm glad you're still here and enjoying my writing
2791300 Oh snap. I wasn't even gonna touch on that, it didn't come to mind.
2791111 I share this sentiment
The way I write, (it's kind of weird) I start from the middle or end, write out something I want to happen, then flesh out the story as I go. Sometimes I'll have like 3 bits right in the middle that I just gotta fill in the blanks between, but this story just started with that first scene, and working up to it I'm just like... sorry Octavia and Vinyl, I didn't mean it 
Kinda wish you had gome more in depth to the party scene side of the story, but I still love it!
Hands down my favorite fan fic. ever.
2793730 Thank you! And it's not even done yet i.imgur.com/FRK8qfD.gif
This is just as good as Accidental Harmony. Which was my favorite fic ever.
2793676 We'll forgive you as long as there are chapters after it in which they forgive each other
2793676 I know what you mean about how you write stories. It's how I write sometimes as well, I know what I want to happen at the end and how it starts (sometimes) and flesh out the in between parts. Sometimes it works pretty well.
However, this is the first I've seen a story written like this on this site (where they have an end part at the start and work your way up to it). It's a very good read, please don't stop! (for any of your stories actually, they're all really good!)
And so it begins.
LOL, the first two comments are perfect
AMAZING chapter
What can i say...
I Love it!
But it kinda sucks to know that there will be some kind of drama comming up...
(Ps: I love this gunja dude - any chance that he makes another appearance?)
2800818 Glad you like it! I'm going to finish this one before I pick up the others, I've decided, but thanks to my writing in patches, it's actually close to being finished... just gotta touch up certain parts and fill in some gaps. And nice to see someone else who uses that writing style, I don't know of anyone else who does
2802251 Thank you, hope you enjoy the rest
2802290 Not planning on having him show up again... I like him too though. He was gonna be just a nameless guy, but since MLP characters often have names relating to their destinies, decided it'd be funny to name him Ganja... hehe.
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Dude.
You must make more. I love this.
NOW FOR THE REVIEW!
I very much enjoy the way both Octavia and Vinyl are portrayed in this story. the beginning got my attention, and the story has refused to let go. A lot of times, when I put a fic on my to read list after reading the first chapter, it'll sit unread for weeks, months- well, you get the picture. I read the first chapter this morning, went to go do something, then I absolutely HAD to finish.
That rarely happens.
In fact, most of the characters you have used were very engaging. Octavia's parents, Vinyl's.... Grandpa? i didn't quite catch that one. The quartet member that did get lines made me LOLz.
On teh grammarz - your writing is pretty much flawless. I spotted no errors- though if there were any, I was probably too engrossed to notice them.
In conclusion, this is a gem among fanfictions, and this should be on the featured box from now until eternity.
And thus I rate this story a five out of five stars.
This review was brought to you by Humanized Authors Alliance.
Ah, the classic combination of "My parents absolutely smothered me. I couldn't do anything that didn't have their say-so." vs. "Well, at least you had parents." Very interesting to see where this will eventually go...
2828398 Thank you! That was so nice to read
I'm glad this story is so well received, and extra glad you like the characters. When I write, my favorite thing is characterization, and I really like how Vinyl and Octavi turned out, character wise... and the quirky little side ones too. It's great to see others who find them endearing as well 
2831780 Hehe... i.imgur.com/JjZoguv.jpg
Vinyl! I swear if she is doing something by Luna I will tan her hide.. also good chapter its really awesome :)