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Good so far, but what are you going to do with this?
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Thank you!
Also, I'm probably going to write a few more chapters. I'm already writing the second chapter!
Can't wait for the next chapter... teehee
By god!!!! This was just amazing!!!! I made it only half way through band read the rest later!!!! God dam that was a good chapter!!!
Not bad, almost jumped the wagon when Vinyl thought of drugging and raping Octavia in passing but I was able to get back into the story.
Would suggest trying to make smaller paragraphs.
Oh my.
That was the hottest thing I've read in a while.
I gladly bestow unto you my like and fav.
Well since this is a clop fic the pacing feels supringsingly slow.
You could give everything more time notherless. What are they thinking about and how are they reacting to one another?
I'm sure thrilled what will happen in the next chapter though ^^
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I don't want it to be just
shamelessclop. I like a little bit of development between each sexy scene and what not.Thanks for your feedback though ^-^ I'll pick up the pace a little bit next time
I think it's safe to say,
That I've never felt this way.
I think I love you!
(I think I love you!)
I think I love you!
Then what are we so afraid off?
Can't remember the rest of the song, but I love the story and am pleasently surprised it's "incomplete"! Totally thought it was done last chapter.
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I think one more chapter and then one full of clop.
Let it be the shrine of clop!
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Bene (good)!
Also, just saw your profile pic and was able to tell what it actually is. I like it.
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I have a few more like it, but they're more along the lines of clop,
Simply amazing! Not much more I could ask for!
I knew I wouldn't be disappointed in following this... I love the development, and how their feelings just seem to intertwine. Thank you for such a tasteful clop. This next chapter better not take so long, or I'm going to have to send Pinkamena after you. ^,.,^
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No Pinkamena!
I've dealt with her twice! ;-;
Because the Human, Mature, and Sex tags didn't give it away. Anyways, good story!
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Some people don't read tags sometimes, so I just decided to put that there.
And thank you, I'm glad you like it!
Are you sure you meant "Evaluate" at the beginning? Because that's not what that word means. "Elaborate" or "Elucidate" would be a better choice there.
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I left it to my friend to preread this, and they didn't correct anything.
Hmph...better go change that, and scold them >.>
great story, I really enjoyed your work, now I can just see tavi using duct tape to trap vinyl on the subwoofers, and set the tables to go through its sound tests on variable
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Or, she can just threaten her a little more, and be a seductive little tease.
Thank you for the feedback; I aim to please!
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hey what is more fun than seeing scratchie squirming in pleasure while tavi is at the controls.....ok I just saw that with tavi in a lab coat, black gloves and those dark tinted goggles...sexual exspeirmenting with wubs, sorry if I mis-spelled that
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Oh, lovely images, how I love thee.
*Experimenting with wubs seems fun...maybe I should make a fic about that...time to contemplate.
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hehe I leave you too it
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I shall credit you for the idea, then!
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I would be honored
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I will probably start it after this next story I've just begun.
If you'd like, you can PM me, so we aren't spamming the comments of my story cx
10/10 would beg for more.
That was an awesome story, definatly one of my favorites.
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Glad you liked it!
The next one has to do with Appledash; it's also humanized!
IT'S OVER I can't believe it.
absolutely in my favorites folder, if your taking pairing requests. then what about Twilight Sparkle & Princess Celestia! Twilestia FTW!
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Don't be too quick to think, darling.
There may or may not be a bonus, you never know.
Even though it has been a month or so since I've read this, I am going to read it again. This story has romance and clop! Tis a must read for romantic-clopers.
3649435 oh my celestia you're right!!!!squeeeeeeeee!!!,!
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How coot.
3659119 meh
10/10 will tent again.
Oh goodness. I'm glad I found this. I thought I'd read a chapter before sleep, but screw sleep. I'm a sucker for OctaScratch.
Ahh. Playing the instrument. Let the music commence. Fortissimo!
Yes! Justice! I love of when romance is mixed with clop. It's so wonderful.
11/10 will read again; with a perfect score, I wait for more!
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I'm glad you enjoyed it! Sorry for the late reply, I've been sick with a terrible cold
Anyway, thank you for rating the story so highly ^^
4024137 well, what can I say? Octascratch is my potent weakness.
Btw: Get Better!
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You're gonna enjoy the sequel then ^^
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O_O
Yus plz
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c; You gotta wait, just like everyone elsseeee
4025575 s'alright. I got a sequel of my own to finish. Maybe I'll finish before you
Does John Joesco do comics or magna? That be pretty Freakin' Awesome. Okay, now to read your story.
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Currently, I am unsure. I think he just does a tumblr ask blog, and The Lounge atm.
And okay, enjoy the story!
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Okay then.
So I read (most of) it, and I really think it needs more spacing between paragraphs. But other than that, it's pretty good.
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So I've been told.
I'm not gonna fix it in this story (probably cuz I'm way too lazy), but in the sequel, it's been spaced more.