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Kapuchu


A wise man will always fear three things. The storm on the sea, the moon in the night, and the anger of a gentle soul.


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It is a commonly known fact that Clover the Clever suddenly disappeared several thousand years ago, and while numerous historians and other history enthusiasts have attempted to find out what happened to her, and where she disappeared to, no one has ever found out just what happened.

Twilight Sparkle intends to be the one to find out, but how will she react to what is revealed to her?


I want to stress that while this is tagged "adventure" it is not an adventure in the sense that Twilight travels the world or anything, but an adventure in the sense that what she discovers is an adventure in and of itself.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 68 )

Am I missing something? Because both Clover's Disappearance by ColdGoldLazarus and my own story involves Clover the Clever vanishing, is there some trend I'm not aware of?

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I can pretty much guarantee that our stories will not be similar. Also, I have never heard of this ColdGold, nor you for that matter (apologies).

As for it being a trend... I don't think so. I've never seen any stories with Clover in them, actually.

3308843 purely coincidental then, although I'm not surprised you haven't read either, the former is relatively obscure while my own is fairly poor... regardless I shall see where this goes

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Thank you :twilightsmile: I'll be trying to get chapters out fairly regularly. Which, by my standards, is quite rare... I'll do my best, though!

Titania, Jupitaria, and Eponia.... it reminds of something, but I don't know what exactly...:rainbowwild::derpytongue2:

nice prologue ^^ I wonder what's next:raritywink:

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I came up with it on the fly. I caught myself thinking "what did the ponies believe in before Celestia and Luna? Who were their gods?"

Then I kinda just stole from you, again :derpytongue2:

Hmmm.... you have my attention, please continue.:moustache:

Good start. I like the version of the founders and Star Swirl presented here, and would love to see more of this.

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I'm glad you like them :twilightsmile:

I wanted to keep some of the characteristics that we saw in the Hearth's Warming episode, but I also wanted them to be different enough that you could clearly see that they were not the same as the Mane6, eventhough they share some characteristics.

Lots of tense confusion in this chapter. If she looked around the room and held stuff, she shouldn't also grabs and levitates stuff in the same section of text.

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I'll get that looked at. Sorry :twilightsheepish:

Change in tense aside, this is going to be a lot of fun! Looking forward to moar:yay:!

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The tense problems should be fixed now.

And yes, I am well aware that the "blurry-face-stallion" part is in present tense. That's deliberate.

3587470 Ahh, that's much better.

I finally got around to read this...

I'm intrigued to say the least:pinkiesmile:.... I wonder what have you got planned for the next

On a final note, I’ve been working on a spell that my mentor handed me a few days past. He didn’t explain much save that it was a spell of such magnitude that it held the power to alter one’s destiny. Mentor Star Swirl told me that he couldn’t figure out the spell, but that perhaps I could. I do not know if I can live up to his expectations, but I will try.

Hmn, makes me wonder if that is going to be relevant to what happened to Clover, or just a fun red herring.

Interesting idea for the source of Twilight's dream, but I suspect it's also a red herring.

Wow...a Seer...wow:pinkiegasp:
Gotta say I love this so far, keep up the good work!

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The spell Clover writes about is canon.

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I'm glad you like it :twilightsmile: I'll admit to Bendtsen fairly proud of this story myself. Just wait 'till you see what I have in store for you :derpytongue2:

3650396 I know, it's clearly the spell from MMC.

3650577
Indeed it is :pinkiesmile: I just wasn't sure you got that since you called it a red herrin:derpytongue2:

3650602 I meant a red herring in terms of why Clover disappeared.

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Ah, no. Mentioning the spell was just to try and establish the relationship between Clover & Star Swirl a bit more. To show that he trusts her more than anyone else.

Prophet twilight huh?

That was a surprise al right ^^

It's getting interesting!

Eee.. aaaa... oops? I'm the one that edited the previous chapters, and ummm... let's just say that haveing your internet crash or something, and not having the money to fix it for a while sucks... SORRY!

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So that's why you disappeared :derpytongue2: no worries :pinkiesmile:

That's a really neat take on the mechanics of Twilight being a seer, and a pretty decent plan regarding how to prove her discoveries. I really like the idea that Twilight's connection to Magic might express itself like that.

That Hall of memories makes me think a lot of Applejack's Orchard of Dreams:trixieshiftright:.... how odd:rainbowkiss::rainbowlaugh:

Nice little chapter... I hope it gets more interesting soon.

Levelhead
Isn't the name supposed to be Pudinghead?:rainbowhuh:
Princess Platinum
Isn't her name queen Platinum? (Sorry if it seems like I'm nagging, I still enjoy the story greatly so far)

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I recall I wrote that "Puddinghead" was a nickname given to her due to the laid-back attitude that she often adopted among others.

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I was thinking if that to... However, I'm sure the hall of memories was a reference to the hall filled with memories that Twilight and Celestia walked through in magic mystorycure!:trixieshiftright:

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Next chapter will come when I'm done with a 10k oneshot I promised a friend. The chapter is roughly halfway done. (Both the one I promised, and the chapter for this story :derpytongue2:)

:pinkiegasp: and :rainbowkiss: and :twilightoops: and :yay:
tyhat's everything I have to say.

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oh, trust me, I will!:rainbowkiss:

NEXT CHAPTER SOONER!! I MUST FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENED!! I MUST OR I SHALL DIE!! HELP ME!! Please? :fluttercry:

the story you made is one of a kind I look forward to more clause this story has me on the eage of my seat:twilightsmile:

Huh..... it's getting more interesting than before.... I'm intrigued with what actually happened to Clover...

I'm waiting for the final chapter.

Certainly not how I expected it to turn out! Will she go by the name Twilight still?

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She will. As she thought to herself in the end, she is still Twilight.

4570516 4570509 Some can see if has a reincarnation. Her old life 'died' and she was reborn, so she will keep her new name as it is 'her' while still remembering her old life.

Also everyone knows her as Twilight, so easier that way :twilightsmile:

I would never have thought of that! I was thinking that the spell was a spell to make her immortal or to tie her soul to this dimension, but everything exploded and she died but it worked so once her soul had been healed from the explosion, she came back to life. I like yours more!:pinkiehappy: How long 'til the epilogue do you think?

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Actually, she didn't die. She never did :raritywink:

Clover was transported into the future where the spell, as explained, reverted her to being a new-born because it failed. Night Light and Twilight Velvet found her and took her in, adopting her as their own child and named her Twilight Sparkle.

4571438 I know that. I'm not so much of an idiot that I couldn't figure it out. That's just what I thought had happened before you put up this chapter.

not what I thought might happen but super alwsome none the less, please make more:twilightsmile:

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After the epilogue to this story is done, it's off to a TaviScratch with equally big surprises :twilightsmile:

4571540
Ah, sorry. It just felt like you said that you had read it as her being blown up and then somehow healed.

4571571 Not your fault. I phrased it weird.

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