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The Princess Rarity


Quirky teenage girl who writes about cartoons & has an obsession with sparkly things & cute dorks. Goes through life following by Dr. Seuss's wise words; "You have to be odd to be number one."

Comments ( 30 )

first comment! Btw luv the story!
:pinkiehappy:

It's always surprising how lesbian sex can bring someone back from the brink of exhaustion.

3521206 Was it that bad for my first clopfic? :twilightoops:

3521211
It wasn't bad at all. That was more a reaction of surprise about the source of the story...

Well done.... :) very enjoyable read!

This is relevant to my interests...

3521221 too damn good, you gotta give us more.

I don't think I can recall humanized Octavia being black before.

3522121 Y'know, I was kinda hoping someone would notice that!

...and yeah, I wanted to switch it up. Since I'm all for diversity, I decided to go the whole nine yards and not only write a lesbian sexfic, but a mixed race lesbian sexfic. I decided to make Tavi the dark-skinned one 'cause in technicolor horse form, she has the darker coat. Plus, it only makes sense in my mind for Vinyl to be pale, she's always inside the clubs most of the time with the flashing lights and no real sun.

3523123 I noticed the 'dark skin' part, but wasn't sure if you were going for black or Hispanic.

3525720 I suppose you could think of either in your imagination, but I intended her to be black.

3536622 A very unique view, regardless. I don't think I've ever seen her portrayed as anything other than white.

3537855 You're welcome. And a very good job sending me to Pony Hell for liking the story. :twilightblush:

-chuckles- Chocolate Tavi

Do. Another. This. Was. Kick. Ass!:pinkiehappy:

It's always good to try something new. Great story btw (:

...I don't think I'll be doing this again for a while

Why not? It got a little awkward in some of the descriptions but otherwise it was decent.

3522121 wait, black? I swear I saw "copper" as a descriptor. That suggests Native American or Mediterranean.

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she was in Vinyl's grasp, looking right into those playful and sparkling magenta eyes, their skins contrasting - pale as the moon, dark and rich as chocolate - and expressions opposite - a smirk and a scowl.

Wooot Blacktavia.

Needless to say I love this.

Aww.
I love the idea of shower sex. I also love black Octavia. This definitely gets a thumbs up.

*makes 500 @ccounts and thumbs up this story with them all*

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