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Journeyman


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I regret nothing.

Sweet Jesus... it's a good thing I got baptized last week. :rainbowwild:

Very well written! There were no glaring mistakes in this piece, which is a positive thing. I loved all the description!

I was looking forward to reading this, but unfortunately I don't like F/F ships/clop. I'll upvote it anyways, because Rarity.

You know, I always saw Rarity as being someone fated to be unlucky in romance. Like her status and refined grace will invariably attract the wrong kind of attention. The good ones will be scared off; the nasty ones will try to get close.

This story pretty much plays that out; her most meaningful romance involves the exchange of money. As much passion and love as there is, Aloe and Rarity are not equals here.

It's... sad. :fluttershysad:

Really liked the story, though.

And you have nothing to regret. Congrats on losing your clopfic virginity. :trollestia:

Definitely an interesting take on Rarity's social and romantic life.
Honestly its been a while since I've read a story that was both saucy and melancholic. Ace work there Journeyman :yay:

Clad in her usual saddlebags, fuzzy boots, and a matching scarf and cloak, she trod down Ponyville Main and turned after her fourth right. She knew he topographic layout well enough to navigate Ponyville in her sleep.

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Well done, darling. :raritywink:

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I think I might have one or two more Rarity clops lodged in my black heart. One's going to send me straight to hell do not collect $200, but the other is hetero. This clop thing is weird and new to me. I think I can make it work

Any suggestions? :rainbowwild:

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Yeah, the baptism water really lubes up the path to hell. I already found that out.

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That's my general headcanon as well. I truly adore Rarity and despite the uncomfortable nature of this fanfic, I did everything I could to show my favorite pony her due respect. Au revoir, My Lady.

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The praise is appreciated. If you're the one who spammed my story into group folders, thanks! I got about another half dozen favorites from that.

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Alas, it was fun while it lasted. Time to move onto other projects, but I could conjure up another if I possibly had time. I have two on the backburner pegged at a later date.

3712936 Spammed implies they did not belong there. I only added you to groups and categories that applied.

3712936 I'd like to make a couple, if I may. Your narrative seems to suggest that Rarity has been with Rainbow, at least. That might be interesting. I am also a fiend for Raripie and Flarity. Raripie in particular seems to fit this Rarity, since Pinkie would gravitate towards a friend who struck her as being lonely to cheer them up.

Oh dear god, you did it. :rainbowlaugh:

No regrets.

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The thought is appreciated no matter the cause.

I'd say I had a fairly good turnout for my first clop. I'm a fairly slow writer, but providing I have a decent idea, I think I can pump these out easily enough. This took a week, but it was a good training exercise. I have a shorter one in my head that should be easy to make, but it's going to be a little more controversial due to content, even by clop standards. I could probably knock it out in 3,000 words. It wouldn't be quite as sensual as this one... ah, hell, I'll make it.

As for creating an in-story pocket universe, that makes me a little uneasy. I normally make my one-shots open-ended to provide openings for more stories, but this one I closed up just about all of them. I really don't know what I could do that wouldn't retread old territory. I wouldn't mind making a continuation of this, but I really don't know how.

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Yup. Popped my clop cherry, as Softy put it. Indeed it hurt a little at first, but seeing all the favorites pile up, it feels really good.:yay:

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I realize I didn't quite answer everything. :twilightsheepish: I like to talk a little more than I should.

If you want to make one of your own, I'm more than willing to support it.

Comment posted by Steel Resolve deleted Aug 27th, 2017

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I know! It blew my mind as well. I even got the blessing and a blog promotion by TittySparkles, and she's one of the veterans. Apparently I am awesome at this. That's not a feeling I'm used to.:rainbowderp: My niche is horror, not romance and sex.

I guess the only thing left to do is figure out what clop to write next.

3714617 Suddenly, YOU'RE the famous one, in Rarity's shoes.

... Prostitute?

I am quite impressed!

I truly enjoyed this.

Then again, with such a team to lend a hand, how could you have gone wrong in the first place?

~Skeeter The Lurker

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If there is a way to mess up, I'm sure I'll find it.


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I have one or two planned. One involves Rainbow Dash, the other involves Sweetie Belle. It's just that my well of clop creativity is so dry. I can't think of any good stories.

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Please.

What I just read disproves that.

~Skeeter The Lurker

I want to hear more about 'rainbow dashes blind fu*king' :rainbowhuh:

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Ah, I see. I didn't intend for that line to be interpreted that way. What I meant to say she enjoyed sex for sex's own sake. However, that may be just the idea I needed for a sequel.

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Change my emoticon to a :raritywink:

Aloe only hummed contently and continued to nuzzle. A spot near the small of Rarity’s back was was uncomfortably warm with the heat stemming from Aloe’s own folds.

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the other involves Sweetie Belle.

Did I just read that correctly :rainbowderp:

You're considering making a clop fic with Rarity and Sweetie Belle, with thingss? :duck:

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Although Rarity is in it, the two don't deepen the bonds of sisterhood with naughty fun time. I'm not sure I'm quite up to doing something that risque so soon. This is my first clop, after all. Let's take it slow.

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Let's take it slow.

That's what she said!
Sorry, I coudn't resist. I haven't read this yet but I'll try to get to it when I'm back Sunday.

--Sollace

no regrets

3711456 You realize your going to hell for reading smut right? I will too, I'm mormon, but i can't help myself, its just too fucking GooooooD!!!

3711456 You realize your going to hell for reading smut right? I will too, I'm mormon, but i can't help myself, its just too fucking GooooooD!!!

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Save a seat for me by the fire.

3752771 Will do, oh and better hurry, i hear satan is doing campfire songs tonight. Cant wait! :pinkiehappy:

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NO RAGRETS!
Even if it's one letter mistake tattooed on your body forever

3752771
Lovely story. Please make more.

What does GOC stand for?

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I frankly I have idea what you are talking about. Global Occult Coalition

Aww, that shit was sweeter than Pinkie Pie running Willy Wonka's chocolate factory full blast...
My teeth are nothing but rot now.

But for reals, that was nice, and I liked how this went.

Nicely done!

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LOL!
I SEE WAT U DID THAR
//giggles madly

Aww, that shit was sweeter than Pinkie Pie running Willy Wonka's chocolate factory full blast...
My teeth are nothing but rot now.

But for reals, that was nice, and I liked how this went.

Nicely done!

4808208
LOL!
I SEE WAT U DID THAR
//giggles madly

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