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The Story Man


I'm posting some of my stories from the /fb/ general on /mlp/ and I'll be writing some other stuff from time to time.

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Thanks!

Ugh... 2nd Person Sonata sex, but I don't have a dick. 2nd Person Sonata sex, but I don't have a dick.

Why must you forsake me Stan?!

7.5/10 - I fapped

What no sonata!!!!!!!!!!:raritycry:

The giggity is strong with this story.:trollestia:

How should I feel about this?

Thumbs up and favorited even though it's missing Sonata sexy times.

Good story, keep up the good work.

5321679 I'd rather not cause it'd probably just erupt into an argument.

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Well I'd rather know and not agree than not know at all.
If you don't want to discuss it, that's fine, but at least give a reason why you dislike it.

re: your blog post about this: it's because the title doesn't mention Sonata.

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Surely Sonata isn't the only good Dazzling.
Aria and Adagio are good too, right?

5326187 Nah, Sonata's pretty much the only one any cares about.

:derpytongue2:

Or I might just be talking about me...

...Well, given the quality of your past work ("Yanking Your Chain" is fucking AMAZING) I'm definitely going to read this one when I sober up a little bit. Have you crossposted this one at all? Like, to the subreddits and whatnot?

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Well, I posted it to the /fb/ thread on /mlp/.
I also have it on a paste bin, which is here

That pastebin also features a few of my personal things, and some stories I've not converted or posted here.

5326231
I don't go to those places.

Title is shite, story is alright

All in all 7.8/10 Too much pokermans memes.

I am going to avoid reading this, as, if I were to do so, it would cause a time paradox, which in turn would destroy the universe.

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Perhaps it would makes sense, if you imagined it as a porno you starred in after Aria got you drunk?

this was fucking GREAT!! im always happy to see anon x pony (or humanized pony) content writtenf or women, but this is defnately one of the better ones out there. u really improved a ton since last time, it feels so much more sensual and authentically female, taking its time but also going all out once things r properly heated, theres interest in beauty beyond just the go-to parts for guys, theres dialogue and emotional connection (as much as apropriate for evil girls lol).....great stuff

since u were interested in specific feedback last time ill give a little more stuff uc oudl work on in the future. first altho ur describing everyones actions very well and its very sexy to read, u coudl use more description of what anon is feeling with those actions. i mean ur describing pleasurable stimulus but not really describing that were feeling the pleasure its intended to give, if u get what im saying. its good to know when were hitting climax but most of the time our level of excitement and pleasure is vague. also, more clit attention for the peak moments of sexual pleasure. only a small percentt of women r built to regularly achieve orgasm from vaginal stimulus. im one of those lucky few (im overall pretty easyily excited and pleased so im not even a very good example, it is not unusal for me to get off on even less then that) so this is all good w/me but most womens best, most intense, most frequent, most reliable path to climax is their clit, vaginal stimulus is just a bonus. a very very very fun bonus if ur doing it right, but not the main event.

but anyway while theres room for improvement 2 make this really feel authentic to female audience its still a huge huge step up from ur twilight tale story,a nd that was already a good clop fic. i love this and i love that its about adagio and aria who i dont even really care for but u made them very sexy and lets face it theres not a lot about them so it was fun and new, really just overall i loved this great job i really really rly rly rly hope u do more of these in the fture

5324795 *Shrugs* Cause it won't turn out well for either of us like I said.

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I understand the complaint about the clit rubbing, but I tried to keep things varied when it comes to actions. I've been told a lot that I repeat a lot of words or phrases in this fic, so I fear that if I focused on one body part even more that it would cause that to be an even bigger problem.

That issue really comes from the fact it's a threesome with girls, so the body parts are bound to get repeated a bit. Not really a fair excuse, but it's all I got. I'll try to fix it in my next stories.

So, thanks for the feedback.

I'm currently working on a Anon x Gilda story right now, but I was thinking of writing something not in 3rd person again. I've written in it before (in a FlutterDash fic from a few months ago), but I haven't touched it since. The FlutterDash fic was mostly a one shot I did by request for a picture which showed Fluttertits was the more popular phrase than Rainboob Dash.

Anyway, if you or anyone has an idea of a ship that would work and hasn't been done very much I'd love to hear it.

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well since u ask lol, if ur looking for anon x mare fics i love zecora and she hasnt been done very much, also in general mrs cake is attractive in a fullbodied way and and her getting it on with any female besides pinkie pie is pretty much unheard of. as for specific ships, lets see, uncommon but woudl work, well i have always liked the ship of applejack x cherry jubilee and it hasnt been done all that much really

The way the step or bend,

I think you mean 'they' for the second 'the'.

Happy Holidays. Happy-soon-to-be-New Year. Have fun.

Heh, this was funny.

5518564
Glad you gave it a read.

Very nicely done, quite enjoyable~ Now if only I wasn't too lazy I'd do a voiced reading of this ;3

5621132
Well, it is quite lengthy. No lewd pun intended.

But still, thanks for reading it, even if you don't do a reading of it the comment is appreciated.

5621540
Sure thing! ^^ I'll be checking out some of your other fics as well!

5621636
A Twilight Tale is also fem-anon with Twilight, but it is a little more focused on the romantic angle.

Thank you Story Man good to see I'm not the only person who likes Adagio and Aria too.:twilightsmile:

5705860
I did try and go against the beaten path with this one and avoid using Sonata. I also felt like doing a group thing and thought that a foursome would be unwieldy to write.
Glad to hear you like the story, hope you read more.

5339561

Dont feel sorry about that. Many women [and me] describe a clitoral orgasm as an intense, short and sharp which is how most of the orgasms in this story sound. During sex the clitoris becomes hyper sensitive, and any touch feels irritating, if you rub it for while during sex, you get a female orgasm.

6802832
It took you 10 months to reply to that?

6803985

I never thought about replying to it untill now.

6804004
And what changed your mind?

Hey man! Nice story! I did a voiced reading of this, hope you don't mind! ^^

7473265
Not a problem with it at all, hope you enjoyed reading it!

7473846 Haha well felt like trying it out, thought you might appreciate one thats not read by a guy XD not that there's anything wrong with that, just it's nice to have accurate voices for once, eh?

7473909
I'd probably wager this made the fic a lot more appealing to people than about 90% of the other VAs that have done my stuff.
Very nice work, by the way.

7474100 Glad you like it :) Keep up the great work man.

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