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It was supposed to be a simple task: drop Cerberus off at the Gates of Tartarus, the prison doors for Equestria's greatest and most terrible monsters. Little did Twilight know it was host to an entirely different prison: the SCP Foundation.

Twilight is enthralled with the sheer amount of knowledge and power the Foundation contains. They are likewise willing to bring her on board. After all, who can stop a black ops facility that doesn't officially exist?

Celestia, if she has any say in the matter, and she promised there would be hell to pay if the Foundation harmed her student.

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Definite reading later.

Yes, I waited for this long, it finally arrived!

Edit: sorry for the spoilers, guys! I know, I'm a douchebag and I should die blah blah blah!

Ooooh, can't wait to find out what'll happen to Twilight. And the Slenderpony? An SCP? Makes total sense.

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It might be a bit before I update. No negative feedback or downvotes just yet, but the Fimfiction response has amounted to a resounding "Meh".

I might release another dossier or chapter in a few days to gauge responses, but save for those who were already following me or in the Foundation group, I got a shockingly apathetic response.

2319026 I know what you mean. I'm surprised this hasn't gotten more views, I mean, at the end get's featured pretty much every update. This should have gotten more views, it's great!

Did you copy-paste from Google Documents? Because I think I see a comment at the end of this chapter :applejackunsure:.

Hmmmm, I like this idea for an SCP, it fits in My little pony pretty well

These chapters are interesting and all, but I'm here for a story, not reports.:ajbemused: If you need to dedicate an entire chapter for a report, could you keep the pace at one report for one story chapter?

In other news, I totally agree with Chessboard_Jack in that this SCP fits in perfectly with the universe.:twilightsmile:

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Forgot about that one. Fixed.

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True, but I counter that there will be no SCP universe without the reports. I don't do these reports merely because I feel like it; some of these reports are important to the plot. And considering I have seven chapters, but only two of those are reports, I believe I have a little leeway to work with.

But we'll be back and discover what's up with Salizar and Sylar next chapter.

2318677Not really. Slenderman/mane wouldn't allow itself to be capture so easily. Unless....it's toying with them?:rainbowderp:

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Yes, it is a monster they can't photograph, can penetrate their defenses with ease, can't see without going insane, can't isolate in any way, can't restrain, can't track, and can't control. Surely they have it right where they want it.:trollestia:

2328680 That's exactly what I was thinking.

Who is Ned? I can't remember if it's a nickname for an SCP.

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You'll find out eventually. :pinkiehappy:

I'm not using the "normal" SCP universe. No Old Man, no Site-19, no Unkillable Lizard, and no Bright/Clef/Gears/Kondraki

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Oh, which part? Celestia's promise to hand the Foundation an assbeating, the O5 decision, their amoral stance, or the fact that Salizar may be a raving lunatic?:trollestia:

2342745 I will treat that as rhetorical.:raritywink:

Heehehehehee. I love how manipulative Salizar is, I think we may have found our antagonist. :pinkiehappy:

Can't Tom the Rock be an SCP? That would be able to explain his seemingly unlimited SWAG. :duck:

Sweet book mate, Do the elements of harmony count as a eulicid or safe level scp?

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They would be safe. They are completely inert, unless they are needed. Save for when they are being used by the Mane Six, they carry no other extraordinary properties.

Dr. Salizar was reprimanded for imprinting a total of eight hours of pornography into Dr. Grayfeather’s mind via SCP-118

Dr. Salizar is the greatest researcher at the Foundation for this reason alone XD

I am a big fan of the "Safe" class objects in the SCP universe, with SCP-653 being my personal favorite.
The main reason is because they tend to be the most imaginative of all the classes. I suppose that's one of the main draws of the SCP universe, each object class offers a variety of platforms from which one can expand upon their ideas.

Definitely digging this story so far, can't wait to see how it progresses :ajsmug:

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I'm really not a funny person, but i had to chuckle at coming up with that idea. If you had an object which transferred memories, what you would do?

Porn. Lots of porn.

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I know the fandom has a lot of material involving TOM, but I don't know enough of it to create a reliable SCP document.

However, i wouldn't be opposed to fans reading this story to creating their own documents and sending them to me. If they are up to Foundation par, I wouldn't mind including them in the story and giving you a writer's credit.

My favorite SCP is SCP-294, the coffee machine with a keyboard that can produce a liquid of whatever substance is typed in; it cannot produce nonexistant fluids (I.e. Thomas Jefforson's blood), or inherently solid objects incapable of being in a liquid state without thereby being a different substance, (i.e. diamond because it would just be liquid carbon), but is capable of making liquids of various abstract concepts (music for instance).
What I want to know is what would occur if one typed in "A cup of irony". :trollestia:

2362615 Please, get out, it's 294!

2363558 Welp. Edited it, you're right; I was reading a few other SCPs at the time and derped.
BRAIN Y U NO PERFECT :raritycry:

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My personal favorite is SCP-914. I love that clockwork machine. There's just so much potential for cool stuff.

On another thought, would you guys like to see a commentary for this story? I haven't made one yet.

2371781 I don't really watch commentaries, maybe the others do?

2371781 That could be neat, but I think most people would rather see more chapters. You could always leave a comment or author's note to the same effect. If it helps you with your work, though, by all means go ahead! :twilightsmile:

Next chapter, we meet back up with Twilight and see how she takes meeting a MTF. After that, we get to take a look at Site-16's first keter...

Sweet if O5 is interested in her its never a good thing.

I'm very anxious to know what is going to happen.

This won't end well.
Awesome chapter! :yay:

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More like you replaced Bright and them with different ponies who are fairly similar (or could be)

Still going to have fun reading this.

Damn he sounds like he has Dr manhatten sydrome, but yeah all these documents and stories started to make me wonder a bit.

Haha, I think I speak for all us fans of yours when I say:
We appreciate all the effort you put into your stories. It really shows. We are happy to wait if it means more of your stuff. (And IMO, these documents are really awesome too:twilightsmile:)

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I don't fault you for it. You did your job, and I am grateful for your work. I'd rather have a coherent story that has the proper puzzle pieces in place than something that "kinda" works. It was my fault.

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I have a couple more dossiers written, along with a good dozen or so in development. I had a lot of fun while they lasted. Someday I will come back. Someday...

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Unless Gears, Clef, Kondraki, and Bright are magical talking ponies, this is not the same Foundation as the creepypasta lore and awesome website. I'm making my own SCPs as I go.

Lobotomizing Cerby? Isn't that a bit too far? Even Discord was just stoned...

2328680 Sounds more like he (it?) isn't captured, just lured into staying within a certain region

2328690 Given unlimited resources, i'm sure would be able to come up with some ways of tracking it relatively easily...

One of the first tests i would do would be to scan a filled page without anyone seeing it, and then seeing if an image of a page still works as the original, and if the original page blanks when the copy does....

3037770You have my attention. :moustache: This seems to be more interesting than other SCP crossovers that Iv'e read.

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