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I used to question the MLP FiM show, but one episode and I got hooked on it. See my Fanfiction account ChaosMagemon for more than just MLP fics. Joined the Herd Nov 5, 2011



Spike has just started his first year at Canterlot High where his older sister Twilight and her friends attend. With a new school and new friends to make, will this outcast survive his first year or be overwhelmed by the high school world. Humanized.

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Comments ( 121 )

Is this a SpikeXVinyl ship? You don't see these two together that often.

Okay, this is a new twist. I like the idea of him being in a Hip Hop club. Maybe have Spike confess to Rarity but she said she's not interested and decides to give Vinyl a chance.

Plot twist: Puck is bisexual/gay.

Okay, I'm really starting to like this version of Spike.

Comment posted by Witty Joke deleted Aug 23rd, 2018

Don't deny it Spike. Their are others out there besides Rarity. Go to them Spike, go to them.

Awesome Parkour scene great job with it

Great chapter keep up the good work :pinkiehappy:

Lemme go get some crackers...

Thx for the new chapter and merry Christmas :twilightsmile:

-Sly Moon-

I actually like the entirety of this fic in general,
Even though I was kinda liking some SpikeDash in there,
I still like the story overall,
Also, loved the Christmas-themed chapter, very sentimental and all,
Merry Xmas, and Happy holidays

Spike gets all chicks and puck gets Porn :yay:

I likes dis so much O3o! ees good version of spike and gewd plot so far, and I enjoy the subtle hints of the other girls liking him, especially dash, cuz I for whatever reason like spikexdash xD!

Happy New Year (even though its a few days away)!
Also hahaha Spike gets all the ladies.
10/10 Spikestaches

SPIKE GETS ALL THE LADIES, (excluding/including Twilight)
I'm gunna call it now,
10 bucks says that Spike'll end up with Dash,

Have a Happy New year! :pinkiehappy:

You know you had an awesome guys night when you wake up in the tube with just you pants and shoes on.:moustache:

If you wake up with anything else missing besides shoes, then your guys night out ended weird. And I can't wait to find out what is on the camera. Kinda hope that it leaves a Hangover impression with wanting to see what actually happened that night.


GUYS NIGHT...................................................


this story is a pretty nice read :3, but I am still baffled on the comparisons of height, body types, etc on the others? Is spike shorter than the girls? same height? is he like one of those freshman who could easily pass for a sophomore or junior because he is one of those lucky guys who got tall really fast and such? not realyl complaining I am just REALLY confused on this, also what are the age differences? 2 years? 3 years? different age spans for different characters? (because as we all know fluttershy is a year older than pinkie ;3) I am just really confused how to imagine them inmy head D: I like teh visual descriptions that help paint the picture for me.

3788742 Spike's a year younger than the girls because he's a freshman and they're sophomores. So he's 14-15, and the girls are about 16. In terms of height his head about reaches their shoulders

3789303 K I like the story but try being a teeeeeny bit more descriptive in what other look like and such, like height, body shape, etc. x3

Stuff is about to happen, and I am gunna enjoy the chizz out of it,
(P.S: Way to keep the fic PG, Very, Very Subtlely,

Awesome chapter just like the others keep it up! 20/10

Puck's gonna steal his card, isn't he? Sad face

Nice touch with Neira. A reference to your other story right? I still hoped that she and Spike ended up together.

SO LOVEY-DOVEY AND SWEET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(fake coughs and tries to personify a real man)

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooo o. It is going too fast. But all the se good, I wonder where this is headed (maniacal laughing)

Awesome chapter... but there all awesome chapters but this one takes the cake.


Adorable, great, and a +5 modifier to SpikeJack
10/10, Happy Hearts and Hooves Day!!!!!

You get a lot of point for managing to sneak in some AppleSpike.

Omg I love that song lol I have calm down

Awesome chapter great job could you write some more like this?


I have a feeling that luna and celestia will stop this just a prediction mind you lol

That is interesting it is nice to see that end interesting with a happy ending. I want to see it get interesting relationship wise. Like have Dash admit she likes Spike and kiss him (in front of Rarity or not) then Spike can struggle who it is he "truly" likes lol. But no matter what you do I am happy to see a update for this great story and can't wait for the next one.

Sooooo awestasticxtrememazing, I can't even describe its supremeness!!


Once again Spike proven himself to be a force to be reckon with.

4054203 dude, your name should be thehyperpinkiedeluxe13, 'cuz 'ya sound a whole lot like 'er

lol, you have a good point there!!!

This was a good chapter to set up for a major event. But is it bad that I kinda want some conflict between the characters in this. I mean I want a moment where Spike sees Dash leave the party and finds her crying "crying I KNOW!!!" He talks to her and she confides that her date didn't show, or that no one wanted to go out because of how she is or something. Then he comforts her telling how great she is and all the ways. Then she kisses him, confessing she has started to get feelings for him (then you can have Rarity walk out and see or overhear it or not) Just giving Spike another female would create so much drama. Even more then he really start to think how great Dash is, and sees her in a new light as well. :rainbowkiss::heart::moustache::heart::duck:
Anyway can't wait to see what happens next.

honestly at this point everything jsut goes....way too well for spike...we need more conflicts! and perhaps the conflicts don't resolve themselves so easily? I kinda agree with DragonPony's idea with creating drama and what not.

If you dont make DragonPonys idea into reality, Im gunna be mighty dissappointed....

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