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Mariacheat-Brony


Hey there, Mariacheat-Brony here, Belgian Brony writer. Favorite Ponies : Vinyl Scratch & Applejack \OCTASCRATCH FOR THE WIN/

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This story is a sequel to An Apple Scratch toward the World.


(Humanized) After their decisive actions during Chrysalis' Invasion of Canterlot, Princess Celestia gives to Vinyl and her 'sister' Applejack an other Mission. One they would have hope it never befalls to them. (or So they first thought)


Cover masterly done by BillieW

Apple Scratch Saga:
1: Apple Scratch toward the world
2: A summer at the farm
3: Onward to the Equestria games
Bonus/World Building : Tales of Apple Scratch

Chapters (25)
Comments ( 412 )

This better be good, for my two favorite ponies are in here..
EDIT: YES! YES! YES!

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Patience my fellow shipper, Patience:pinkiehappy:

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Holy .... A BISON VID AS COMMENT:raritystarry:
Glad you enjoyed it (I invite you to read Apple Scratch toward the world, I might reference a few things from it in this story, but it's not essential):twilightsmile:

And so it continues. to this I say... Yush:yay:

Good read, can't wait for more, and I am looking forward to what you make of the Romance! :ajsmug: :rainbowwild:

Well well well, first Rarity, now Twilight, Fluttershy, and Rainbow too. Applejack's physique seems to have quite an effect on people. Is this going to be a recurring theme? Not that I'm complaining.:ajsmug:

Pinkie + party cannon + confined spaces = :twilightoops:

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Well for one of the girls most likely (AJ's got it :ajsmug:) I have a few ideas already
for the others I might do it again, if I can think of good situations
I had just re-read Applejack Anonymous before I wrote the chapter so I felt like writing something like that:twilightsmile:

"It's weird." Twilight said. "we shouldn't have arrived a long time ago."

Should either be "should" or "shouldn't we have".

Your quality has really picked up.

"You had a with the delivery?" Octavia slowly asked.

I think you should see the problem.

Great chapter. Can't wait for your next update. This story is coming along great. The way you did the 6 is amazing. Just... mind blown. Can't wait 'til the feels start a flowin'.

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Both corrected :twilightsheepish:

The way you did the 6 is amazing. Just... mind blown.

Really:pinkiesad2:?
Anyway glad you like both stories :ajsmug:

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a Third part ? you mean an Apple Scratch 3 ?
Maybe.. But I gotta to finish the the summer at the farm first.:pinkiehappy:

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damn it what gave you the hint ???(oh yeah my user page and my profile pic :twilightsheepish:)

Don't worry about mister Rich. I do have the intention to not make a jerk out of him.

Yay. Now for Vinyl to have that talk with Octavia (because she said she would when they got home). Great chapter man. I was happy to see this had updated when I woke up. Can't wait for more. Keep it up.

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Damn it how in the hay do you all guess what I'm writing? :rainbowwild:
Glad you liked, I seriously thought I had messed up the discussion between AJ and Vinyl

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Because I am psychic. And you mentioned it last chapter. Mostly the first thing though.

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Wooooh A Psychic:pinkiecrazy: Can I be your apprentice?

oh yeah I did that:twilightblush:

This was a great chapter! I really like how fast and good thies chapters are coming out. keep it up:twilightsmile:

Now keess (Vinyl and Octavia of course)! Great chapter. Wan't expecting a double update today. Got off Dead Space 3 and saw this updated AGAIN. I was happy. Thank you for making me happy.:pinkiehappy:

Vinyl had took the Octavia, Rarity and Pinkie Pie...

Should be had taken.

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hehe! not now for the kiss, sorry :raritywink:
Glad you are happy, I aim to please

'Nuther great chapter dude. Now for the Vinyl and Octavia side of the late morning. (DO IT!!) Can't wait for your next update. These things are coming quick. Takes away from my necromorph killin' time... it is worth it.

very nice good sir, i was thinking the same thing rainbow was at first

"Maybe you can tell me on the way how hot exactly AJ was?"

they coudlnt even fool pinkie into thinking they were looking at something else other then a sexy applejack. so much for lying she no idiot. so everyone is in love with AJ this isnt going to end well i can smell a bitch fight a mile away over her.:rainbowlaugh:

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No they're not all in love with AJ :rainbowwild:
They just share a genuine curiosity concerning the healthy body of our Favorite farmer:pinkiehappy:

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Oh i see that's much different now i will read on some more i am liking this story.:twilightsmile:

While listening to that guitar and cello duet, I thought of another, just as beautiful song.

I have seen better behavior on a toothless alligator

GUMMY!!!

Great chapter man. Another one that updated while I was out of the house. I love how this is coming along. Can't wait for more.

'Nother great chapter man. It was sweet.

If you feel you need to do a time jump, go right ahead. I think do the next morning and Vinyl and AJ going to town, then maybe jump to when Mr. Rich gets back. Up to you though. Can't wait for whatever you do.

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That's pretty much what I had planned:raritywink:
After all Vinyl did promise Octavia :pinkiehappy:
thanks for commenting so much by the way (I really appreciate it :pinkiehappy:)

(ps: can't wait for a new paradiso chapter )

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Should have it done by Wednesday most likely. Glad your looking forward to it.

No prob. I like letting the author know I think they did great (or could have done better), let them know at least one person enjoyed their story. I often point out mistakes as I read (so they can fix them, not to be a dick), but I haven't been in the mood for that lately. I have been doing A LOT of editing lately.

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DANG IT! I wanted to see some action, again. Maybe my sister is right, I do like violence :ajsmug:

This story needs some action, and explosions. everything is better with explosions :pinkiehappy:

A double update?? And at a time I don't have any time to read??:fluttershysad: *sigh* Will read in a bit.

"Why must it be always us who ends up situations like that?" Rainbow grumbled as she slowly backed away.

"Why must it always be us who end up in situations like this?" Rainbow grumbled as she slowly backed away.

Don't know about you, but I think the purple one makes more sense.

2189238 Would you like me to tell you the rest of the errors that my inner grammar Nazi is ranting about:trixieshiftright:

2189303
why not,
that's what the comment section is for. Right ?

Indeed, just let me look through it again, I shall probably be done in about a half hour, maybe less:pinkiesmile:

how the hell are there no comments yet? i figured everypony would be on this like a bear on honey.

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