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TigerSwirl448


Howdy fellow readers and writers. My name is Tiger; I'm a storyteller and I want to write epic stories no one has ever written before.

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Apple Bloom, Applejack and Vinyl discovered an ancient chest that was filled with old photos and books. Until they discovered something that made their minds flip, they found an old photograph of two women that looked strikingly similar to Applejack and Vinyl. What could this mean? The sisters opened an old dairy to find out.

Join the Wild West adventures of two young women, Annabelle “Annie” Apple and Melody Liker as they journey to the hard wild frontier town of Frontier City to stake a claim of gold and become legends. Melody only wanted the women, the gold, and the riches that she could never get at home. But Annie just wanted a new place to make a farm and be herself. But of course fate has different plans for these two women.

Can they achieve their dreams? Can they find love in this new place? Will Melody’s past come back to bite them both in the tail? What will Vinyl and Applejack learn after reading the story of these two women? Jump in and find out.


My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic (c) Hasbro & Lauren Faust
Apple Scratch Verse (c) Mariacheat-Brony.
Now this story is considered canon to the Apple Scratch Verse Series.

Chapters (25)
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Comments ( 218 )

pretty good prologue. Can't wait for the first chapter:twilightsmile: I hope it gets published soon:raritywink:

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Yeah, just need to finish editing it first. :twilightblush: Glad you liked it.

I'll give it a watch as well. It might be an interesting take as they learn the history of their ancestors.

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Thanks :twilightsmile: I hope you and everyone else enjoy the story I cooked up.

Pretty good so far, can't wait to see more. It'll be awesome to see how you do a true Midwestern Equestria.

I'm watching this like a vampire fruit bat on a giant apple. So far I love it! Duhhh Of course I love it! Its got the two best sisters ever! Awesome Job!

As in... Taste Of An Apple?

Pretty sweet so far, going to be interesting seeing Annie's reaction to whatever Melody is hiding.

3747158 Oh yes, it will be interesting. Glad you like it.


3748605 Thanks. :twilightsmile:

3756359 since I can't find good cowgirl pics of AJ or Vinyl, I had to improvice. So I saw the pic on deviant art and thought it fit well for the story I'm writing. Also it's cool!

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A nice AJ cowgirl... I can think of two..(A)..(B). but Vinyl in a western outfit... Yeah good luck with that:twilightblush:

3756661 in the beginning I was thinking of using image B but then I decided to try something less sexy you know? I know that's something people like but I guess I was looking for a rugged cowboy look like in the old pictures and such. But yeah seeing vinyl in western wear is unheard of.

I found this and i started to read it, and then i realized "this isn't the first...." :facehoof: Haha, whelp, looks like i have some reading to do *reading intensifies*

3762286 The Apple Scratch verse is a cool series. You got some reading to do but it's all good stories. You'll like them. :twilightsmile:

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Thanks haha, it looks really good, but i was like "Titanian, wut?":rainbowhuh: anyways, readin' time!

Nice concept for the weapons introduction:raritywink:

Now, just have to wait for the first carriage attack, Yeehaw!!!:ajsmug:

3775783 Thanks, I watched a video on how to load a ball into a revolver and try to go by that video.
As for the attack, that might not be for a little while. I have a special plan for their first use of firearms.

Wow this story is great keep up the great work:pinkiehappy:

3831437 Thank ya kindly.:ajsmug: There will be more coming soon.:twilightsmile:

Nice chapter overall

I spotted a mistake that I couldn't let pass :p It's Titania, not Titian :rainbowwild::raritywink:

other than that, keep going:twilightsmile:

3841643 automatic spell check. :facehoof: I'll get that detail fixed later. Can't fix it with my iPhone. :twilightblush:

Edit: fixed it.

Over all, a really cool chapter...

.... I don't know why but I get the feeling that Diamond Belle will try to make Annie work for her :p
I might be wrong, but it'd be pretty cool :)

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Glad you like it. :twilightsmile:

Hmm, you just gave me an idea, a funny one in fact. :pinkiehappy:

This story is SO AWESOME :rainbowkiss: keep up the great work:pinkiehappy:

3901496 I was kinda thinking that too...hmmmmm

3904014 :pinkiehappy: Thank you. Glad you are enjoying it.

.... Melody sure needs to get laid.:facehoof:
.... And Annie needs to go all Apple Badass mode like her great-great-great-great-gan niece is used to :derpytongue2:

Oh, well, I hope it'll happen on Dust or Skytalon.:pinkiecrazy:.. That or going all bestial like with the brothel hen mother :raritystarry:

I'll just have to wait and see ^^

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Melody and Annie will grow over time and not to worry I have a big Apple Scratch silly action scene coming up. Soon. Still planning it though.

Annie will become as cool as her decedent. And Melody, well lets just say .... stuff ... stuff happens. Yeah. bad and good.:facehoof:

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You said it! That's exactly how it should be!:pinkiehappy:
Oh, Idea! That mean Griffin sherif, what if she is the ancestor of that mean Grifien, Gilda, that compete in the Equestria Games for Cloudsdale in Apple Schratch : Onward to the Equestria Games ! :trixieshiftright:

3943632 this story is based in the past, so every character has an ancestor related to them in some way in this story. And yes, Yelena Skytalon is an ancestor to Gilda.

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Yay! :yay: one Apple Schratch nerd point to me!

al principio tenia mis dudas al leer este finc pero es tiene una forma de meterne en la historia que hace que esperes el proximo gran historia y me encanto que ace cuide de tinker :applejackunsure:

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Me allegro de que estás disfrutando hasta ahora. :twilightsmile:

(I used Bing translator to write that, so if it was horribly written I'm sorry. :facehoof:)

We'll I liked what you did with the characters in this chapter:pinkiehappy: keep up the great work:yay: still need to se RD, Twilight and flutter shy ancestors ... My guess is that RDs ancestors is one or the hired guns :rainbowdetermined2:

3960344 Glad you like it.:twilightsmile:

Actually Twilight's ancestor had already popped up. And RD's ancestor, He'll make a cameo appearance in the next chapter. I have an interesting idea for him. As for Fluttershy ... still planning on her ancestor though.:unsuresweetie: But I might have an idea for her in a future chapter.

Well, that's more like it ^^:twilightsmile:

Loved the embarrassed Annie bit.... I hope she and Diamond will interact with one another quickly enough:twilightsmile:
Velvet, girl go for the blonde deputy!:raritystarry: He's a nice dude... and he's got hat along with a star on his chest:pinkiehappy:
:derpytongue2:

Just so that you know, I changed the stories folders on the Apple Scratch Verse group.

Congratulations, this story has been moved to the Canon Side Stories folder:raritywink::rainbowkiss:

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I knew after you made the suggestion about Diamond and Annie a while ago, this popped up.:pinkiehappy: Don't worry there will be more Diamond and Annie action later on. As for Velvet, I have a planned chapter for her with a touch of Kicker in it.

Glad you like it.:twilightsmile:

grandioso tienes una forma de describir las situaciones que haces que parece que a los personajes los conocieras por muchos años atras y no porque sean los antepasados de nuestras protagonistas tienen su propio encanto

Oh I didn't catch the lightning dust ancestor nice:yay:

Keep up the great work :pinkiehappy: loving the story can't wait for more:yay:

Haven't you forgotten a ancestor?:raritywink:
Feel stupid that it took me so long time to understand who Velvet was ancestor too!

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Congratulations, Tiger! You're awesome!:yay:

3968885 I know there a two more. Still planning how to introduce them and what role they will play. That's alright with Velvet. I tried to connect her as Twilight by introducing Ace Kicker.:facehoof: I guess that didn't work.

D'awww :twilightblush: Thanks. Now I must write Chapter 7. :rainbowdetermined2:

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