Hey there, Mariacheat-Brony here, Belgian Brony writer. Favorite Ponies : Vinyl Scratch & Applejack \OCTASCRATCH FOR THE WIN/
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Ponies wanted Celestia away, because in their minds, she wasn't able to protect them anymore. They forced her to give up the Sun to the Unicorns, taking away most of her powers, and then they threw her out of Canterlot.
Now, a year later, they called her back to Canterlot. Why? What could they possibly want from her?
One shot AU in which the first two seasons happened, but without the presence of the Mane 6 (First attempt at real Pony Fic)...
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Pony fic? By Mariacheat? Madness!
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Don't get used to it
It was so hard! I kept writing hands or feet whenever I had to write hooves
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I will accept that if you write a sexy scene between Vinyl and Tavi in GTVS. At least a kissy scene?
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To have your answer you'll have to wait until Halloween night
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You tease.
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Make them Fu- have fun with each other until they are senseless!
This is awesome! I like it very much
for me you got the personality of princess celestia really well, finally a good read from browsing the latest stories!
my only regret is that I can't make pony emoticons using my phone
3402328 now the really funny thing is that I'm doing the same thing but with all hooves and muzzles and things. I have to remind myself that we aren't ponies and that I shouldn't be using the pony version of things to either speak, write or think of things.
This pony story is ok, always a mind trip when you start thinking 'what if (insert here) didn't/did happen'. Odd that Celestia had the elements in her the whole time
but hey, whatever works for your story. 
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They weren't in her per say, but they were still connected to her... The connexion with Luna gone thanks to Nightmare moon, the elements couldn't be used by Celestia alone, but they couldn't be passed to new bearers because Celestia was still connected to them a bit.... or something like that... I don't know if it makes sense
Very well written. Very sad!
This...this...
This almost made me cry. I /never/ cry. Never.
But I almost did, reading this.
I tip my hat to you, for this story is written beautifully and truthfully. Tragic but true, a wonderful story that truly touches the the heart.
3402425 so long as it had made sense when you first wrote it (or at some point really, whatever works)
This is quite an interesting story you've made for yourself. I'm not sure what led you to create your first Pony Fic, but just like all of your previous stories, it's beautifully well-done!
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Glad you liked it
Man, this is like, good. I do however, still enjoy your comedic fics a little more. The way you write hadn't exactly been too serious and slow to fully capture the emotions in a fic like this. But emotions WERE captured and lines were beautifully crafted.
Best Gold Line
Best Silver Line
Ihavebeenwaitingforsolong:3
Best Bronze Lines
^ That last one hit the spot. And what in the world is cornflower blue O.O
Well, other for those nice lines, this fic has the potential to draw more tears. Slow the pace down a little more and you'll get dem liquid pwide flowing out ;)
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:link
Well, it's a shade of blue, and a flower
Glad you liked it... I'm not sure I'll work on it to make it more tearful though
... It was just something on my mind that I had come clean with
Great. What's next, three eyed crows?
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Not what I had in mind when I wrote it, but it could work
so if celestia was stripped of her powers and couldn't raise or lower the moon and sun anymore, what happens to luna? does she just stay as nightmare moon or does she turn back into her previous form and die of old age on the moon? or lack of oxygen...
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Luna is still in her nightmare moon form, sealed somewhere in the north.... It's up to the next generation to deal with her
I wanted to ask, cause this has been at the back of my head since I saw the title of the chapter... Did you took some inspiration in the TV show called Kaamelot ?
'cause the whole speech of Celestia during the council kinda reminded me of it, so I wonder...
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I watched Arthur's speech recently, and I don't know why but I totally saw Celestia saying it
Then the chapter appeared in my head
In all honesty, yeah
Good job on getting that reference
3406882 by the looks of what I had read so far, this had taken place before Twilight Sparkle was involved. and i know for a fact that is what this is.
I feel sad for Celestia.
But I feel happy for Sunset.
Also, Storm is a jerk.
Cool ending anyway.
Now here's my real question. Since this is an alternate universe...
What happened to the Mane 6? Are their histories still the same or are they different? Since Twilight isn't Celestia's student, where is she? Does Spike exist? Is Pinkie Pie still a rock farmer? Is Applejack a business mare? Has Rarity changed at all (I think she never changes)? Is Rainbow Dash awesome? Is Fluttershy still Fluttershy, or is she Flutterbitch? Do I look good with a tuxedo?
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Sorry for the really late reply...
Now, I didn't talk explicitly about the mane 6 to leave that to imagination of the reader.
Personnaly, at first I saw it has the mane 6 simply being born quite a few years later than canon. Thus the sonic rain boom at the end of is simply Dashie doing it as a filly... only years later than canon...
But It can also be viewed as The Elements reactivating themselves in Castle Everfree thus creating that explosions of colors in the sky while they wait for bearers to come... Maybe the Mane 6, maybe the Background 6.... Or a bunch of Ponies never heard off before. The possibilities are endless
SEQUEL!..... Oh wait. You don't write ponies. It'll never happen. XD
how does the crystal empire fit into this if this only the first two season occurred in this universe?
THIS STORY IS SO SAD (SOB) WHY WON'T THE TEARS STOPKNFGSLJGNLSGNSNGL
If Luna ever comes back she is probably gonna be pissed off. Or is going to be a broken mare. Either way she wouldn't handle Celestias death well.
This was an interesting read but it just doesn't feel right. If they didn't want her around why still address her as Princess, or even Highness.
Also I really don't see why they brought her here, it didn't really show besides a few questions that didn't seem a big enough reason to bring someone who failed them back to the council. It felt like a story that was designed to bring Celestia back to Sunset to die.
I really enjoyed reading it and it does bring up a few interesting questions regarding Celestias failures but it just didn't feel believable.
I feel this would have been better if Celestia was involved more in the council meeting (IE: She was a critical part of the meeting) or if the council was a small part of the second part of this fic (After Celestia collapses).
Still a good read, and made me feel for Celestia.
A hero is not defined by strength of wing, horn, or hoof, but by the Faith, Hope, and Love of the heart.
Thank you for reminding us of that.
Beautiful short story!!!!
I'm surprised though the council didn't have a Qilin in it, but oh well.
Awww, that was the second story that almost made me cry.
It hurts how good it was, and I loved the calm demeanor you provided. No where was there panic in your writing, your sentences were calm and collected just like Celestia.
Sequel!
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One day, maybe
Wasn't Celestia born as alicorn?
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well, that hasn't been explicitly stated on the show, but to be safe, that's why there's the tag : "alternative universe"
When i read this I realized that if my tear ducts still worked then I would have cried. I loved the concept of the story though.
I do believe that was Rainbow Dash doing the Sonic Rainboom. So 5 of the Mane 6, set. Twilight on the other hoof...
I need a sequel plleaaassseee I beg of you chief
In this fic, if Sunset never left I feel like she deserves to be an Alicorn, especially since shes now the leader of the council. It would be nice to see Sunset and cadance assuming leadership roles. Plus It really makes me sad that Celestia died and left those two, especially for Sunset as Celestia was essentially her mom.